Benefactor 02: Being a Blessing
Sci-Fi & Fantasy Story

Benefactor 02: Being a Blessing

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by Annie of the Writing Group

This is part 2 of a three-part story. Eddie wrote part 1, I wrote this, and Billie will finish it. We collaborated on the outline of a plot, and we workshopped each others' stuff, so it should hang together pretty well. This story stands alone OK, but Eddie's story is really good, so why not read it?

Warning: this is very different from the other stuff I've published here, the Liz and Maria stories. It's a nice, wholesome story about ordinary people, and a fallen angel helping some virgins learn about sex. Wait ....

To the high school student Andrea had once been, a class called "Introduction to Human Sexuality" would have been an excuse to giggle with her girlfriends, and secretly wish she knew enough to joke about it. As a college sophomore, she had discovered that the actual class was ... mostly just a class. You got reading and viewing assignments, you were asked to write papers and present things to the class. Some of the topics were not very sexy to actually talk about, things like the names of reproductive organs. When would she need to know the function of the epididymis?

And now a seminar on ... she couldn't remember what. Something to do with cultural differences and female pleasure?

Irony. Andrea was being distracted from a discussion of female sexual pleasure by actual female sexual desire. The student leading today's discussion, Emma something (she had missed it) was so sexy! Tall, at least two inches taller than Andrea's 5' 6", coffee-brown skin and eyes setting off brilliant white teeth that you had to notice because she smiled constantly. That's what Andrea would have noticed two days ago.

Today her attention and her imagination focused helplessly on Emma's big tits. They were as big as grapefruit. They wobbled so enticingly that she couldn't take her eyes off them.

No, focus on her face! Don't objectify a woman in a class about the treatment of women in patriarchal cultures!

Those extra full lips look so sensual. I wonder what it would be like to kiss them.

She had never kissed a girl romantically. And only two boys. That was back when she had almost no sex drive. Now ...

The boy in sitting in front of her, watching Emma. Broad shoulders; big, powerful-looking hands--she immediately was imagining what it would be like to be held in those strong arms, stroked by those fingers.

Next to her, Takeo from her study group, slim and always so put-together, his clothes perfect, hair styled, his bangs in a graceful curve on his forehead, goatee. When they worked together, he was always so helpful, and had a sly wit that could make her smile no matter how frustrated. Last night, she had imagined him holding her, kissing her, touching her, while rubbing herself to a moaning, squirming orgasm. In real life, they had never even shaken hands.

Since the ... it was hard to even think silently to herself. Since the Djinn, the fallen angel, had changed her, given her great sexual desire, and great pleasure from it. As he said, granted her a selfish wish.

Her attention focused on the front of the room as Emma walked back toward her seat. Doctor Siweni said, "Any questions for me? Remember, next week I'm at a conference in Chicago. Work on your papers, and send me drafts by next Friday. I'll try to get my comments back before our next session in two weeks. Get out of here and have fun!" This was the last class on a Friday for most of them.

Doctor Siweni was a cheerful, kind woman. Average height, roundish face, brown skin slightly lighter than Emma's, broad shoulders and a big butt. Andrea wanted to run her hands all over those ass cheeks, then ... what the hell was she thinking! She was so horny she was sitting in the back of the room fantasizing about her mid-forties professor instead of getting up and leaving!

Doctor Siweni interrupted that fantasy by getting up and leaving.

When Andrea stood up and turned to pick up her pack, she saw ... what was his name? Cliff! ... sitting in the back. They had worked together on a presentation at the beginning of the semester. He was nice, but they were both shy. They had only really talked about the project, mostly agreeing on who would talk about what. Why was he still sitting there? Wait, was he crying?

"Cliff?" She walked over to him. "Are you OK?" He looked up, then frantically scrubbed at his face with his hands, looking very embarrassed.

"I'm fine, sorry to bother you!" He was clearly having an ugly cry. His face was red, blotches showing through the pale skin, tears and snot not completely wiped away, eyes bloodshot, face scrunched up and squinting as he fought to stop weeping. He was a mess.

"Cliff, you aren't fine. I don't want to intrude, but ... this is the last class. Nobody will come in here. Do you want to tell someone what's wrong?" Being a reassuring shoulder to, well, cry on was something she had learned from her high school friends. She was the steady one, the one they all knew they could talk to without worrying about secrets told, or having her make fun of them.

Cliff looked at her for a second, then took the little plastic packet of tissues she handed him and tried his best to clean himself up. It took a couple of minutes and most of the packet. He didn't try to say anything while he did it, but at least he stopped crying. She pulled a chair over and sat down across from him, waiting while he collected himself.

Finally, he said "Thanks." He started to wad up the damp tissues. He was still pale, almost pasty, and his short black hair was a mess. Of course, even when they worked on their presentation together, his hair was usually a mess.

Andrea put her hand on his shoulder across the table. Cliff was lean, his shoulder felt very solid, bone just below the skin. He was a few inches taller than Andrea. "Don't mention it. Glad to help." His heart was beating fast and hard enough to feel in his shoulder. "So, what's wrong, Cliff?"

He looked at her, just focused on her face and stared for long seconds. It was uncomfortable, but she met his black eyes and refused to show anything other than sympathy. Finally, he said, "Crystal."

"Um. Is that a girl's name?" She deliberately said it in a doofus-girl way, trying to get Cliff to smile. She was rewarded with a snorted half-laugh.

"To me, she's the girl. I guess you don't know her. Sorry, self-centered boy here." He was smiling now, just a little.

"Cliff, you're obviously super-upset. You're allowed one silly mistake. Wait, wait--are you a human being?" Keep up the comedy for while, reduce the tension. She had done this for Vera, and Cindy, and Jasmine.

"As far as I know, 100% human." Cliff was amused. Good.

"OK, humans are entitled to unlimited silly mistakes. It's what we do, Cliff." She paused for a second, and then squeezed the hand that was still on his shoulder. "So, Crystal, what, doesn't like you?"

"Nah, that would be normal for me. She does like me, we've done stuff together--games, coffee, a movie."

"So ...?"

"She wanted me to ... shit. This is confidential, OK, Andrea?" Good, he did remember her name. It would have been embarrassing otherwise.

"Cliff: I swear not to reveal what you're telling me, unless it's something like, 'Crystal is about to murder her mom.' Anything less terrible than that is safe with me." Wow, that was a terrible example, where did that come from?

Luckily, Cliff took it as more joking. "No, no, no murders. She wanted me to be her first, to take her virginity."

"Oh! Cliff, that's ... well, that's a huge compliment, even if you don't want to."

"It's an enormous compliment that I don't deserve! Dammit, Andrea, I've never gone further with a girl than a kiss on the lips! I don't want her first time to be with fumbling idiot-boy! But she's wonderful and I don't ... I don't want to disappoint her, and I sure don't want to lose her, and I don't know what to do!"

"Oh." Her own voice sounded small. "Did you maybe give her the idea that you're some kind of, I don't know, that you have more experience than you do? And now you can't say anything without admitting you lied?"

"Yeah. That is exactly it."

Andrea thought about it. She was a virgin herself, she couldn't offer to coach him.

Wait. Was that her new sexuality striking? Was she attracted to Cliff?

A moment of self-examination said that yes, she was. He wasn't bad-looking, and something about his vulnerability was activating her, even more than the beautiful Takeo. She immediately put the thought out of her head. She had to think about helping Cliff, not her own desires. He was in distress, she was just very horny.

Because of ... could she use a wish to help Cliff? Haanish had not told her she was limited to three, but even if she had only that many, this was a perfect wish. She was nervous about asking for anything for herself, or anything that would hurt others to help her. She wouldn't ask for money, for fear of taking it from some deserving person. Surely, wishing to make Cliff and Crystal happier would be a safe, useful thing.

She said, "Cliff, I might have an idea. Yeah, I know that sounds weird, but ... can you meet me for coffee tomorrow? You live in Padgett Hall, right? Can we meet up at the coffee shop in the Psych building? It's open on weekends."

"Meet for coffee? Um, are you planning something, you know ..." He trailed off, probably not wanting to say something like "intimate".

"I haven't planned anything yet, Cliff. I might have an idea, that's all. What's the worst thing that happens? We talk about our papers for Dr. Siweni's class."

"I guess. Saturday? How about Saturday morning, say 10:00? Breakfast? Bring along your stuff for class, so we can prove to Crystal that's what we're doing if she spots us together."

"Sure. I'll even treat you for a mocha or something."

They stood up, just a little uncomfortable together because they had kind-of acknowledged attraction.

Cliff said, "Andrea, thank you so much. Even just your listening and not laughing at me helps. I know I'm overreacting, but I like her a lot, and I'd hate for my stupid ego-powered lie to be the end."

"I'm not that kind of person. You being miserable is not funny to me. I really do want to help."

"And believing you mean that does help. See you tomorrow."

"Tomorrow, 10:00."

Then, having carefully said goodbye, they had to walk to the elevator together and ride it down together. Partway down they both got the giggles about saying goodbye too soon.

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By the time she got to the beach, it was sundown. It was Friday night, the beach was busy, but somehow (she was afraid she knew how) the area where she had left the green, semitransparent ball buried shallowly in the sand was empty.

She brushed the sand off, and said, quietly, "Haanish?" Hebrew for "punished", the name the self-declared fallen angel--Djinn--had told her to call him.

And there he was, standing a couple of steps in front of her. Vaguely Arabic-looking, very tall, very attractive, wearing some sort of robe. He had a bland expression on his face. No surprise, no welcome, no hostility. He said, "Greetings, Andrea Narvaez. Did you enjoy the outcome of your wish?"

She hadn't been back here in the four days since Haanish had granted her a wish, to "truly enjoy sexuality."

"You know that I did, Haanish." She smiled. "It was, is, a revelation. You said that you would answer questions. Will it always be as distracting and overwhelming as it is for me now?" She became aware that she was very attracted to the "tall, dark, and handsome" person standing near her. "It never lets up. I'm having trouble concentrating in class."

"You can simply wish to be returned to your former state, Andrea. If you choose not to do so, you will feel strong desire. It will only wane in the normal course of your life, as your body ages. Because I chose it so, your desire will remain strong for longer than most women's." The angel was smiling. Was that a knowing smile, or an amused one? She couldn't really tell.

After one of his typical long pauses, Haanish went on. "The desire will remain strong, just as hunger and thirst do. It will likely not remain a constant distraction, once you are familiar with it."

"Thank you, Haanish. Yes, I am happy with how the wish turned out. I haven't come back here before because I've been looking for a good second wish." She paused. "Saying that made me think of something. Do I get three wishes, like in some of the stories? Aladdin in the

1001 Nights

got unlimited wishes from the Servant of the Ring, but other stories do say three." Andrea had been reading up on wish-granting genies.

"Another wise question. There were millennia during which we Djinni could grant wishes at will, unlimited except by the mortal's lifespan, for we cannot make one of your kind immortal. Wise Solomon bound so many of us into jars, or boxes, or rings, or caves. When he did, he likewise limited us to granting any single mortal but three wishes." Haanish rarely showed any emotion in his voice. This particular speech was especially impassive.

"Haanish, you called both me and Solomon 'wise' just now. You're older than Solomon, older than this planet, older than the sun. Do mortals really seem wise to you?" She really had been thinking about Haanish, and the implications of meeting a fallen angel on the beach.

"Some of you do. I remark on it, because it is a mystery and an astonishment to me, that creatures who are made of earth and water, and exist for a mere flicker before returning to the earth, can be wise, but I cannot deny that it is so."

"Haanish, I hope you're right, because my second wish will affect another person. Someone I know is in great distress, because he has been asked to, um, be the first man to lie with ... I'm trying to talk like the Bible. That makes no sense does it? You're older than the Bible, and you obviously speak modern English. I'm sorry."

She was struggling to spit out the words,

Haanish, help me fuck him and teach him how to fuck when I don't know myself.

"You may speak as you like, Andrea Narvaez. Yes, I can understand your ordinary speech. Having spoken to so many of your kind, I have learned that when speaking to an immortal, almost all of you try to speak in an archaic manner. Be comforted, you are not uniquely prone to this, and you cannot offend or irritate me by doing so. Your apology is not needed, but accepted."

"Thank you. Well, in casual terms, my friend has been asked to be the first man to have sex with a girl he is, that he has a crush on. He's a virgin, he's afraid to either embarrass himself, or hurt her, or just disappoint her." She paused and looked at the apparent man in front of her. "You're an angel. Do you have any, I don't know, moral objections to these two having sex while unmarried?"

Haanish smiled. "I do not, and unless It has changed much, neither does the Creator. The true commandments are against betrayal, against harming others. Your people have made rules against, and requiring, intercourse in certain situations, and those rules may have been made for good reasons, but they are not of the Creator, directly."

Andrea nodded, relieved. "You helped me by answering questions before, so I'll ask you some now, if that's OK?"

"I continue to be impressed by your forethought, Andrea, and I am not surprised, but pleased, that you wish to use one of your few miracles to help another."

"Miracles? I, um ..." She wasn't sure how to end that sentence. Miracle?

"Yes, Andrea. What I do is miraculous. Accursed by the Creator as I am, I was one of the tools It used to make and rule this universe. Some of your philosophers would call me a demiurge. When I exert my power, which the Creator loaned to me or expressed through me, it is a miracle. Some of the miracles of human tales were actions performed by the Creator through its Servants, as well."

"Oh." She felt very small. A miracle to make her hornier?

"Andrea, what I did for you was not a small thing, or unworthy. Surely you think that healing one person is a miracle? That is what I did."

"Thank you. Thank you, Haanish." She marshaled her thoughts. "Anyway, about Cliff. I ... my first thought was to just mystically, or miraculously I guess, put the knowledge in his head, but that would be mind control, or something. I don't know about you or the Creator, but I think it would be wrong."

"It would be wrong."

"And the same applies to having some other girl seduce him and show him how to be a good lover. You'd be mind-controlling her." She was more sure of herself, figuring out a plan while she was talking. In fact, she was suddenly, eerily, completely sure what to do, and that it would work.

"You are wise, again, Andrea Narvaez. I say that with sincerity. Few, even among the Servants, would see this so clearly."

"I have an idea. You can tell me if this will work and be acceptable." Pause while she gathered her courage. "Can you change me so that I am knowledgeable enough about sex to seduce Cliff and show him? Give me the ability to help him? I can consent to this. I trust you. If I ask for it, does that make it morally OK?"

"Would you truly do this, Andrea? It is not wrong, as I perceive things, to offer yourself in this manner, but it is not required of you." He actually sounded and looked a little concerned.

"Haanish, it isn't just wanting to help Cliff. I do want that, but, I'm a virgin, too. You gave me this desire, this pleasure in sexuality, but I've never been with another person. I would be just as insecure as Cliff, if I was in bed with someone. The knowledge I'm asking for will help me, too."

"You seem most sure of yourself."

"I am. Frightened, but sure."

"Brave as well as wise. And truthful. Andrea Narvaez, I have promised to interpret your wishes generously, but think about your words nevertheless."

She felt no need to hesitate. "I wish for the knowledge and skills both to please another person in bed, and to teach a man how to please another in bed as well."

"Those words are well-chosen." He looked faintly worried. "Your wish is granted. You did not request knowledge of seduction, or charisma and skill at ingratiation."

"No. I don't want to feel that I'm forcing Cliff into anything by supernatural compulsion, Haanish. Cliff and I will be meeting tomorrow morning. I'll do my best to ... not seduce. To befriend him and offer him what he needs. He will decide."

The Djinn stood there contemplating her for several seconds. Then he nodded, once.

Why did she feel the ground under her feet wobble? Connecticut didn't have earthquakes very often. She was feeling a bit light-headed, maybe it was her. Smiling, she steadied herself and asked, "Why aren't there any people on this beach, anyway? You said you can't do anything except grant wishes with your power, but it's a weekend in summer and no one is in sight."

"Solomon the Wise was not so bound as myself. His devices, like that globe, cause most people to stay far away, without knowing why. The prohibition is not perfect, but it does mean that I meet fewer people." He looked sad about that. It must be so boring to spend thousands of years mostly alone.

"Haanish, is there anything I can bring you to relieve the boredom, to make your life--existence?--easier? Books? Art? Favorite foods?" Andrea had no idea what an angel turned physical would want.

He stared at her, openly surprised for just a moment. "Thank you, Andrea Narvaez. No physical objects are a comfort to me, in my present state. Bring yourself, if you will, so that we can talk, even if you have no desire for the third wish."

"I will. Thank you again, Haanish. If you want, I can stay here for another hour. The last bus is at 8:14."

"Go home, Andrea." He was smiling indulgently. "You have to prepare for your date tomorrow! On your way, buy some condoms."

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