This is my first story submission. It's the first part of a four part story (as of now). Any feedback is highly appreciated. Please do not hesitate to tell me what you think of this and how can I improve the reading experience.
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The two tiny puncture marks on her neck did not hurt anymore, not even a sting but she was more aware of those red dots than she was of any other part of her body. She raised her slender fingers to the bite mark that now marked her as his property and touched it softly. The shock of sensation that flowed through her body shocked her and she dropped her hand immediately. It had stopped bleeding, and the scab would heal soon but the skin would always be a shade lighter there to remind her that her body did not solely belong to her anymore. She did not know how she felt about that.
'Isn't this what you wanted?' A venomous voice in the back of her mind demanded. 'Didn't you want to be his whore all along?' Yes. No. She didn't know. 'Not like this', she thought with a sigh. She wanted him to love her, to reciprocate her feelings, to have the happily ever after she dreamt of ever since she was a fledgling. She wanted to be the only one for him, not a member of a glorified harem. 'But I will take whatever crumbs I can have'. And it was this thought that scared her. The thought that made her accept this insanity.
The thought of how he had marked her sent another wave of sensation within her. The memory of his nose skimming up her throat, his cold breath raising goosebumps on her skin made her nipples pucker into hard nubs. She remembered the way he lengthened his fangs and drew them up her neck, the touch of his lips only a whisper in her skin and his fangs pressing at her just above the beat of her jugular, not quite breaking skin. He kept teasing her for a few more moments scratching her neck with his fangs, harder than a tickle but not hard enough to hurt. Her anticipation had been rising, her pussy getting wetter, the smell of her arousal probably reaching his sensitive nose. She thought he had smiled against her neck then but she couldn't be sure because at that moment his fangs finally pierced though her skin. She could feel the momentary pain and then his slow sensual suction against her artery.
And she orgasmed.
She saw stars behind her eyes and her world fell away to the feel of his fangs inside her – which made her crave his cock inside her spasming pussy. He wasn't even touching her, save his mouth at her neck, but she was trembling, writhing as she came and came and came harder than she had ever come before. She couldn't be sure how long it lasted. As his fangs shrank back away from her skin and his tongue lapped at the claiming mark he had just made on her to catch any wayward drops of blood the last of her tremors racked up her body. He then withdrew completely from her, not even touching her, caressing her or even acknowledging her in any way.