This is a story I wrote a while ago, under another pen name. This is all there is at the moment, and you won't find any steam in this bit, but you can guess where it's heading. It's Urban Fantasy with some fairly unusual characters and background. I personally like it but it hasn't raised much interest on another website I publish on, maybe because it doesn't really match their teenage readers' taste.
I'm trying to decide which of my multiple books I should focus on (I suffer from a prolific imagination and a bad case of procrastination), so I'm putting it up here for some adult readers' opinion. Keep it or trash it?
Please let me know with your votes and comments.
Thanks!
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Chapter 1
Dark, cold, and uncomfortable.
It could have been the names of some Fifty Shades character's triplets, but right now it was an accurate description of my hideout. This November night was freezing, the moon a sliver of pale gold that would not have pierced the darkness even if I hadn't shot the bulbs on the closest lampposts. One more reason for the City Council to be annoyed with me, as if they didn't have plenty already.
They'll get over it. I'd like to see those fat bastards do my job.
I chuckled silently, picturing the Mayor in my position, face down on a thick branch, tranquilizer gun in hand. The bulbs had to go. In my black Kevlar lined clothing I was nearly invisible to my prey, but the leaves were long gone. Any light, and I would be busted.
Calm down, he will hear your heart racing.
I breathed as slowly as I could, trying to reduce the stress. I was no beginner, but tonight was a solo operation. It was against regulations, I knew. There had been so many attacks lately that the State Hunters resources were stretched thin. The authorities had spread the rumor of illegally imported panthers escaping from their crates to reassure the public. They had issued a curfew, and summoned the Hunters in a panic. They wanted results, and they wanted them yesterday. Easier said than done.
This park was the playground of at least one of the beasts. A Lycan not doubt, a young one, like the others, teens just starting to change. It was weird. Furs were born like this, boys who received the gene from their father. A fourth generation Fur would sprout a five-o-clock shadow when angry and have enhanced senses, while a first generation was the monster of your nightmares, turning into a blood crazed creature every night. Still, they were normal people in daylight, and as soon as they understood their nature, most of them ensured they were locked in at sundown. The second generation was usually no trouble, as they had been warned by their sire.
So why was this happening? Why so many kids with no support?
Suddenly, I heard something. Footsteps crushing the dry leaves. I blessed the park employees for sleeping on the job and adjusted my night vision goggles, peering in the direction of the sound.
Crap, what is she doing here? The idiot is going to get herself killed!
A woman was trotting on the path, using her phone to see the ground. She kept glancing over her shoulder, obviously aware of the danger. I rolled my eyes. What was the point of the curfew if people kept wandering the streets? This was a serious inconvenience. She might end up blocking my line of fire, and her phone torch was blinding me.
Sighing, I focused on the space behind the human. There was something, a rustling of the bushes on the right. And there was no wind. I tightened my grip on the gun and made sure my Taser would slide easily out of my side pocket. A shape stepped out, stalking the unsuspecting prey. It was lithe and stealthy...
I mentally face palmed herself. What was wrong tonight? Why could things never run smoothly?
And what the heck is a Fang doing here?
My plans up in smoke, I dropped to the ground, unsheathing my katana with my free hand. A good thing I was ambidextrous. Firearms were no use against vampires, especially not tranquilizer darts. You couldn't kill or anesthetize something that wasn't alive, but chopping off their head would stop them.
The woman screamed at my sight and dazzled me with her phone. I let out an exasperated huff and hit the offending device, propelling it to the ground. Its owner dropped to her knees to pick it up, and I seized the opening, beheading an astonished vampire in one go.
Newly made and slow, I was in luck, somehow. An old one would have been trouble.
This was a night of surprises, I reckoned, ushering the terrified human up and forward on the path. The poor thing's brain was fighting to make sense of the events. Not that she had much of it in the first place. She was mumbling incoherently, her hands clasping the phone to her chest like a shield.
I pushed down my goggles and managed a reassuring smile. "Calm down, it was just a prank. You're fine, you should go home. I'm sorry for scaring you." My interlocutor nodded frantically and scrambled away. I watched her go, taking care to stand between her and the fast rotting corpse, blocking the view but unfortunately not the smell.
I scrunched up my nose. It stank to high heaven. Fangs appeared attractive when alive, or rather undead. They had the power of fascination, something close to hypnotism. My training allowed me to resist it and see the pale, sickly looking monsters lurking behind, all teeth and red eyed. Furs were part-time humans. Fangs were disgusting leeches.
I kicked the severed head, cleaned my blade and considered my options. With that awful stench, there was no point staying put. Lycans had an acute sense of smell, they wouldn't go near the area if they could avoid it. No way to ambush it now. This was the only spot, right in the center of the park, where I was sure the beast would pass. All the paths crossed here. If I went anywhere else, I would have to be very lucky to catch him.
I sheathed my sword and rubbed my neck. I was tempted to call it a night, yet I couldn't. Instead I decided to follow the woman, in case the beast gave chase. Worst case scenario, I would have saved a life.
I should have been more cautious. With the curfew, donors can't get to the blood bars, and the old leeches won't share their own. Newborns are hungry, they can't control it.
Things were so easy before the return of magic. Nowadays witches were powerful and Lycans and vampires protected by the UN. Unofficially. The public was kept blissfully unaware.