The following is what I hope to be the beginning of a long-form tale that grows in the telling, involving action, adventure, fantasy, comedy, and of course, lots of sex.
As an aspiring writer, this is a bit of an experiment for me, so to that end I'm open to any and all feedback. Between juggling life's complexities, I imagine this to be a long time in the making, and how you respond will help determine where it goes, if it goes at all, so please, if you make it to the end, take some time to leave a comment with your thoughts, or email me with feedback! I appreciate it so, so much.
With that preamble out of the way, thank you for reading, and enjoy!
Author's note: All characters involved in any sexual activities are over the age of 18.
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Life is so boring,
18-year-old Hector Benson thought, his arm buckling ever so slightly to the bags of apples he had been carrying for almost 20 minutes. He watched his little brother zoom around his mother, powered by the sugar rush of one too many pieces of double chocolate fudge he knew she had regretted giving him.
Sam's Apple Barn was busy that day, filled with families taking advantage of the Earth's early autumn weather to seek out some of its most material delights. Donuts. Corn nuts. Hot cider. And of course, apples.
It was tradition in his family to venture out multiple times a year to claim their share. Hector remembered it fondly, the elation he felt when he was a kid, when it was all so new and exciting. Walking down the aisles, holding his mother's hand, apples of all shapes and sizes flanking both of his sides, shiny and bright. He recalled the first time he tasted one, the way his tongue sprung to life against its sugary juices and mild candied flavor, a delicious combination you couldn't find in any other food in the world.
But as Hector grew older, and his innocence was replaced with a knowledge that the world wasn't quite as sweet, all of that was overtaken by a sense of indifference that now made their annual visits more of a chore than a reward. He couldn't help but look at his brother with a bit of pity then as he begged his mom for one more piece of fudge, knowing that his enthusiasm would likely fade away with time, just as it had with him.
"There's no more Tim," his mother, Nora, insisted. "Please stop."
Her voice was strained with patience, the kind unique to tired mothers on the brink of exploding. Between the three of them, it seemed Tim was the only one enjoying the day's outing, which made Hector wonder why they had even bothered.
At least dad had the good sense to stay home.
In the beginning, the Benson visits to Sam's Apple Barn had always been a full family affair, but in recent years the entire ordeal had become so routine that his dad often declined to accompany them, choosing instead to take advantage of the rare moment of solitude and relax to an old CD. Hector was certain they'd be coming home that day to the house blaring the familiar sounds of Chicago or Phil Collins, his dad in his recliner, eyes closed, beer in hand.
Lucky.
"Tim, come here, stand by me," Hector said in an attempt to give his mom the reprieve he could tell she needed. But his little brother wouldn't budge, clinging onto his mom even harder.
She sigh as she stepped forward and handed the cashier her credit card.
"Two bags?" the cashier asked, looking in Hector's direction.
Nora nodded, and handed him her credit card. "Yes, thank you."
The cashier swiped the card, hit a few buttons on his computer, and handed it back, all as if on autopilot.
"You're all set. Is there anything else I can help you with?"
"No, that's all," said Nora.
"Thank you for choosing Sam's Apple Barn," said the cashier with a feigned smile. "We appreciate your business. Come again."
Tim's sugar rush had reached its peak as they corralled themselves into the van, and crashed hard on their way home, turning into a full blown tantrum.
The accident strikes again,
Hector thought.
He glared at his little brother from inside the side view mirror, wishing he would just shut up and give him and his mom some peace. He knew he wasn't being fair, but he wasn't in the mood for feeling guilty either. His whole Sunday had been wasted on this trip, and he was looking forward to spending what little of the weekend remained doing nothing.
As expected, they arrived to find the house filled with music, this time with the grating vocals of Janice Joplin--another of his dad's favorites--and Nora was in no mood for it.
"Jesus Dave, would you turn that down," she yelled over the booming bass of the stereo.
Dave grunted and stood up from his recliner, making no attempt to hide his disappointment as he walked over to the stereo.
"You should have come with us," Nora said. She handed Tim off to his father, who had passed out following his tantrum. "I could've used your help."
Hector carried the bags of apples over to the kitchen counter, eager to return to the solitude of his bedroom, and away from the bickering he knew was coming.
"He give you a lot of trouble?" Dave asked.
"He was bouncing off the goddamn walls the whole time." Nora grabbed a napkin from the kitchen table and wiped the drool off her shoulder.
"You shouldn't have given him chocolate," Dave said, noticing the brown blotches resting in the corners of his son's mouth. "You know how he gets."
"He wouldn't stop asking, so I caved," Nora snapped. "Can we not do this now? I'm not in the mood. Just watch him for a while, please?"
Dave nodded in surrender, and walked over to Hector as Nora shambled her way to the bathroom.
"You guys have a good time?"
"Not really," Hector replied.
"Your mother shouldn't have given him chocolate." His father said it in almost the exact same inflection as he had before. "It only makes things worse."
"It was fudge, and he wouldn't shut up until he got some. I don't blame her."
"Still--"
"Whatever," Hector snapped before his dad could continue. He slipped his hand into one of the bags of apples and grabbed the first one he felt. "See you at dinner."
As Hector walked to his bedroom, he took a bite from the apple, expecting the same flavor he'd experienced hundreds of times, but was stopped by the explosion of sweetness that filled his mouth.
Holy shit, this apple is delicious
.
Curious, he took a few moments to inspect it. The apple was a balanced shade of red and yellow, bright and bold and sparkling with an outer sheen of juice that seemed almost unnatural. He couldn't explain it, but it felt like the apple was calling to him, filling him with an intense hunger that needed satiating. He took another bite, filling his mouth with more ecstasy, followed by another, then another, again and again, like a voracious animal. In mere minutes the apple was reduced to nothing but its core. He nibbled and sucked on it before tossing it in the trash in his bedroom.
It was so delicious that Hector had considered grabbing another, but his intense hunger was suddenly replaced by an equally intense feeling of fullness. Weighted by satisfaction, he closed his bedroom door, plopped down on his bed, and began scrolling through his podcast subscriptions on his phone, looking for the perfect one to spend the rest of his Sunday afternoon with. Eventually he settled on
Myths and You
, a podcast exploring how ancient stories influence pop culture. There were no new episodes yet, so he settled on an old favorite:
The Odyssey - What Modern Fantasy Owes To History's Greatest Epic
.
About a third of the way through, Hector's phone vibrated to life with an incoming message.
What r u up too?
Hector's heart skipped a beat when he saw who it was from. It was Kayla, his best friend.
More like only friend.
Nothing, just recovering from a day out with my brother. You?
Finishing up with homework. Algebra is killing me. Mind throwing me a bone?
Hector sighed and reached for his backpack sitting by his bedside. He had organized its contents by subject, making the location of his algebra homework easy to find. He pulled it out, took a picture of each page, and texted them to Kayla.
Thanks sucker :p I can always count on you.
Ha ha :| You owe me, as usual.
Of course. Name your price.
How bout another blow job?
Keep sending me homework and I'll consider it ;) ttyl
Hector sat his phone down and rubbed his eyes. Kayla and him had been friends since they were kids, at least until puberty struck, and the dynamic between them changed. For most of high school they managed to push through the awkward sexual tension, until it reached a boil one night when they were alone, and she revealed to him that she was still a virgin, after which he did the same. Feelings were confessed, anxieties expressed, and before they knew it their clothes were off and Kayla was on top of him, pecking his mouth with affectionate kisses.
"Are you sure?" Hector had asked. Kayla wasn't exceptionally pretty, but she was undeniably cute, with a round doe-eyed face and a petite freckled body. It wasn't like he didn't want her, but he knew that they were about to cross a line that couldn't be uncrossed.
"Yes," she whispered. "I want my first time to be with someone I trust. That's you, in case you didn't know."
"I'm flattered." Hector had cringed as the words escaped his mouth.
Kayla laughed. "Just shut up and fuck me."
The whole ordeal was as quick and awkward as they'd expected, and sure enough, things hadn't been the same since. It's not like they had stopped talking or anything dramatic like that. In fact they still fooled around occasionally, though they hadn't actually had sex again. But now neither of them were sure of where they stood with the other, and the casualness of their sexual encounters only added to the confusion.