Writer's note: to anyone who follows me, I thank you for the loyal support. It's been an incredible time writing all of these stories so far, and I hope to continue doing so. I just think it's time to take a bit of a break. Maybe the well will fill up again in the future. Khazal will be back, as I don't think I have adequately explored her potential.
I always read your comments, and try my best to reply. Even the criticisms are always welcome, because I can't become a better writer without them. If you just want to call me names, I'll take it.
I think we're all fortunate to have a forum like this to explore our deep thoughts. My predilection for science fiction led me here, to explore the world where some shy chemistry student can break free of her mundane existence to become the unlikely hero of a barbarian planet. Hopefully I have been doing the females justice, and making them feel like real people, and not just my sexual playthings.
I think reading about strong characters makes the sexual moments that more enticing, and they don't get much stronger than what you find on Bok--a matriarchal warrior-class dustball, struggling to pull itself out of its infancy and move beyond its decimation at alien hands. They proved themselves time and again, and I want to be just like them.
Thanks so much for reading. It means a great deal to me, and I think you're all striving to get the best from your entertainment. I salute you all for letting your imaginations still be tickled with the printed word, instead of some crass video full of bad actors.
So, I'm not quitting--just resting the pen for a bit. Take care of yourselves, and each other.
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On the
Parallax Vista
, Jinji was despondent over losing her best friend. "It destroyed her! I let it kill her!"
"Silence, Jinji!" Venus took Jinji by the shoulders. "That device did not scorch the chair, and the energy output was not strong enough to disintegrate Khazal. We cannot assume that she was destroyed."
"We will find her," Delia promised. "We will be back in Boccan space within one day. Surely there will be resources back on Bok that can help us track her down. Perhaps the device took her back to Bok!"
Jinji pondered this. "I suppose the origin of the artifact was on Bok." She relaxed, and Venus let go of her. "I just do not know how to explain to her mother that we lost her daughter."
Back at the asteroid, protected by the five goddesses, Khazal was continuing her training. She was in her
theosdan
form, glowing white and surging with power. She sat on the temple floor cross-legged across from Arquis, the green goddess of sacrifice. Her green body glowed as well as she focused her energy on meditation. She was attempting to teach Khazal how to expand her horizons and communicate with the universe.
Khazal broke concentration and stood up. "Grrr! This is hopeless," she groused. She got back down on one knee in front of Arquis. "Goddess, what shall I do? I feel as if I cannot abandon my poor mother, but the opportunities here are too great to pass up. What do you recommend?"
Arquis only smiled and raised her hand up. She then made her hand flutter down, then crossed her arms over her ample chest.
Khazal rolled her eyes, then tried to communicate via telepathy.
"Arquis--please. I seek your guidance."
Arquis only put a hand over her heart and tilted a head to the side. Khazal got to her feet and turned, folding her arms. "I am so confused. I have been here for fifty days, and I have not gotten closer to a decision." She balled up her fists, then shot out energy bolts toward the back room.
Arquis got to her feet and put a gentle hand on Khazal's shoulder. Khazal stopped her firing, then put a hand on Arquis's. "I apologize. Perhaps I am being too emotional."
Arquis led Khazal to the back room, where the artifact was being contained. When they entered, the other goddesses were in there. The artifact was glowing and rotating.
"Khazal," Oola said. "Please, you should see. We are summoning the other
theosdan
. She should be here."
"Her mind is still being obfuscated, but we have detected a starship coming at us at high velocity," Melbrik reported. "You will meet her soon."
"Perhaps it is time to retire for today," Kleeda suggested. Khazal agreed, and arrangements for a pod were made to pick her up. She flew back to her humble home.
Dromu was waiting for her there, in a long silk robe. Khazal stepped out of the pod and ran up. "Where is Peth?"
"Peth wishes to be alone," Dromu replied. "I am sad to say that we had a quarrel."
"Aww," Khazal said. She gave Dromu a hug, then kissed her neck. She tenderly took the ends of the silk robe and opened it up, then let the garment cascade to the floor.
Dromu lifted a leg and wrapped it around the back of Khazal's thigh. The two of them kissed and let their hands explore wherever. Dromu's tiger-striped skin was smooth to the touch. Khazal took two handfuls of Dromu's curvaceous ass, then banged her hips against Dromu's.
The two of them collapsed on the bed. Dromu had summoned a feeldoe, which Khazal took hold of. She inserted the giving end into Dromu's juicy twat, then held the tool and sucked the end. Khazal then climbed on board, letting the feeldoe slide up into her. She felt the pop sensation as it went all the way, smiling as she felt it go in. Khazal humped her ass up and down while Dromu held onto Khazal's hips.
Dromu got Khazal to get off, then went in behind. Khazal kept her back arched as she got rammed from behind. Dromu seemed to be a master at the feeldoe. Khazal squirted with fury as the fake cock popped out of her pussy. She them sucked the appendage while Dromu laid on her back and enjoyed the sensation. Khazal pulled the tool out of Dromu and fucked Dromu's sloppy pussy until she came. The two of them held each other and drifted off.
The next morning, Khazal boarded the pod. The mysterious spacecraft was almost at the facility, and she wanted to greet her fellow
theosdan
with open arms.
Khazal greeted Unin at the front and stripped down, then ran into the temple interior. The five goddesses were standing there waiting for her.
"There is an issue," Shijzan stated. "The vessel approaching us is infested with an unknown life-form. It is immune to our psi-scans."
"We have to assume it is hostile," Kleeda explained. "We must go to the outside of the sanctuary and defend our home."
"How do we know this?" asked Khazal. "Perhaps we should try to communicate more."
"The vessel is within range," Melbrik said flatly. "We are leaving. This will be dangerous."