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Mage Revenge Pt 01

Mage Revenge Pt 01

by crosfyre
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Thanks to :

AD&D for a world of spells & magic

Jack Vance, "Eyes of the Overworld" for being a source of inspiration for TSR & myself

Synopsis :

Set in an alternate reality, fantasy world. Alysa Ascanius, an Arch Mage whose parents were tortured & killed when she was a 12 year old child enacts revenge against the perpetrators decades later

Tags : FLR, femdom, loving wives, cuck, feminisation, fantasy, magic, combat

It's starts off slow but events cascade soon enough. Skipping chapters wont be useful, so reading sequentially from chapter 1 is recommended

There are no STD's in this fantasy world.

The present...

"Alwyn sir, we are only an hour from the outer gate. I suggest a quick clean and change of attire to look our best," my assistant consul, Jonus advised me. My formal title was consul but after weeks together on the journey we addressed each other casually. I was not so precious as to insist on formality and honorifics on the road. Only the legionaries always addressed me as such. My three lovers used my name in bed and called me consul in more formal circumstances.

"Indeed, we should call a halt soon as we do need to present as well as possible," I agreed. "Ready our papers."

"Centurion, find a suitable place to camp for an initial clean up overnight out of sight of the road. We will prepare our full regalia, ceremonial robes and battle armour for when we are closer to the gate, perhaps at a tavern close to the city."

"Yes consul." He saluted in formal acknowledgment with a sharp diagonal closed fist strike across his chest followed by a horizontal arm extended salute as was standard Monagon military protocol.

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The picturesque sight of Synessia, the capital city of Cantra with it's meandering blue river that provided fresh water for the city. The river widened as it turned into an estuary and a large bay and fed into the sea adjacent to the castle. The crowded environs of the castle and bustling city was welcome after a journey of many leagues and weeks of travel across the continent by horseback. Gulls wheeled in the sky above the docks and fields full of livestock surrounding the city. The large port with the imperial navy and many merchant ships moored at the piers in the sheltered bay was a hive of activity. At our distance from the city we could see the whole of the capital and it's towering tiered central castle.

My retinue of advisors, merchants and soldiers had finally ridden into sight of our destination as we crested yet another hill. The banner of Monagon proudly displayed above the arms of our signifer. Our trade delegation from Monagon was here to negotiate mining and trade agreements and to resume and open a consulate that had been closed for 20 years. I was playing the role of an eligible bachelor son of a baron related to the corridors of power and a distant relation to the king. I would also be using the ruse being an eligible bachelor and possibly marrying into a noble family whilst in Cantra to help cement relations between the two states. The restoration of trade was important to both states hoping for a cessation of frosty relations that had lasted decades.

The imperial road leading to Synessia was full of traffic going both ways, to and from the city. A variety of smaller roads and paths led off to large farms and suburbs. The three large fortified walls at increasing distance surrounding the city each with one major manned gate were our immediate destinations. Horses, palanquins, foot traffic, livestock and a wide variety of foot traffic filled the width of the major highway we were on. As we were obviously an important party all on horseback and well armed with a platoon of legionnaires, everyone made way for us and kept well clear. Our speed was limited by our four wagons pulled by a team of four horses each with our supplies required for the trip.

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My state, Monagon, was a large modern empire with a powerful army of legions augmented by a mage school and battlemages. Our current king's father and his before him, had built a strong foundation based on a diverse resource and financial base - farming, mining, exploration, land and maritime trade, science and magic. Our science academy and large library was the envy of all and were continually researching and refining new discoveries and technologies. Our mage school was the only one on the continent and we kept its secrets close.

Unusually for a monarchy, he had created a meritocracy where skills and intelligence mattered more than heritage and family. His son, the prince and now king had learnt well from his father and our empire was one the two most powerful on the continent. Trade delegations were constantly travelling to our surrounding city states to negotiate deals hopefully for the benefit of every party. Negotiations reinforced and influenced by the might of our legions integrated with battlemages. And if negotiations failed we were not averse to conquer by force of arms. Kingdoms were better off under our rule.

We had proved to be invincible in battle for over generations with our mages giving our legions an edge that no other army could match. While many states called up their citizens to fight only when needed, we had a standing professional cadre of soldiers and battlemages augmented with reserves with every citizen serving two years in the military upon reaching the age of majority. As such, the skill, power and experience of our legions was unmatched. Few dared try. As our empire was wealthy we could afford to have standing armies.

Unlike Cantra, whose liege was the ultimate authority who all owed fealty to, our king (or queen) ruled a council of powerful, nobles, land owners, patrons, merchants and advisers who had major influence over policy and decision making. Heads of the nobility, the king's hand, barons from each major land holding, land & sea merchant guilds, the mage college, the army maester and navy admiral, the treasury and more all had places on the king's council ensuring a diverse background and was better able to cater for the interests of all. Monagon was unusually a secular society in a continent dominated by religious led, ruled and influenced states. The Magistra had confided in the archmages that she expected our great state to move away from a monarchy within a generation or three and be ruled by the council. Empowering women effectively doubled the power of our state. Women in leadership roles were to be found at every level and position in our state. No doubt influenced by the fact that the vast majority of mages were women who were the most potent, talented and dangerous individuals of all professions.

Cantra's clergy in the other most powerful nation state on the opposite end of the continent were also very strong. Their religious were the major power base of their empire. Magic use was regarded as heresy. Their bishops and cardinals, knightly schools, templars and paladins wielded a limited theological based "magic" as we in Monagon would term it. Their clergy would deem their powers to be driven from the beneficence of their gods. Our mage scholars knew that it was simply manipulation of mana : a resource like iron, argentum or water. Their hypocrisy was not lost on me. Their use and understanding of magic was primitive compared to ours and limited as they were by theological constructs around the use of mana.

My parents in the last delegation 20 years ago had run afoul of a rabidly anti-magical patriarchal bishop. I had no small amount of enmity towards this man who had tortured and killed my parents under the banner of Cantra's witch and magic inquisition. I was barely secreted out by my parent's spies and allies at the age of twelve to escape back to Monagon. The battle with the two other arch mages in our delegation to reach and get me and our delegation to safety was the stuff of legend. The debacle soured relations between the continents two major powers until now when we will be the first delegation and potentially consulate since.

The killing of my parents terminated our mission, squashed all negotiations instantly and almost resulted in a war. My mother was 2nd in command of the mage college and a very high ranking official in our nation. The mages had a very long memory... as did I. Skirmishing battle mages in their full fury and legionaries evacuating me and the rest of our delegation laid waste to all opposition. Their paladins and templars were as stickwood to the fire and might of our mages and weapons of our legionnaires.

My mother had been poisoned, silenced and bound prior to her capture, interrogation, torture and ultimately death. My father's orders in extremis as he was dragged away were to get me and everyone possible to safety by any means. That day the Cantrans learnt a very hard lesson of the capabilities of arch battlemages and a squad of legionnaires supporting them. Senior officers are taught in war college about force multipliers and the ability to apply local superiority to break through lines and fortified positions. Mages were the ultimate force multiplier.

The bishop had planned my mother's capture carefully and the majority of our party were on a guided tour away from my parents and almost fell to the ambush to disable and capture them as well. As our resistance coalesced and every member raced to the castle as a single united force, I felt my parent's spirits passing as my soul bound link to them dissipated. I screamed and fainted as it happened and was carried away by a legionnaire as they evacuated from the castle, the arch mages leading the way.

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They cleared our escape path with fireballs and chain lightning with the legionnaires supporting and defending the flanks and rear. With a complete inability to close and fight us, the Cantran soldiers backed off to reduce their losses. Once we were in the open outside the castle proper, they fired arrows, dropped boiling water and acid on us from their battlements but prismatic spheres protected us against all attacks. Once out of range of projectiles, the mages cast an area effect invisibilty spell on the party and we quietly escaped, unseen and out of phase with the rest of the world. The legend of Minnerv, one of the battlemages, began that day. Once on appropriated horses, we galloped away leaving all our belongings behind. I missed all of our evacuation and only woke that night as we hid in a grove of trees some distance from the city. The mages and legionnaires were completely exhausted and depleted and would need to rest overnight to recuperate.

Pursuit was desultory and disorganised as we had killed so many of their leaders and soldiers in our escape. Unfortunately the bishop had survived. No doubt any remaining soldiers would be reluctant to attack us except their radical paladins and templars. In any event although the journey home was long and difficult, a party with two Monagon arch battlemages with a young Minnerv and a contingent of veteran legionnaires was more than equal to the task.

Only the difficulty of conducting a major campaign across the continent prevented a full scale war. We had seven fully manned legions available to be launched in revenge once the debacle and treachery of the Cantran's was discovered. We would need to retain three legions to remain to defend our state. The two returning mages and the military commander briefed the then king and council. They deliberated for days and ultimately decided that a campaign would be too costly in lives and resources. There would be little doubt of the eventual outcome as our assessment of the Cantran military was that they would fare no better than anyone else our legions had come up against. We would take the slow route and gradually come to rule the whole continent, spreading our culture, science, magic, secular ideology and equality of the sexes.

As a talented novice magic user with an immense natural talent for mana manipulation, I had flown through the ranks of initiate, disciple, adept and mage upon my return home. I was a fourth generation mage and my parents had been very wealthy and powerful. The estate I inherited easily supported me and I had good advice from my extended family in all matters. The king was very helpful also due to the circumstances of my parent's death. Being so talented I was sponsored and assisted with powerful patrons through mage school. I like to think I earned my ranks by hard work and talent

Most recently, my rapid ascendancy through the hierarchy peaked as I become one of the youngest ever arch mages. Certainly my desire to rise through the ranks of the mage college was fuelled by my secret plans for revenge. Being a powerful archmage would enable me to further my schemes on the bishop who was now prime cardinal and head of the religious of Contra. My personal grievances were secret from the mage college and the ruler of Monagon. I kept my schemes close to my heart. I hoped to evade war between the two empires but revenge was my primary motive and if war eventuated - then so be it.

Our spies regularly reported on events in Cantra and apparently they had tripled their numbers of paladins specialising in theological based magic and more specifically combat against mages. They started a new combat unit called of battlepriests seemingly after our battlemages. Their inability to deal with our mages was no doubt a shock to their clergy and military. A mistake they would try to remedy. However a full squad of twenty battlemages in a legion of over 5,000 would be an enemy much harder to combat. They couldn't handle two mages and 60 legionnaires. We were perhaps fortunate that Minnerv, our premier arch battlemage had been in Cantra but regardless of her presence or absence the outcome would have been similar. As a precaution we put spies into their paladin & battlepriest colleges to learn their tactics and ways to counter this specialist unit.

The current king of Monagon was sympathetic to my plight and the tragedy of my parents. We were of similar ages and had been friends throughout our youth. His father had made the incorrect and unfortunate assumption that a trade delegation and consular officials even if headed by my mother, an archmage, would be exempt from the Cantran clergy's law against magic and would have protected status and immunity. Even though Contra had been advised that the delegate head was a magic user and Monagon had been assured that would not be an issue. Two problems - my mother was both a woman in charge of men and a mage. All difficult, and as it turned out, impossible for the Contran clergy and their ruler to reconcile against their preconceived and strongly held beliefs of male superiority.

Cantra was strongly patriarchal and women were second class citizens with no agency. According to their ideology, men should be in charge and women should be submissive to them in every way. As we found when we arrived in Cantra, education of women was strictly limited to domestic matters. They had no power in society or marriage and were reduced to submissive chattels serving their husband and master and birthing children. My mother railed against their institutions in private and wanted to sponsor a women's foundation which of course gained no traction in Contra and likely caused further friction with their king and clergy. Women in Monagon were of equal status to men.

I was actually my parent's daughter and was currently under a permanent polymorph spell to appear as Alwyn, a man with a carefully crafted back story. My delegation were all of the belief that I was a man as that is the way I had been presented to them to maintain complete secrecy of my true identity. I had demonstrated no use of magic and they were also of the belief that I was a mundane like them. I had no magic "apparently" in my temporary male persona and would be acceptable as the head of our trade delegation to Contra. Their still rabid antipathy to magic and magic users made it impossible to send a mage or a female. As my female birth details and identity would be known in Cantra I couldn't go using my real female self. My escape and the devastation the arch mages caused with their exodus from the castle was a severe embarrassment to the bishop and the Cantran nobility.

Cantran men were in every position of power. My impact and influence in Contra as a woman would be severely compromised and a man was the only possible choice of senior delegate as we were now aware. Men were of course on average larger and stronger than women. Magic, however, was the great equaliser and women were more talented and powerful than men in the weirding ways of magic. Nine of ten mages and arch mages were women and the Magistra of the academy was invariably female and the most powerful archmage. The most powerful male mage had only a third of the power of the most powerful female mage. Mundane women did serve in the army and navy but mainly in support roles. Female battle mages more than made up for their small numbers in the immense power we could weld as potent casters of battle magic. Even the combat champion of a legion was trivial for a mage to defeat in seconds. Fireballs, lightning or frost strikes could decimate any man. Magical ability was quite rare though and we were only a few percent of the total population. Major conflicts in the past between mages and mundanes had taught Monagon painful lessons that we were best working together.

Vivid memories of my mother was that she was very much a feminine force of nature and would brook no attempts to belittle, ignore or subjugate her. She was the absolute head of our household but still had a loving relationship with my father and was well liked by our staff and servants. She was in hindsight a bad choice for head of the delegation and bad blood started from their initial meetings as the Contrans attempted to ignore my mother. She, in turn, left them with no doubt that she was in charge which riled the Cantran patriarchy no matter how diplomatic and accommodating my mother was. Which they regarded as weakness and evidence that any woman was ill suited to leadership. Unfortunately as Cantra was so far away from Monagon and at that time we knew little about them as they were so far away. We hadn't comprehended the extent of the absolute dominance of men in their patriarchal society. Especially as our society was balanced with both sexes sharing control of everything according to the capabilities of each person, male or female. Our two societies were complete opposites.

Unfortunately for our king, I was the local expert on everything Cantra and one of the only people who had actually lived there for even a short period and young enough to be in their prime. We had been building a spy network slowly in recent years and learning more about their society & culture. And as one of the most powerful and youngest ever to ascend to the high status of an arch mage, I was a reluctant but by far the best choice available to the king. The archmage council strongly advocated me too. With our long friendship he believed my entreaties that I would not exact any revenge if chosen to lead the delegation. I would of course take expert advice from my merchant colleagues in matters of trade and finance. I had been given the sternest warnings to adhere to the king's policies and to negotiate a good outcome for Monagon. All of which I would ignore if I could exact my burning desire for revenge. I had loved my parents and especially my mother dearly and my heart was broken for years after their demise. Now in the fullness of my power we will see what we will see of my long awaited, cold revenge.

There were strict rules against the use of charm, command and enthrall spells against mundanes who had no defences against magic or even to detect such use. The position of king's mage was to invoke a powerful geas on the magic user in that position to be loyal to the ruler and state. They were there not only to advise on the ways and use of magic but to detect magic use and arcane influence against the court. The ability to be a truth sayer and detect lies from anyone was an advantage that only the king's mage had. The Magistra, the grand arch mage was the leader of the mage college and an independent person on the ruling council advising the king and setting the laws of the land. Running the mage college was a full time role.

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