The prologue through chapter 3 is now edited and I have put them up. Firstly I'd like to say thank you so much to Robin who edited these chapters. Secondly I'm sorry it took so long to get the edited versions up and that I haven't posted anything new in a really long time. Between working, school, kids, and everything else in life I haven't had the time to even look at Color of Blood in the last few months but, things have been rearranged so that I can spend a little bit of time to work on it. Even though I haven't had time to really write anything that doesn't mean I haven't thought about it. I will be posting (at a later date) the new version all that will be changed is a few names. After that I will begin posting more chapters. But here is the edited version of Chapter 2.
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Chapter 2
Leaving the fourth class of the day Kara took the schedule of classes out of her pocket. She already knew that math was the next class, but she couldn't remember which room it was in. After looking at the schedule she headed toward her final class of the day.
Walking into the classroom she took a seat and began to take out her books and pencils. Other students made their way in slowly filling up the room. Instead of just sitting there Kara opened her book and began to read. She felt the air stir to the right of her as someone sat down, but continued to read. Being a little bit older than most of the other students she wasn't really interested in making friends with anyone.
"Ok, Ok, settle down everyone." Kara looked up to see what she hoped to be Professor Ross in front of the class room. He wasn't really tall, maybe 5' 9'' with short blond hair. He wore jeans and a button up dark blue shirt. Someone, Kara decided she could definitely ogle for the semester. After everyone calmed down he began to speak again.
"Hello, everyone. I am Professor Ross. Here's what is on the agenda for today. You all know who I am but I don't know who you are so, starting in this corner," he pointed to the left side of the room, "I want you to stand up say your name, age, and something about yourself." Kara suddenly felt relieved that she chose a seat in the middle of the room, so she wouldn't be the first to speak.
Everyone took turns rising, speaking, and then sitting back down. Kara didn't pay much attention. She already knew she would never remember anyone's name anyway. The boy at the table to her left started speaking then sat down.
Kara stood up and took a breath. "Hello, my name is Kara Dent. I'm twenty-one. After high school I took a few years off to just play around and see what I might want to do with my life. Well, I still have no real clue but decided to start college and here I am." She sat back down and took a breath. Kara had hated public speaking for as long as she could remember.