All That Glitters -- Ch 19
What's falling apart?
Its all going to hell, but not for Liramor-23.
By popular request, the somewhat oversized glossary has been removed and will only be included in every fifth chapter. It will be posted in chapter twenty, and then in chapter twenty-five.
There is little attempt to explain the back story, so it is necessary to read previous chapters to fully understand where we are.
As before, I claim sole responsibility for the story line. This story is a fantasy, with no basis in reality. Any similarity that you may perceive to current events, people, or situations real or imaginary is completely unintended. Look no further than the story line for its intent and purpose.
A big shout out to SaddleRidder for all the help she has provided in editing. With her guidance, I'm making fewer and fewer errors, but she still finds them. If you find any errors still left in this chapter, they are mine.
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Discussion:
I have had a lot of readers investing time to tell me what I already know, to wit, that I am bending known science facts to make my story a reality in my, and your, mind. Pay attention dear readers, this is a Sci-Fi adventure series, which means that the storyline will not always follow science norms.
While I try to stay true to known science facts, we currently do not have gravity plates that provide artificial gravity on space vessels. Nor do we currently have the ability to exceed the speed of light. Nor do we have jump technology that will allow a vessel to instantly jump impressive amount of distances in a single bound. But in my series, set far into the future, these things are standard fare and, quite frankly, we can not have a viable interstellar empire without these technologies.
Sometimes, for the sake of the story, it is necessary for the reader to suspend belief in what is for belief in what is written. Why so many of you seem to have a problem with this is beyond me as so many people in real life are ready to suspend belief in science where vaccines are concerned, or where religion comes into conflict with the reality of evolution.
This series was written from the perspective of a pleasant read for Sci-Fi aficionados and not for the real science nerds. Not that I mind science nerds, we have our place. Take your time to read the series as a Sci-Fi adventure and enjoy, or not, the storyline as it is written.
As with all true Sci-Fi adventure stories, the plot is not about technology, but about people. What makes it Sci-Fi is the inclusion of scientific absurdities interacting with people. What makes it an adventure is the conflict between some of the people. Fortunately, the majority of readers get it.
'Nuff said...enjoy.
Temporary Brig, Liramor-23 Mining Platform, Piscium System, 106 Light Years from Terra
Jason Hert was an officer wanna-be who never became one but not for lack of trying. His actions on and off the ships, had led to his being busted on numerous occasions, forcing him to climb back to the maximum rank he had ever attained, that of Petty Officer First Class. In over eighteen years as a navy rating, first with the failed CP Navy, then as a pirate rating, he had never made it to a higher rank. Because of this, he was advised that with his record and limited capabilities, he would never be an officer.
It was not his fault, he was certain, it was circumstances that got in his way. First, he failed the advancement tests to allow him to proceed to the next levels, through no fault of his own. Then, he never did well on the annual personal assessments usually falling just short of gaining the necessary scores to allow him to proceed to courses that would allow for advancement. He watched enviously as others got the opportunity to advance and he didn't.
Ratings could take courses, at their own expense, anytime they wished. If they succeeded, they would be reimbursed for the cost. Of course, through no fault of his own, Hert never completed a course he paid for. So, he stopped paying for courses and waited to earn them, which never seemed to happen.
But Jason knew he was officer material, even if his superiors advised him that he would never be one. Now, he and his fellow ratings were languishing in the makeshift brig of the mining platform those very superiors had tried to take and failed. The same superiors that told him that
HE
was a failure.
In this boring and tightly controlled space, he had the opportunity to prove himself to his fellow inmates. Hert had been going around to all the ratings, informing them that they had to escape. If they remained in the brig, they would eventually be charged and found guilty of the assault on Liramor-23. When, and not if, they were found guilty, they would be executed. They had to escape or die.
The leadership, those Senior Petty Officers and Chief Petty Officers locked up in this brig with him, had advised all not to get involved in the escape attempt, stating that the lesser ratings, if found guilty, would not likely be executed. But, if they got involved in an escape attempt, their likelihood of death would increase. Hert ignored them. This leadership had already failed the rank and file of their fleet, why should he listen to them?
So Hert made his plans, hiding them from the senior ratings, and prepared for the day that their jailers made a mistake. That day came ten days after they had been captured.
To give them something to do, the captured personnel were allowed to cook their own meals. But one of the cooking surfaces conveniently broke down and had to be replaced. These cooking surfaces were large, and quite heavy. Hert advised his fellow prisoners that their captors would have to bring in something that could move the heavy replacement part in, and the broken one out. That would be their opportunity to move against their jailers.
An hour before the next meal, when cooking would begin, the hatch opened and a single person in a maintenance suit walked in with the 200kg replacement unit. The maintenance man moved over to where the other units were and prepared to replace the broken unit.
When he turned his back, Hert sent out a piercing whistle. Immediately, his fellow inmates moved in on the kitchen area to attack the lone worker. They never even got close to him.
Through the open hatch, and two other hatches that opened, several people in EVA Combat Suits came into the door and fired their pulse rifles over the prisoner's heads. The resulting shock wave knocked out half of the attacking force.
That did not deter the prisoners, who changed direction and attacked the guards in the hatches. The guards fired, again knocking down half of the attacking force. But the remainder made it to the guards at the hatches, only to find that they did not have the numbers or strength to take out guards in combat suits. They were quickly incapacitated. Some were injured. A few were killed. Jason Hert, erstwhile officer wanna-be, suddenly found himself without an attack force, standing alone in front of the guards.
A very petite, and very beautiful Asian woman walked through a hatch and into the open space between the guards and the inmates.
"On the ground, NOW!" she shouted. Every man there immediately dropped to the ground, except Hert. "Who is this?" the woman demanded.
"Prisoner Jason Hert, ma'am," one of the guards said.
"What are you, prisoner Hert?" she asked of him.
"No-one that you can control," he snarled in return and jumped at her. He suddenly found himself on the ground looking up at the woman, his arm in a rather painful arm bar. He was surprised at how fast he had been put to the ground.
"Take him," she ordered. Immediately, two guards came over and cuffed Hert, pulling him aside.
"Those of you on the ground closest to your wounded compatriots, move forward and check them out. Let us know if any are still unconscious, or otherwise require medical assistance," the woman ordered. The prisoners scurried to comply. Those that were now conscious were pulled back into the group. The remainder were left in place.
The woman snapped her fingers and medics came rushing in to check out those still incapacitated or injured. The more severely injured were quickly taken away.
The man who had started it all, the maintenance worker carrying the cooking surface, placed the new device down and took away the defective item.
Three more women walked into the brig area. They were all in uniform. One, a white-blond haired Navy Commander with the braid of an aide-de-camp, the second, dirty-blond Captain with a braid indicating she was a civilian liaison, and finally, a brunette Commodore. Every prisoner there knew who she was without having to be told.
"This is your one and only chance at being naughty," Fiona Marsh told the prisoners, talking at them as if they had been misbehaving children, further humiliating the pirates. "I will not accept another such occurrence. Some of you here today will be found guilty of offences that will incur the death penalty. But most of you will not. You will be found guilty and placed into prison and eventually released.
IF