This is the edited version thanks to Umm, I really don't know his User name here so Phi-san thank you. You know who you are.
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Hundreds of years in solitude, personally I didn't hate it nor loved it either. I'm a predator in the darkness of the night, a vampire. I walked amongst them. They seem not to mind my presence until I hunted for my food that is.
Pressing my back against the wall of a tall building it was my usual spot. I search around through the busy streets for my prey. I was a picky eater I only chose young healthy, beautiful woman for this, they held their veins the sweetest and purest blood there was. Every sound in this city was so loud; it made my ears throb hurting my head. Just as night fell I moved to another spot were hopefully I would get my prey tonight. I hadn't fed in days any more and I would surely die.
Just as I was giving up on my search I saw her. Her bright blond hair sparked on that sea of black and brown heads. The sway of her hips from side to side and her sweet scent drew me in. I followed her from a distance, I noticed that I wasn't the only one following her, two shady looking humans were also tailing her.
She stepped up her pace and headed towards an alleyway. The two human males followed; I stepped up my pace and went in the same alleyway. What I saw made me angry they were molesting my pray. I punched the closest to her sending him flying into the trash a few feet back. I looked that the other, I could smell his fear as he looked at me. He dropped to the ground backing away I let him be.
I turned to the woman she was indeed beautiful her fair soft looking white skin glimmered in the dark, her expose neck made my stomach rumble in hunger. She looked at me with her deep blue eyes shocked.
Had I done something wrong? Was she still shaken by the event that just happened? Did I scare her?
So many questions ran through my head. Then she opened her beautiful mouth and screamed. "Watch out!"
I quickly turned around the man that I let be, he had grabbed a metal bar. He smashed it in my head. Normally I would not even flinch but I hadn't fed in a few days rendering me weak. I held my head dropping into one knee.
"You bastard!" I hissed through my teeth.
I grabbed his face and smashed it against the wall. I was flaring with anger.
"Hey are you alright?" she asked her voice ringed beautifully in my ears.
"Um yes I'm alright are you?" I asked her. A stream of blood trailed down my head to my face. "Oh" She said surprised by it and she reached down to her bag and pulled out a cloth. She wiped the blood off my face and said with a smile on her beautiful face.
"Thank you for saving me. My apartment is near by let me take care of your wound it's the least I can do to repay you"
What was wrong with me? I came to here to kill her and drink her blood. Why was I acting this way? I quietly followed her to her home. It was a nice looking apartment, as soon as she opened the door her scent hit my face again making my stomach rumble and this time my fangs tingled. She made me sit on the table while she looked for the first aid kit. I sat quietly concentrating on the wound preventing it from closing. She came back holding a white box with a red cross on it.
"Ok let me see" She said placing the box on the table. She slowly moved her small fingers through my straight hair. I could feel her hands shaking a little as she cleaned the wound.