Thank you all for your comments and support on my first 2 deliveries on this long story I have been working on.
To those who ask me to find an editor, believe me I've tried! I went to search for some editors in Lit's program page and I just haven't got any luck finding one. Those few I contacted and were kind enough to reply, have told me that editing a long story like the one I have made so far it would be like doing a job for free, and they would agree to do so if there was some sort of compensation, which to be honest I agree is deserved but I just cant afford it.
That being said, I have found a friend who said he will look at it and try to help me but on his free time, He got a look at the first 10 chapters and I am re-posting them now with his revised version, which I also twitched a bit as well.
Again, thank you for your support and I love critics that are positive about characters and situations, it helps me implement them in future chapters. Enjoy!
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The Awakening
Chapter 1
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Caliope was walking down the street, heading towards her new job. She had to be there right on time, as her new boss was a woman of impeccable fame and schedules had to be strictly followed.
She stopped right in front of a tall building, and only then realized the neighborhood she was in. It was the business district, and her new job was to simply look out the house of her employer's son, who she was told had a rare mental illness. Her look reflected her puzzled mind; she looked down at the paper then up to the tall, scary building. It might have taken her a few seconds more than she was supposed to take, as the security guard walked towards her.
Guard: May I help you young lady?
She chuckled and tried to hold her laughter, which didn't seem to make the guard very happy.
Caliope: I am sorry Sir, but I think someone gave me the wrong address. I am supposed to meet a Miss Elaine Clark In her house here?
The guard looked a bit shocked yet nodded and suddenly became polite. He showed her the way inside the building and offered her a cup of coffee once they were waiting for confirmation at the reception desk.
A small door opened and a very skinny old lady came through it, nodding to the guard and then to her.
Guard: Evening Magna.
Magna: Evening Gerard, thank you, I will take her to the Madame now. Hello, you must be Caliope, am I correct?
Caliope: yes, that is I, how did you know?
Magna: come, follow me, you are just in time, and the Madame was not waiting for anyone else but you.
The old lady grinned as she leaded Caliope through the door she came in, and towards the service area where both went up on the elevator to the 15th floor. So far Caliope's first impressions of the building and people were old and grey.
When the elevator stopped, the old lady pulled out a key from her pocket, inserted it into a special place on the panel, and only then, the doors opened. A very elegant yet simple living room welcomed both, as Magna offered to take her coat and hold her bag. Then she lead Caliope towards a bigger living room, as apparently, the one before was a sitting room for service people only. "Fancy..." she thought.
Caliope didn't want to make an impression as a dumb street girl, she kept her eyes looking to the place she would take a seat, and once there, her eyes focused on her hands resting softly on her knees. Crossed legs elegantly. A little bell rang, and a wooden bird came out from some place in the room. That made her look up and to her surprise, a tall, dark haired elegant business woman was walking towards her. Caliope stood up quickly, taking care for her skirt to stay in place.
Elaine Clark: I love sharp-on-time people, good first impression Miss Woodward.
Caliope: Thank you, Miss Clark, a pleasure to meet you.
Elaine Clark: Please, take a seat, and tell me a little bit more about you, like for example, your name...
Caliope: yes, it is written with a "C" and just one "L" on purpose. *smiling softly*
Elaine Clark: that indeed got me curious. *chuckling graciously* tell me why did your mother pick such an interesting name.
Even if she thought this was such a silly subject, Caliope decided to humor her new employer. To her surprise, she realized that no one ever asked her before about her name. She also noticed that Miss Cark was a very classy lady, around her late 40's but so well preserved, beautiful skin, kind voice, she could be even older.
Caliope: I picked my own name Miss Clark, My parents both died of an accident when I was very young, an unfortunate classic story, and I went through many foster homes, many first and last names. When I turned 18, I wanted a name of my own, written as I wanted, as my own personal statement, and that is how Caliope was born.
Elaine Clark: I must admit I am quite fond of your name; I like it, and don't get me wrong, but it's mostly why I had chosen you among other several resumes on my desk. I like a unique personality.
This caused Caliope to laugh nervously, imitated by Miss Clark, who realized the time was running fast. She called back Magna and as she was standing, both ladies picked up their purses and walked towards the door.
Elaine Clark: Make yourself comfortable Miss Woodward, my son rarely comes out of his room, his name is Amra, please assist him if he needs something, he will return to his room as soon as he gets what he wants.
Caliope: I will Miss, have a good day and you as well Lady Magna.
Miss Clark and Magna both smiled and the elevator doors closed. Caliope was a bit scared now as she was alone in a very unfamiliar environment, with a stranger who she did not know yet.
The first minutes alone in the elegant apartment Caliope walked in silence, exploring her way in the new place. She found the bathroom, or at least one of them, strategically close to the front doors. After a few more turns around the big living room and discovering a few hidden spots, she sat down on the small service area where she thought she was more comfortable. She took out her tablet, the last gift from her ex-boyfriend, and started to read the second half of a book she had started.
Then she heard a loud door closing, her eyes opened wide and realized she had fallen asleep. She stood up and looked toward the door making the noise and found Miss Clark at the main living room.
Elaine Clark: Caliope, how did it all go? Everything calm? Have you met my son?
Caliope: Welcome back Miss Clark, no, I haven't met him yet, everything was so calm I admit I nodded off at least once. Not even a phone rang.
Miss Clark chuckled as Caliope felt a bit awkward, and since she realized Magna had not returned with her, at least for now, she was alone with Miss Clark and it was an opportune time to clarify some doubts.
Caliope: Miss Clark, do you mind if I ask you a few things? I am a little confused.
Elaine Clark: Go ahead Caliope, I have some spare minutes.
Caliope: First of all, what exactly was I hired for? I remember sending you my resume a year ago, for what it was then, an assistant opening role. Suddenly I had a call from your secretary yesterday and offered a --similar- job starting today. But doing what?
Miss Clark stopped everything she was doing, turned her head, locked her eyes on Caliope, forming a small grin on her lips. With a hand gesture, she made Caliope take a seat, as she herself joined on the opposite one.
Elaine Clark: You are a very smart girl, I can see that, and at only 27 you have more spirit than many, not to mention your witty character, and your openness. That is correct; your resume was given to me last year, but by then the spot was filled. I did not return it back to the pile though, as I thought you had potential. You have unfinished studies on psychology, and a nice background as assistant, not only in this city but in other cities as well.
Miss Clark took a small break, a deep breath, and looked around the room then back at Caliope, and her smile exposed some sadness.
Elaine Clark: I love my son Caliope, but he is very special, and though he doesn't require constant attention, when he needs something and can't find it or get it, all hell breaks loose. I need someone who can assist me while I am in my house, and when I am not here as well, as I have many papers on my home office. But most of all, I need you to be here just in case for him. You will find the salary is already more than what a regular assistant would earn, and I need you to sign some legal paperwork where it would specify you as my personal assistant. Your work with mentally ill patients and your, not complete, but not small knowledge of psychology, should help you with my son. I hope this is clear enough for you, and I hope you still want to work with me. In a few words, you would be my home assistant, and keep an eye when it is needed on my son. Do not worry, he is not violent at all.
Caliope was pondering each word Miss Clark was revealing, it was obvious her experience brought her there, and the job sounded so easy, that for such a nice amount of money, would help her settle down on her new adventure of living alone. Above all, Miss Clark was being honest, and she would still give her some extra work while she was there, she seemed nice and polite, not an arrogant person, like so many now a days. Caliope started to remember her previous employer and showed dislike on her face.
Elaine Clark: Do you hate the idea so much?
Caliope: Oh, no! I am sorry Miss Clark, I was just thinking of what you told me, and yes I would love to.
Elaine Clark: And you put that face when you love things? *chuckling*
Caliope: Oh I am so very sorry Miss Clark! I was thinking to myself that you are so different from other people with same status as you. My recent memories of prior employers exposed my expression. *laughing nervously*