This is my first story and welcome any feedback that is given to me. Let me know how you enjoyed the story and what you think I need to improve on. Without further waste of your time, Enjoy.
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I was happy to be back in my room, after a long day. The winter was started to ware on me. I had never had a problem with the cold before but the more the winter dragged on the more it bothered me. I was honestly just happy to finally be back in bed, finally having a day off tomorrow to enjoy some Netflix with some warm eggnog and Brandy in the morning. I picked up a book and decided to read a few pages before heading to bed. After a couple pages I just couldn't seem to get into it. The tent in my boxers was started to distract me. I figured it wouldn't hurt to have a nice play before I went to sleep. I moved my laptop onto my lap to see if I could find something to jack off to. After flipping through a couple of pornos I found one that makes particularly exciting. I tried to go slow, to draw it out but I just couldn't. I ended up cumming a couple minutes into the video.
I cleaned up my mess and decided it was time to get ready for bed. I pulled off my shirt to admire myself in my mirror. I wasn't "ripped" but I was fit. I had the makings of abs and some decent arms that almost doubled in size when I flexed. With short brown hair, green eyes, and a small beard that I had kept up with since graduating high school I felt like a ladies man but seemed to scare more off then I attracted. As I was looking in the mirror it almost looked as if it was slowly freezing over. As I looked closer it seemed to disappear. It gave me the chills; I decided it best to turn the mirror away so it didn't look directly at me while I was sleeping. I lied down under my sheets, feeling the warm hug they were giving me. Sleep came easy, not long after I closed my eyes I could feel sleeps sweet embrace taking me away.
I woke up shivering in the middle of the night, my clock flashing midnight as if it had been unplugged. My body was in a ball trying to warm itself up. I tried pulling my comforter up higher to warm myself up, but none came. I looked around for the cause of the sudden freeze but could not find the source. My windows were closed; I could even see the street light through my window lighting up the sidewalk across the street. I began to shiver more and more under my blanket. As I was looking through the window the glass began freezing over as the frost on the edges slowly crept closer to the center of the glass engulfing it. My heart began to race, I could feel its warmth beating in my chest but the cold soon shrouded that as well.
Slowly the window began to open, a gust of wind sent snow flying in through window as it slams back shut. The snow swirled in from of my bed revealing the outline of a person. I could barely move, I couldn't even cry for help. I just sat there hearing my teeth chattering. As the snow spun more and more I could almost make out the person inside of it. Tall, long blond air with streaks of white, glassed over blue eyes, long slender body with wide hips and large breasts, wearing a long tight blue dress. Soon the snow slowed and fell to the floor. The woman looked down at me and smiled sweetly. As she was walking over to the side of my bed my heart started beating faster and faster. The fear rising was quickly inside of me. Soon she was directly in front of me. She knelt down and put a finger to my lips. The cold soon left...so did the warmth of my beating heart. All feeling of temperature left my body.