Here's the first real chapter of my Genie Servant story. Thanks to Joe Brolly for the original story and to 800IbGorilla for creating a new story in that universe. Hope you like it. Again all constructive critisism is welcome, and I'll try to respond to everyone who leaves an address.
All characters are over 18, even the genie who was just born is 2500 years old. Lines in italics are either internal dialogue or if they're in quotes it's telepathic communication.
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Sean blinked slowly as he tried to wake up, and judging by the TV he hadn't been asleep long. His thumb throbbed with pain, reminding him that he hadn't been asleep; he had inhaled some kind of gas,
A drug maybe?
He sucked on his thumb and noticed several spots of blood on his leg and jockey shorts.
Maybe I just stuck it on a splinter.
He stood up to go find a band-aid and had just taken a step when a soft voice spoke out, "Hello, Master. May I be of service?"
Startled, Sean fell back into his seat and looked over at the apparition in his living room. An angel knelt by the end of his coffee table, an angel with hair the color of polished gold in a single long braid that trailed on the floor. Her age was impossible to pin down, and could have been anything from 16 to 26. She had pretty little ears that seemed to come almost, but not quite to a point, and a graceful neck. Her skin was the light golden color of a healthy tan, not that of someone who fried herself with sunlight. She was very petite, and had excellent muscle tone, like a gymnast or a ballerina. It was hard to tell how tall she was with the way she was kneeling, but she seemed to be rather on the short side, and she was... dressed like Princess Leia in her slave outfit?
What the...
It wasn't quite the iconic costume, though; it was even more erotic. Where the original was an opaque brown, hers was a transparent blue, and the eraser shaped nipples on her small breasts were easily visible. He hopped up again and began to stammer, "Wh, who are you? How did you get IN here? Is this some kind of joke?" He rushed to the window, knowing that he didn't have any friends that could pull off something like this. There were no strange cars in the driveway, so he turned to face the girl who was looking at him with an expression almost as confused as he felt. "This really isn't funny, you know."
"I'm sorry Master, I have displeased you somehow. I am not a joke. I can see that you are upset, what have I done wrong?" Her jewel bright blue eyes met his briefly before they filled with tears and she looked back down.
He took two deep breaths, then sat back on the couch before addressing her. "Ok, explain who you are and what you're doing here." The dogs weren't barking, so he knew that no one had come up to the house on foot. There were no cars in the driveway.
What is going on here?
"I am your Genie Servant, Master. Your blood opened my vessel and my essence was released. That began the bonding process and now I am bound to you forever." She glanced at him, unsure of his reaction.