Hello and thank you very much for your support on the last piece I submitted. I am happy to receive more feedback on it and glad to know you are hooked with the story as much as I am!
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. Talking about strict! He is so far great, as he also sends me tips on how to write better and avoid some grammar mistakes. I hope you can see some improvement on this part!
I don't want to keep you all waiting long, so I am submitting only 5 chapters this time. Don't feel sad, the next 5 chapters are finished and only waiting for my editor to make the corrections if needed! So there won't be a long wait on the next set!
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CHAPTER 41
"My love... please... wake up..."
She could hear him whisper in her ear, and slowly started to recover some consciousness. Her body felt light, she could hear whispers near her and even though her eyes were not open yet, she could sense there were more people closer to her.
"Can you hear me?"
She could, and even though she wanted to reply, suddenly she felt cautious to do so. She rubbed her eyes, and realized she didn't really need to, there was nothing bothering her sight, she just hadn't open her eyes yet.
'
My love... please... say something...
' Amra's plead was desperate, and she started to open her eyes. She found him right next to her, and the room was just as she left it before. She needed to ease Amra, but she wasn't sure yet what to say to the others. '
I am here... I need... time... this is... confusing...
'
"Do you want me to try and see if I can do something?" Elaine's words brought her attention to everyone else in the room.
"No, she is here... she is just slowly waking up... give her some time..."
She blinked a few more times and finally caught Elaine behind him, Pronab was not too far either. The room was still in the dark, but she could see everyone inside. Maxwell, Basil, Wiltshire, the Mengs. Some others she had not met yet, one new familiar face amongst them. Amra helped her sit; at some point she felt down to the floor and that is where she woke up. The candles near them seemed useless for her now, as strange as it was, she could see more than before.
Elaine smiled at her "Take your time darling... let me know if you want some water, or anything at all..." Caliope smiled at her and nodded, but her attention was drawn to someone behind her.
"I know you..." Her voice faint but clear, Amra turned to see who she was talking to, and so did the others. One of the generals she had not met yet was looking back at her. He gave a step closer.
"You... you were inside his memories... are you...?" She frowned.
"He is Metatron, one of the Generals of the far lands..." Elaine replied as she moved to the side.
"How could you know me?" He replied, his voice firm and emotionless.
Meng Tian broke the uncomfortable silence "Perhaps she saw you in her awakening dreams..."
She heard Tian speak, and in her head, she asked herself the same question. Where those just dreams? She remembered her encounter, and suddenly she gasped as she recovered the last pieces. She met him in the field. In the field inside God's memories. She looked back at him and nodded.
"You were the one next to Lucifer, in the field of ancient battles..."
He was surprised, and everyone else in the room was as well. Amra held her tighter and felt her unease, she turned once more to look at him but he had his eyes set on the general.
"Those are beyond ancient times, princess... and he is no longer with us..." Metatron's voice transmitted exactly what everyone else was feeling; confusion.
"Did you dream about him, Caly?" Pronab encouraged her to talk. He sat next to her on the floor, protective just as was Amra.
"No, it was more than just dreams... but... I need to rest, my head hurts... please?" It was just an excuse, she needed to put some order to her thoughts. She wasn't sure who to trust, she just woke up and felt the need to be careful around everyone.
Amra ordered "Give us some room please..." They went quiet and kept a distance, ever watching. Elaine smiled kindly and kneeled next to her, cautiously moving a hand closer and showed her she wanted to help her ease the pain. Caliope took a deep breath and nodded. As soon as Elaine's hand touched her forehead, she closed her eyes and saw the void of darkness that now she recognized well; she got transported back to Elaine's building, and saw Metatron sitting in the living room tired and sad. She was inside her, watching him try to speak.
"He is behind this, I know it... I can recognize the signs of his work... he and Nivel are behind this, but they have erased their tracks and I can't find them..."
"We need to stop them, we can't let another war break loose now... and he... he is not ready... I have to find a way to wake him up... he is dormant..."
"If he does not come to his senses, he is useless in our fight... we need him Eli..."
The void brought her back to the room and she opened her eyes wide to see Elaine take away her hand from her. She was looking at her with a warm smile, as if she was not aware of anything. Her headache had suddenly gone.
"I... I need to be alone please... can I stay here with just the three of you?"
Maxwell smiled and nodded "Yes, of course... Gentleman, please follow me... let's leave her some rest with her family..."
Not all of them were happy about it but none of them refused, they left the room and closed the door behind them. Caliope was taking some deep breaths and trying to calm down, but she was nervous as she watched Elaine carefully. After they were finally gone, Pronab looked at her with concern, and so did Elaine. "What is going on Caly?"
"I don't know where to begin..."
"...by first telling us if you are ok, my love."
"I am more than ok... I think, I am beyond ok... I can hear better, see better... even feel more than before..."
"That is wonderful darling, but what is troubling you?"
"I... I am not sure I can share my experience... I mean... I am not sure I want to show you all what happened..."
Amra seemed only concerned on her health "Do you remember it?" she nodded at him and smiled; her hero and saviour was always attentive of her, she could always count on that. "Yes, at first I was a little confused, but it didn't take long for me to remember it... I saw him..."
They went silent, and she watched in each of them some hint of hope, happiness and anxiety all together. Elaine asked, almost afraid yet wanting the her to clarify "You saw... our Father?"
She nodded, and smiled slowly. Amra sighed in relief and smiled brightly. He took one of her hands to his mouth and kissed it "It is a special encounter, and you don't have to share it with us in vision... but if you can tell us in words, we would like to hear that love."
She nodded again and relaxed, moved slightly then looked at Amra with a shy smile. He was squeezing her hand gently, encouraging her. "The last thing I remember here was Elaine saying it was time... I heard you all say something, I didn't understand what, but I couldn't see any of you behind the candles. It must have been just then when I lost consciousness..."
Elaine nodded "We were chanting my dear, praying and chanting for you, what we would call, a ritual..."
"But I lost touch with everything around me... I blacked out... Then I woke up, or at least I started to remember I was who I was, in the middle of a thick jungle... there was a path, and it seemed endless... I heard a voice speaking senselessly and I tried to talk to him... at first he ignored me, but then he replied, he asked me who I was... he guided me to the end of the road, and it was the field... right then I knew it was familiar but couldn't remember where I was. He was a fallen Angel. He told me his name was Qemuel..."
Elaine gasped and looked back at Pronab, who felt as if that name was a forbidden word. Caliope stopped talking for a while, and waited in silence for them to say something. Amra, in his kneeled pose next to her, put an arm around her waist and pulled her tightly to him.
Pronab was pensative as he spoke "That was before my times... he was the first one... I remember the stories about him..."
Elaine sighed "Qemuel was the first angel to doubt our Father and to question his decisions; he planted the seed of doubt, perhaps without willingly knowing, into Lucifer's mind..."
"He was almost predicting his own end, I think... at first he was counting numbers, and I thought he was just insane... but then he mentioned "legion" and that warned me it was something more..."
Pronab nodded and frowned "That is how Lucifer's army was called... is called."