This chapter was originally unedited as were the first few chapters. I received a sort of random e-mail from Captain Siren with some really good feedback. She is a voluntary editor and really helped me clean this up so it flows better. I was both startled and pleased when she offered to help me make the chapter flow smoother. I hope the changes we made do help to make it easier to read.
This is a pure work of fiction and all aspects are from my own imagination though some parts will probably sound similar depending on how much fantasy reading you have done.
If you have any problems with what I am typing let me know but if you are only going to give crappy feedback as in 'it sucks' then go frost yourself and hope you need a new wanker... Now if you have some positive feedback please let me know.
I want to thank Somaluna for reviewing the chapters for mistakes and offering suggestions on better wording. All sex or sexual relationships are 18+. Enjoy.
I want to thank Somaluna for reviewing the chapters for mistakes and offering suggestions on better wording. All sex or sexual relationships are 18+. Enjoy.
I am going to briefly comment on my view of lycans and how they differ from humans. This is being added to the newly edited first chapter. The comment was posted by an Anonymous user who was too scared to use his/her login. The comment was in chapter 2 of the Geoff and Mari spin off.
First off I am going to briefly touch on how I view wolves and then lycan's in general. Wolves and dogs tend to be very gregarious creatures. Have you ever seen dogs pile in a dog pile while sleeping? Walk past each other and randomly lick the others muzzle? The same could be said for cats as well. This is very normal for dogs and wolves. In winter it helps keep them warm. Now with Lycan's they have a wolf half and have much the same actions as normal canines or lupines.
Second how many of you have children? I have three though they are now all adults. I remember when my children were little and if they had a nightmare we would tuck them in with us for the rest of the night. Granted the pups weren't having nightmares but is their crawling in with him and Mari any different? Same goes for bathing them. My ex and I bathed our children till they were about 5ish and we were sure they knew to clean all of their bodies including their bottoms and groin. If that idea bothers you then I feel sorry for you.
Third lycans are very tactile in my universe. This does not mean that when Dan hugs a guy he is feeling him up or when he comforts a pup he is going for something sexual. If your mind automatically goes that way again I feel sorry for you. This is another reason for random touches as they walk past each other and all it means is they are keeping the pack bonds up. There isn't anything sexual to it.
Fourth I will say when it came to the shower scenes I did consider whether to include them or not. I finally decided that they added more than they might detract. Again going from personal experience I have known several people who did shower with their children till they were somewhat older. Mind you when I say older I am still talking 5 and under.
Fifth when it comes to nudity again we are talking werewolves. They are trained from a very young age to strip before they change to keep from ruining their clothing. There is nothing sexual with this, simply common sense. To them it would be like going to a nudist beach and taking their clothes off before hopping in the water. There isn't any stigma or wrongness connected with it. Since some people did complain I did stop mentioning stripping and simply started saying they 'changed form' for the most part. If this still bothers you then I strongly suggest that you are the one with issues and not me. I do hope what I have had to say has some sort of impact on how those of you who have some issues view my stories but if not then I will politely invite you to read other stories that don't upset your little confined world.
Now having said all this above I hope you can see past what would be considered human notions and see that yes they have human bodies but they don't always react as humans. They are lycan's and some of their actions and reactions won't be the same. There isn't any underage sex or even vague hints of underage sexual relationships. Yes I did make a point of writing that Paulo and Sylvia are to be mates but I made a specific point of Dan saying they were not going to mate till they are over 18.
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~Present~
When Dan started to wake up it was really slowly, and the first thing he noticed was a bowl of meat and a bowl of water. He dragged himself over to them and wolfed down the meat, then slurped up the water.
While he was doing that he didn't really realize that there were cuffs on his wrists and chains leading to the walls. As soon as he ate everything and drank enough water, he passed out again on the floor in a totally exhausted pile. At the moment he was running on anger and instincts, and didn't give a damn about what was going on around him.
This went on for several days, since the transfer from his world to this one had been traumatic, and in a way, as traumatic as losing his mate and children. The one thing that really did help Dan was the scent of a submissive who apparently cleaned him up and brought him food. What bothered him were a few scents of fear and sex on her. That combination wasn't something he was used to.
Back in his pack, Dan had driven into all of his juniors that sex was a totally personal issue, and if one or the other said no, then it was accepted even if one really wanted to make love to the other. After he had taken charge, Dan had killed one or two before that rule was finally accepted in the pack. Sex was a personal choice, and he wasn't going to dictate who would do what with whom.
Eventually, he was awake enough that he noticed what was really going on around him. That was when he finally discovered he was chained and nude. The nude part didn't bother him, but the chained part did and it was a struggle not to change. He had a feeling the cuffs were designed to change as well, and then he would simply be a wolf in chains.
Now that he was aware of what was going on, it was a very hard struggle to keep from trying anything stupid till he had a better idea of what was going on. The last thing he remembered was a searing pain and then darkness. How he had gotten here, he had no idea. He didn't even have any idea where he was since he didn't recognize the room. Though he smelled were's, they were not familiar, and he knew all the lycans in the packs around his.
While he was working on controlling his anger, his ears picked up the sound of a door being opened and someone walking down some stairs. From the sounds of it, there were three of them, and one of them sort of felt like an Alpha based on the dominance he was picking up. Dan stood up and faced the door in anticipation. He wasn't very impressed by what he was feeling from whoever was walking down the hallway since the level of dominance just wasn't really up to what he was used to.