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Thirst 2 0 Ch 02

Thirst 2 0 Ch 02

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Disclaimer: This is a rewrite of Thirst, and this is a new chapter.

Vasco Isidoro's unlife force traced a crimson swirl in the murky flow of the river, fading quickly into its arcane constituents. His authority curled about her like bat-wings wrought of iron, a bulwark delicately won and flaunted as she marched across the deck; the ambassador of her own nascent statelette. The black bandana she wore was her night's call to arms, a banner of implicit threat.

Walking onboard a rotten confection such as this yacht made Monroe's tongue feel as if it were covered in treacley tallow. The carpeting was plush, a purple that was perhaps meant to invoke images of Byzantine nobility. It reminded her of a vivid cave fungus. Framed portraits of the dread overseers hung on either side of her in the narrow Hall. Their value likely eclipsed all the meager income she'd earned and stolen in her near century of life and unlife.

Lord Isidoro, his visage reminiscent of an oily toad trying to smile reassuringly...even his own painter was unable to render him on canvas bereft of disturbing unctuousness.

Lady Shira, resplendent in orange and red silks, one of the most beautiful Kindred she'd ever seen. Her nature was radioactive, corroding everything around her like a rogue star.

Pakhan Maksim, like sharp flint chips shaped into a man. The artist had captured his lantern jaw and pitiless gaze, wearing his tyranny upon his coat sleeve - noble and cruel as a cliff face.

Bishop Odovico, perhaps the most unnatural of them all. The distended shape of his body beneath his bone-white robes eclipsed his head, mostly obscured by an argent veil.

Finally, Sister Clementia, feared in equal measure for her ferocity and otherwise unknowable visage. The delicately filigreed, weeping steel mask and nun's habit were at odds with the trail of ashen bones she'd left.

Even to one such as Monroe they were monstrous, their humanity a faint echo in the distance of their long, bloodsoaked requiems. Their existence was underpinned by the dying screams of hundreds over the centuries. She mastered her base fears, an anxiety exuded by the Beast in her mind that feared direct confrontation with elder predators such as the Overseer Committee.

The boat felt bigger than it appeared. Her journey along that rotten-plum shaded carpet seemed a drawn out affair, as if meant to give her time to turn heel and slink back into the shadows. When that journey ended before a pair of lacquered cherry wood doors, she struck the brass knocker three times against its plate. Each thud felt like the disturbance of some sepulchral place, reverberating through her ribcage.

To her surprise, the doors slid apart along a track, silent and smooth as a waterbug across oil; she'd expected the doors to creak open on tortured hinges, but that was part of the illusion - to make her feel like this yacht was one of their moldering estates. Back in the days when she drew breath beneath a sweltering Louisiana sun, an associate - not someone she'd have called a friend, those were a rare breed - had insisted on teaching her these mindfulness techniques, and she'd been skeptical then. Such conscious control over her own will, however, had proven invaluable against creatures such as the Overseer Committee.

More than one neophyte had been staked and thrown in the bayeux when Clementia had peeled back the protective caul over their minds, tasting their thoughts like a fly sampling rotten fruit. That self control, and the protective conditioning practiced by the Syndicate itself, was like a stony tomb around the restless ghost of her thoughts.

The meeting room was an exercise of lavish excess, one that twisted her purple-tinted lips downward; she caught herself before a snarl of disgust could crawl over her face. Crimson carpeting edged in what had to be actual gold thread led her gaze to the oblong table, a great slab of white and black marble at odds with its slender iron supports.

Seated upon tall-backed chairs were the masters of the Ashland Domain; this was her first time among them alone, an unenviable position for any young Vampire. By this point in her struggle with the Overseers, however, both she and they knew the reaction to her death would be one of catastrophic uprising. Nonetheless, standing in the presence of powerful creatures hundreds-of-years dead caused her cold heart to clench in fear.

"This is the cause of our delay, Isidoro?" Every note of Lady Shira's voice was like the stroke of an elegant, barbed scourge. Her gray eyes, passing over Monroe as if taking note of a crane fly, were hooded in nonplussed disdain. She felt disgust every time she laid eyes on this famed hedonist.

"I regret to say so." The Nosferatu settled in his chair, his flesh sagging around his frame as he steepled his long fingers. "It seems that she and her fellow

siervos

have made to block our passage."

"With what? The 'unity of their Cause' made manifest? Perhaps by holding hands?" Pakhan Maksim didn't even bother to look upon her. He was like a cenotaph of some bygone noble wearing the sort of tacky, overpriced clubwear she'd spot in Club Astrakhan. He was busily fingering a rope of glinting white-gold necklaces from a small pile upon the table...counting his tribute, no doubt. Monroe wondered where the show of wealth began and the compulsion to count ended with him.

Lady Shira's hair, pulled back in oily night dark streaks, caught the gilded glinter of her shimmering, silvery dress like cold stars in a stranger sky. "Who is she, even? Is she one of yours Maxim?"

"Well I'm wounded. Don't recognize one of your own subjects Miss Shira?" Monroe drawled, shocking them into quiet at the fearless breach of protocol - speaking without instruction to do so...and addressing her as 'miss'? Carter felt a sick thrill flutter in her lower belly as she watched the elder Daeva rise to her feet, a bestial cast crawling over her face as she approached.

"Conduct yourself, Lady Shira," came a rasping voice from the bloated figure seated at one end of the table, so still until this point that he might as well have been in torpor. The silver veil covering the Bishop's face barely stirred, and his voice sounded muffled as if beneath a pile of grave dirt. "All of us, even you, knew this was coming. Do not act scandalized before the Dark of Truth." That was news to Monroe, who'd planned this whole endeavor with redundant layers of secrecy; surely he was bluffing.

By his side as ever, the masked figure of Clementia remained unmoving, though Monroe could feel the weight of her ferrous gaze.

She watched Shira's inner struggle, reflected from behind her eyes; it reminded Monroe of a fire burning inside of a church adorned with stained glass windows. The elder blinked and seemed an entirely different person from the fanged monster only a moment before, huffing like an impatient teenager and crossing her pale, bared arms. "Fine, fine, our holiness never lets us have any fun. Lucky you."

"If I don't remember you, you musn't be a terribly important little lick." Shira gave her a once over, her heels stabbing into the carpeting as she circled the younger revolutionary. "Did we let you in during the Armistice?" The insult was taken flatly; she was no out of towner.

"Name's Monroe Carter. Lived here all my life and hereafter, but like Mister Isidoro told me out on the river bank - your time is oh so valuable and I - "

"Monroe Carter? Now I remember, you're Avariel's get, aren't you." She expected that Lady Shira might invoke her Sire's name at some point throughout this conversation. It always brought a curious pang of guilt and vindication. Shira's predatory orbit halted before Monroe. Despite being roughly the same height, the elder undead felt as if she towered over the younger. "Haven't heard from her lately. Why hasn't she come herself to deliver your malcontent, I wonder?"

"You can ask her if you see her," the younger Daeva suggested nonchalantly, resting a hand on her hip in yet another violation of courtly etiquette. She relished their squirming discontent. "Until she comes callin', guess you can either hear

our

'malcontent' straight from the source, or we can just...wait here 'til dawn."

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Monroe Carter could tell that few people had dared get the better of Lady Shira in years - there again, the prowling fury beneath the pale overperfection of her mortal mask. This time the elder found her center without the bishop, sniffing with affected boredom. "Laszlo, Bernadette," she called, a pair of faceless guards stepping into the room. "Ash her - "

"Absolutely

not

," Maksim's voice thrummed through her bones as he finally looked up from his gold ropes, a snarl breaking the ice-lake of his expression. "We talked about this."

Here now she stood poised along the shore of oblivion, eye-locked with the lords of the Damned; everything had come to this moment, and if she slipped along the razor's edge she'd die here, and the Cause would scatter to the winds of their post-mortem dystopia. "Yeah. Let's all just keep our calm. There's no need for us to go spilling blood, your livestock is still depleted after the Lupines got riled up. Y'know, killed a bunch of my comrades." Reminding them of that ill-fated conflict served a dual purpose - firstly to recall that the very Childer they depended were a precious, dwindling commodity not easily replaced - after all, the creation of new Vampires was a cardinal break with the Primary Tradition. Second, it was but one of many reasons for the lesser bloods' ire. Contrary to the official party line everyone knew the Overseers had started that fight.

"She's my subject, I can do with her as I please," Shira retaliated with all the entitlement of a princess.

"There

is

a rather substantial gathering of

Los Siervos

and their misplaced chain standing between us and Haven, and besides Lady Shira...the dooming hour approaches. Remember our...unfinished business?" Isidoro slurred. Monroe knew he'd dropped that last part for her to notice, but why?

The change was nearly undetectable, but whatever Isidoro was insinuating made them all freeze subtly - perhaps if they'd taken her seriously they'd repress such a reaction but she noticed Maksim's grimace, the tightening at the corners of Shira's mouth. The Bishop's gloved fingers closed around the barbed crucifix hanging from his swollen neck, though as ever Clementia remained impassive.

Still...was that hostility directed Isidoro's way?

Monroe knew she'd made an enemy of Lady Shira with her audacity, for essentially trapping them between a rock and a hard place - as the Daeva's serf, the humiliation was doubly potent as she'd be seen as unable to control what was hers. That was something that the Syndicate's leader could use to her advantage. All of it was, every little detail, if she could somehow make them sing the right tune.

"Fine...fine, fine! But," Shira smirked humorlessly, her expression promising future suffering as she delicately slid her fingers down Monroe's collarbone, "custom demands satisfaction, lest we descend into barbarism."

The sensation of her sharp nails made the amber-eyed Brujah shudder with disgust. She already knew what was coming before the dread word passed from the elder's lips - "Carucage." It made Monroe's lips curl upward, a flash of her teeth at the debasing suggestion. Carucage was a type of blood tax paid to compensate for the elders' time, an extra fee of her precious vitae on top of the weekly pints they sucked from her.

"But of course...surely Miss Carter you expected such, and came to us with a full and virtuous heart?" Isidoro smiled widely, his sharpened incisors wet and yellowed. The irony was, of course, that she'd come here specifically to lighten the onerous burden the old, hungry dead pulled from their subjects' veins.

Maksim was staring her down like a prime cut of beef, lust and actual hunger reflected behind his tastelessly expensive sunglasses. "I've drank from her before...the sweet little bitch has a delicate bouquet. I'll take her off your hands if she's too much for you to handle." Far more than petty jest, she knew the other Elder was probing at Shira's authority - unable to keep their disunity hidden, or perhaps they simply didn't view her as a threat to hide from.

"You have your playthings, let me indulge in mine. Though of course I'm willing to share." Even after all these decades of servitude, that rankled her - that she was little more than a brightly colored bauble to be passed among the five members of the Overseer Committee.

"The Church of Shadows is a grindstone that smashes the chaff of Man, and its wheel is turned by his blood," mused the Bishop as he raised his silver veil to reveal the jut of his paper-skinned jaw, icicle-jagged fangs glinting in the low light.

Monroe had fed recently in anticipation of such a request, a bellyful of mid-quality blood from a foreman down at the McHannon warehouse last night, so yes she did bring a full and virtuous heart. Still, all five of them could easily drain her dry, leaving her to fall into torpor. Here was the gamble - relying on the Committee's fear of their serfs' collective anger should Monroe not emerge from their yacht.

"Gotta do things by the book don't we?" she offered with an easy drawl that was at odds with the turmoil in her heart. She wouldn't give them the victory of desperation, even as they subjected her to their ghoulish hunger for their own Childers' blood. "Then...we'll talk about that chain. Don't worry yourselves too much about it, we all know how important your time is." Monroe stepped forward with a mocking sashay, past Lady Shira's jackal-gaze to stand before the table, holding out her wrists.

As she'd expected, none of them bothered with the pleasurable sheen of the double-edged blade that was the Kiss. After all, a demonstration of fealty such as this needed no reward in their eyes.

The Bishop's icy-cold fangs in her wrist were just as frigid and stabbing as Clementia's. She felt violated by Isidoro, who despite taking almost chastely from her brachial artery, seemed to take a perverse pleasure in the ritual invasion of her bloodstream. His smile afterwards reminded her of a leech crawling back beneath a scum-capped lake, fat and full.

She was already feeling atavistic and hollow by the time Maksim simply tugged her braids, pulling her head to the side to expose her throat. He fed like a hungry dog, lapping at the wounds he tore open, uncaring of anything but adding her power to his. "Nnngh...you don't gotta

maul

me," she griped as he shoved her away, sending her stumbling before Lady Shira. The elder Daeva's grin was a masterwork in arrogance, something that rendered her otherwise nymph's beauty eel-like.

Her Beast curling within her chest, howling to be set free to take her from this place of debasement and starvation, Monroe presented her wrists but wasn't surprised when she was instead shoved back to sit upon the table. "I've always preferred this particular font, wouldn't you agree?" Shira tittered, bending forward and pushing up the leg of Monroe's board shorts.

It was at this point, when Lady Shira's teeth pierced through her femoral artery and she felt the elder tug free her vitae down to the edge of Frenzy, that she almost broke.

CUT ME LOOSE!

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The Beast howled, rattling the cage of her consciousness with its grave-claw fists.

Monroe Carter's vibrant complexion grew corpse-like as she ground her teeth against the growing pain and hunger of having her blood swallowed down. All eyes were upon her, watching to see if she'd shatter and expose that horrible thing that lurked in every Kindred's heart - as if an admission of a sin they'd all committed, but whose punishment for confession was dissolution.

The primal, accursed specter of her Id raked its nails behind her eyes as darkness chased the edge of her vision.

STOP HER NOW!

It shrieked, testing her down to the splitting sinews of her will. The twin urges to collapse and curl up like a pillbug in pain, and to fly forth from this place and prey upon the Living, whirled through the fog of her mind.

At the breaking point - one Shira had expertly drained her toward - Monroe was released from this shameful parasitism. She felt light-headed, disoriented. She recalled what it was like to stand up too quickly, for the blood to rush to her head. Intoxication without any of the pleasant aspects, just the spins and the hangover balled up into an unending left hook across her jaw. Like a sick cat she covered for her weakness with casual pride, pushing off the table to stare at them with bored defiance.

"Ya'll sated?" Monroe's eyes flickered between each of the ancient monsters in turn. "Now that you've skimmed just a bit more off the top, you

finally

ready to listen?"

"You can always leave us a list of your demands childe, if you are feeling overtaxed - " Isidoro began but she cut him off with a harsh growl, a flash of raptor-gold in her eyes as her living facade cracked around the edges.

"No."

"Then get to your point. What do you ingrates hunger for now, hm?" Maksim stretched a rope of gold between his hands in an unceremonious gesture that reminded her of a garotte wire. "Hunting grounds and condos in Pearl Row? Less blood tax? Maybe you want us to set you up with limousines and drive you down Amos Pier to drink from hookers and drug dealers?" His mockery was punctuated by the dollop of her blood, dribbling down his chin.

"Ohh no...ohhh ho no no no Mister Maksim - "

" - you call me

Pakhan

sewer rat - "

" - I'll call you

out

for not keeping your end of the bargain is what I'll do," she cut him off, leaving the five elders in stunned quiet at such...defiance; that they didn't descend upon her and tear the bones from her flesh was evidence of her gambit's efficacy; they

feared

what she represented. Monroe pressed her advantage while she was still lucid. "And I ain't gonna do it alone, you hear me? All them neophytes out there, they sent me here to do one thing for them."

"Then list that one

thing

so we can say

no

and be done with it," Shira snapped.

"You won't say no," Monroe countered, dancing along the knife's edge with oblivion on one side and victory on the other. "Hell, I'mma make you all an offer you can't refuse." She had them hooked - fascinated with the spectacle of a Vampire less than a century dead speaking before her betters as if they were little more than company management. "You meet us all, real official, in your court after Sunday's dark mass. That's where we'll deliver our list, and only there is where we're gonna work this out."

Monroe reached a shaky, pale hand into her midriff jacket and withdrew the cardstock envelope - a thing of little pretension and great disobedience - holding it before her. It contained the written, curt call to parlay - not a request, a demand. A pale ancilla, her platinum blonde hair pulled back tight enough to stretch the skin of her jaw, plucked it from her hand. She handed it off to Isidoro, who split it open and read it with a scoff before handing it to the Bishop.

The tumorous priest ran his finger over the dried ink, penned in her own broad, bold script - Clementia at his side didn't even bother to look, statue-still. "You claim we won't simply refuse you and have you removed from this chamber...why do you believe that, Miss Carter?" strangely he didn't seem upset as she'd expected. Curious, amused even.

"Glad you asked. Simply put, we'll withhold our Sunday tithe, and you won't be able to find us to pull it from our veins." Monroe's pronouncement was met with a vile quiet; she felt the shadow of Clementia's mind prying at her own, looking for a way in to taste her thoughts, but the mystical bond of the Syndicate was an unbreakable mortar that shielded her consciousness. "I know you're thinkin' 'bout scourging our hiding places from one of my associates, but I haven't told a one where we'd go. It's all safe, up in here." Monroe tapped her temple twice; in her starving state, it felt like her head was a bronze bell and her finger a knocker...bad idea perhaps.

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