***This is a story with a bunch of characters in it that I found I quite liked. They were originally developed for use in A Big Shiny Blue Marble, but sadly, they didn't make the cut.
I re-read the story a while ago and I thought it might fly if it was presented as a separate -- and very finite -- finished work of say two to four chapters for Mother's Day.
And I didn't make it, wanting to get another piece of the Marble up.
So to set the stage, the world in the second half is the same as in the Marble series -- same demons, same 'Humanity after the Fall' scenario. It starts long before that though.
The female protagonist here is a complex sort of girl. It caused me a few headaches at first.
She comes from a few different and distinct background sources, and she's very well spoken at times. At other times though, such as when her blood is up, she tends to fall back on her roots and what comes out of her then is a Jamaican patois, and that was my problem.
There is no written form of that.
All that I had was to try to write her lilting inflections as best I could and it still gave me fits.
I've known many women who speak it, but to WRITE it and not have my girl in this come off badly was the trouble.
But I like the character very much and if you have any trouble reading her lines now and then, just try to think of how 'Calypso' might sound in that pirate movie. Same sound to it. That's the best example that I can think of which would be available or known to many readers.
She wasn't patterned after that character, though.
She's patterned after Jacquotte Delahaye, aka "Back from the dead Red", a female buccaneer who was active in the Caribbean in the 1650s for about a decade and took to the life out of her desperation and poverty. Born of a Haitian mother and a French father, Jacquotte was a famous beauty, known for her mix of African features and flaming red hair, as well as faking her own death. She was never brought to justice. There's a great story right there, if you think about it. :)
A word about the adjective 'dread' as it applied to pirates of the time. You were a dread pirate if you had the ability (and the stones) to attack a town - not just another ship.
About the flags. The black flag or the more ornamented "Jolly Roger" in all of its designs was used as a warning to heave to and one could expect a degree of mercy. But if you didn't and were prepared to defend yourself, the red flag came up and no quarter could be expected if the raiders were going to have to really work hard at beating you down to rob you. Hoisting (or 'heisting', if the pirates were from the local poor) either one was asking to be hung if you lost or were caught.
Anyway, this will be late for Mother's Day, since I'm typing this only now, but hey, if you're a mom and you like to read a bit about swashbuckling (or even buckle swashing), this is for you from me.
Hope you like it. 0_o
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From Humble Beginnings
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Bessie Fox walked along the ancient concrete quay in the dark of the late evening. There wasn't a thing going on in the whole of the harbor -- there never was - and that was fine with her. There hadn't been a thing going on for her in ...
She asked herself out loud in a quiet voice, "Ow long has it been now?", and she answered herself with a sad and soft sigh, "I don' know."
She vaguely remembered that she'd been born in the Year of Our Lord 1698 and she knew that her family had been a little bit different, to be nice about it. Her grandmother had come from Scotland via England alone at a time when it perhaps wasn't the safest thing to do for a single woman to travel that far by herself -- if she wasn't wealthy enough to afford a manservant for things such as protection and maybe a little amusement in the dark of the night.
But then, the women of her family had never really been on the shy side, she guessed, and most of them from what she knew hadn't exactly been defenseless either. So old Winifred had come across when she was a young woman, looking for a safer place to be what she was and she'd made her home on the island of Jamaica.
And being what she was, she'd set up in a little cove which was half mangrove swamp back then and by luck and happenstance, she'd met Tumweh, a runaway slave. The two became inseparable for most of their lives together, Winifred practicing and teaching the skills which she possessed while Tumweh built upon his power as a houngan asogwe, or high priest and practitioner of obeah and voodoo.
Their union had produced three daughters, which was quite a bit of luck as far as Bess was concerned. Old Winifred had left Scotland, running from the witch hunts there and for a bit of good reason. In her family, it was said that the ability ran in threes in girls and Winifred was the third daughter of a third daughter, just as Bess herself was the third girl-child born to her mother, Millie, who was Winifred's third girl.
What Bess knew without doubt was that in the 'thirdlings' as these girls were called, the ability seemed to grow the longer that the chain ran unbroken. All of the girls became skilled witches in their own right, but it was in the 'thirdlings' that it was seen to be most evident. She'd asked about it one time as she sat on Winifred's knee while learning the phrases which would be used to funnel her young will.
"Aye, that's right," her grandmother said with a smile, "Look at what you're doing here," she pointed at the small trinkets which Bess was causing to tumble in the air for her own amusement, "Your mum's a strong one, but she wasn't doing at twelve what you can do at six. You've the gift quite strongly, little fox. And it doesn't all come from my blood like your hair and your eyes do. You're the thirdling of a thirdling three times over, but your grandda outside there, he's a seventh son."
Bess stopped to lean her hand against a piling, looking at it there in the darkness after a moment once she'd realized what she'd done.
She was becoming more and more solid, and she wondered about it for a moment but then went back to her memories.
She'd been born in the same bed where her mother and all of her aunts and sisters had been born, in the same old ramshackle house built on pilings far back from the cove, upstream a little in the swamp. Old Winifred had laughed when she'd laid eyes on the howling little thing as she began to clean her up after her journey down her mother's birth canal.
"She's got more of me in her than any of the others, "Winifred had chuckled as she'd swabbed her daughter's brow, "Mark you this, Millie, red hair already -- a full head of it and I daresay that I'll be looking at my own green eyes looking back at me in this little face afore long." She kissed little Bess then and smiled, "There's some strength in this wee bairn even now."
Her abilities and determination might have come from her Scottish ancestry and her African heritage -- and that came from any of several directions, but her strength of spirit came from her father, a poor Spaniard who'd been forced into becoming a plain and lowly sailor. With nothing but a short life on a squalid ship before him, he'd made good his own escape and come where he'd been welcomed by the largely black and Carib Maroons in the little community. They might have been as poor as anyone else, but they were a happy family and Bess couldn't remember a day in her life when she hadn't seen her handsome father smiling.
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The coming of the Sea Witch Molly Hawke