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Night was falling. The sun was low and the very last rays of light were that of smouldering embers. To the eyes of any regular man this light would be just barely enough to see by. They would stumble and peer sharply at the path in front of them before quickly conceding defeat and lighting a torch. But to Duncan it might as well have been noon, with the sun directly overhead.
Duncan had, just a night ago, had a warlock augment his eyes, as payment for procuring some ingredients. Naturally this involved little foraging or haggling with shopkeeps, instead leading Duncan into the wilds to slay various dangerous beasts and monsters. When Duncan had returned, his knapsack heavy, stinking and stained with various bloods and bodily fluids, the warlock had offered him a choice of reward. First, and most obvious, the warlock offered a coffer of gold and silver; second the warlock offered three bottles from his stocks of tinctures elixirs and potions. Thirdly, and most intriguingly, the warlock had offered to augment Duncan's body.
"I can bestow upon you the keen hearing of a jape rabbit, or the sight of an archer hawk. I could strengthen your soles, that they never tire or ache, or I can thicken your skin, to protect against but the sharpest of blades." The warlock had said.
Duncan had always hated warlocks, they prattled on too much, full of self importance and hot air. It was if they would float away if they didn't expel as much as they could, as often as possible.
Still though, the warlock's offer had piqued Duncan's interest, and a thought began to form in his mind. A small smirk played across Duncan's lips, before he stifled it and straightened his face in preparation for haggling.
"I am awed by your generosity, o great warlock. Many before you have viewed my payment as merely a dirty afterthought, tossing a bag of coin at me and sneering as they left." Duncan gushed.
Warlocks were particularty vulnerable to flattery, and even the most wooden of actors may find success with this tact, such is a warlock's ego. Luckily for Duncan, he had honed his craft over
many years of lying and stealing, often fooling city guards and brainless bandits
"But I find myself dismayed at the opportunity you so benevolently present to me." Duncan continued, making as much use of his lexicon as possible, to further engender the warlock's fondness for him, and hopefully, make him more malleable in negotiations
"And why is that young warrior?" The warlock asked, taking the bait.
"So few of us in our lives find ourselves in the debt of a powerful warlock, fewer still are presented with the opportunity to enhance themselves further than the gods intended. I am very aware of the peril of choosing poorly and coming to regret my choice in the future." Duncan
explained, injecting all the gravitas he could muster.
The warlock smirked, the flattery had had its intended effect, which made his long, dirty grey beard rise almost comically to one side
"I believe that I can gather what it is you are angling towards ser and I am willing to come to a compromise. I shall enchant you in one facet immediately, you shall gather one more vital ingredient for me. Then on your return I shall grant you once more the opportunity to improve yourself. Do we have an accord?"
Duncan dropped to his knees.
"O wise one, you are as magnanimous as you are magnificent. I promise I shall make haste to fulfil our agreement, and you shall have your boon on the morrow." With his head lowered, and his face hidden from the warlock Duncan grimaced, he had definitely overdone it with his last
sentence. He could only hope that the warlock would not notice his efforts to sound more scholarly.
"Rise then, young warrior, and allow me to bestow upon you my first gift." The warlock declared.
Duncan stood, and the warlock placed his hands on his shoulders.
"What is your choice?"
Duncan considered for a second before answering.
"I would ask for the sight of a feline, so I may see as clear at dusk as one may at noon. And to see at night as one may see at dusk." Said Duncan.
The warlock nodded solemnly.
"Very well, a fine choice for a warrior indeed."
The warlock removed his hands from Duncan's shoulders and moved to the centre of the room, where a wide, black metal bowl stood upon a podium of ornate brickwork. He raised his hands over the bowl and began speaking in an ancient tongue, his voice echoing around the chamber.
At once the candles lighting the room began to flicker, their flames growing and being pulled toward the bowl. In a flash the candles had extinguished, the flames stolen from them by the bowl, which by this time had began crackling fervently. Huge fingers of flame were dancing from the bowl, their colour that of a cloudless sky. Duncan was cowed by this, uncertain of his greed that compelled him to seek enhancement, and regretful that he hadn't just accepted the coin as payment.
The warlock's chanting grew in intensity, and in the echoes Duncan was sure he could hear another voice, different to the warlock's, deeper, with an otherworldly quality.
The warlock's chanting reached a crescendo, and he turned suddenly, flinging his hands toward Duncan.
Duncan almost flinched, and later he would almost wish that he had, because the flames followed the warlock's hands as if they were connected. The flames leapt from the bowl and struck Duncan directly in the face, plunging him into darkness.
When he awoke his face was hot and the light was almost blinding, then his eyes adjusted, and the light merely became uncomfortably bright.
"You will need some time to adjust to the change. Your eyes will be particularly sensitive to light for the rest of the night. I would recommend you find an inn to rest." The warlock explained.
Duncan squinted and sat up. He nodded his assent to the warlock's advice as he stood.
"Very well, I'm sure I can find a room in the town."
"I must also warn you that your appearance may be a little disconcerting to others."
Duncan gulped, he had hoped that the warlock's magic would simply bestow the gift of night sight without affecting his looks.
"How so?" Duncan asked warily.
"In sunlight your pupils will be like pinpricks, only at dusk will your eyes appear as normal, and at darkest night it will be as if your eyes had no colour at all."
Duncan let out a shaky breath, it was not as bad as he had imagined. He had expected the warlock to tell him that his eyes were feline in looks as well as function. While he conceded that that would act as effective intimidation, he was not prepared to live the rest of his days looking like some half-breed freak.
"I can handle that." Duncan said gruffly.
"Now what is this ingredient you wish me to fetch?"
"Hush, rest now. Return on the morrow and we shall discuss your task."
With that Duncan left the warlock's tower on the outskirts of the town, and made for the nearest inn. The light was soft, a scant hour perhaps from dusk, yet Duncan found himself squinting all the way through his short journey, and battling against a throbbing headache emanating from behind his eyes.
He found an inn on the fringes of the town and made his way inside. Luckily there were several rooms available, much of the inn's business having been snatched up by a higher class establishment in the centre of the town. Not that Duncan minded, any bed was more like to be comfortable than the bedroll he had become accustomed to, sleeping a few hundred yards off of roads, most like on hard ground. Every so often he had found small clearings, with a thick carpet of soft moss on which to make camp for the night. These were rare treats, and sorely appreciated after long days of travelling.
Duncan also purchased some food, a hearty, if plain, stew of rabbit and root vegetables that warmed him through and left him comfortably full. Afterwards he retired to his room, and on the straw mattress within, fell into a troubled sleep, fraught with night terrors and echoes of the otherworldly voice he had heard in the warlock's tower.
In the morning he broke his fast with oatmeal and a slice of salted bread, and while he chewed, his mind wandered. What was this ingredient the warlock desired? Why had he not asked for it in the first place? Why was he so eager to grant Duncan's wish of another enhancement? After considerable thought he couldn't help but conclude that the warlock had played him like a fiddle, and that he had gotten himself into a dangerous situation.
Duncan left the inn with a knot in his stomach. He was a skilled fighter, more adept with daggers than any in the world, or so he would wager, and proficient with longer blades. His reactions and speed had often caught his adversaries by surprise, and he could tell by the abject terror in their eyes that he was unlike any foe that many of his enemies had even witnessed, let alone faced.
Yet still he could not help but feel some fear at the warlock's task. That the warlock would hide his request behind the promise of a second enchantment meant that it would surely be life threatening, and like to test Duncan more thoroughly than anything he had encountered before.
Duncan was thankful to the Gods that his eyes had recovered while he slept. He could only imagine the agony that the morning sun would cause.
When he arrived at the warlock's tower, he found the warlock standing outside, waiting for him
"Good morrow young warrior!" The warlock called to him.