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Hi, i have read alot of mamono stories. I notice they usually come in 2 flavors.
1. romantic (guy fall in love with monstergirl)
2. femdom (human get defeat, capture, enslave, raped by mostergirls) it can become loving femdom eventually.
The first 2 are good and enjoyable in their own merit. But i think there can be a 3rd type category, one that is less explored.
3. Humanity come out on top.
In an alternate world humanity triumph(with their coordination teamwork, industriousness, scientific innovation) over the monstergirls(unorganized, physically superior) race and established dominance.
The reason I came up with this senario is because humanity is always losing. Even in the Canon monstergirlencyclopedia universe, humanity is losing territory; losing land, female population is being converted into monstergirl, losing net population in general.
I think this is an interesting take on the monstergirl story one that more creative and unique from the norms. It also has alot of potential for a long story or series of short stories set in an alternate universe.
Also how hard humanity dominated could be up to you, whether mamono are second class citizen or slaves in a human dominated dystopia. Humans probably cement their dominance and maintain their control of the world through the used of some tech/ magic.
I was wondering if you could put your writing skills to the the test, and try to add more variety into the MGE genre.
NOTE: As a response to this request, I've decided to start with a short story with some maledom of an inari which as romantic as I can make it. The official Monster Girl Encylopedia states that the monster girls will use whatever means possible to obtain the one man they want, whether in or out of a harem, whether it's conquering and dominating humans, becoming submissive depending on a man's tastes, allowing themselves to be sold in slave markets, or even disguising themselves as humans and living among them normally, only revealing their true selves after they've found a man for themselves. If I can get more feedback and plots on these types of stories, it would be a big help.
Fetishes: maledom, gentle sex, love, romance
Tags: monster girl encyclopedia, monster girl, mamono, inari
The conquered women all stood near the wall. The market was open and the buyers were ready for another round of buying and selling to take place.
The slave master walked forwards and stood at one end of the line. He blew his whistle. 'Remain in line and look pretty! You'll be fetching a good price today and might even get a good home depending on whom you be nice to, so move your pretty asses!'
The girls lined up along the wall, some sulky, some excited and ready to be taken to their new homes. There was an outbreak of whispering and giggling among them, a few of the girls snorting in disdain at the thought of how cruel and uncaring their new owners would be, and the others reassuring them with headpats and hugs that just because they had been conquered didn't mean their owners wanted to mistreat or use them as living sex toys. Besides, it was quite possible to conquer anyone with a heart using the clearly incontestable power of love and the gentle but irresistible force of persuasion.
Some of the girls were even pushing and shoving at each other, both to show dominance and playfully to annoy the others. They were all in the same unfortunate situation, and they had no idea what was in store for them.
It was the late twenty-first century, and the war between monster girls and humans was in its death throes. The conquerors had already annexed most of the territories of the vanquished as they could, and only a few places left where they were putting up a half-hearted last-ditch effort to stop themselves losing their pride and honour in the annals of history, but they and the victors already knew who was winning. Anyone who had been losing territories as quickly as the subjugated army and who had already lost over half their land within a few months of fighting, even while using skimpy outfits or fighting completely naked and using their skills in seduction and pole dancing on the battlefield to distract and conquer their enemies, hadn't got a ghost's chance of defeating them.
The monster girl army had almost lost every single piece of territory in their clutches to the humans, and they were about to have every last portion of land they owned taken over by the humans in the a few weeks. The worst part was how easily it had happened. Thanks to their unmatched knowledge of technology and biological warfare, the humans had managed to take over almost every facet of the monster girl's life, starting with their homes, and moving on to their provinces. Soon, they had all disappeared into human hands.
A man walked up to the women lined up near the wall. He was of average height and build, and was wearing fairly ordinary clothes. The look in his eyes was that of royalty, however, and you could tell that if you crossed him or even passed a stupid comment about his appearance or behaviour, you might not live to see the light of the day.
The slave master bowed to him respectfully as he approached. While he was looking at the monster girls, the slave master began his sales spiel.
'We've got several kinds of monster girls of all kinds here, trained to cater to all the fetishes and dreams you could possibly have,' he said, sweeping his hand across the line of waiting mamono. 'If you prefer scaled girls, we have several lizardmen with salamanders,' β he indicated where they were standing, somewhere to the left of the line β 'and we even have dragons, wyverns, jabberwocks, and wurms if you like them.' He indicated a cold, poker-faced dragon standing with her hands folded, a disinterested jabberwock who was leaning back against the wall with one foot against it, a wyvern who seemed to be having trouble flying judging from how much she was flapping her wings while floating a couple of feet off the ground, and a chubby-faced, cute wurm who appeared very young for her twenty years. The man gave her an amused look, ignoring the rest, and looked ahead as the slave master kept talking.
'Also, we've got a few fluffy ones, like the yeti here.' He indicated a monster girl with white, fluffy fur and a gentle, sweet smile on her tanned face. Her whole body was tanned as well, with some muscle tone on her stomach and legs. She blew him a kiss and held out her arms for a hug, but the man simply gave her a raised eyebrow and walked a little ahead to the next group of monster girls, who were a jar demon, an alice, a baphomet, and an assortment of cute lolis. 'Here, we have some cute ones who want an onii-chan to call their own, and they'll fight each other for dibs on you if you like watching that. We also have given each and every girl her own personality, including warm, cold, indifferent, sweet, younger, older, MILFy, and whatever else you like. There's yandere, kΕ«dere, tsundere, and dandere, as well as every -dere inbetween. They can have multiple personalities' β he showed a chimaera consisting of a goat, lion, lamia and dragon who seemed proud, jealous, confident and drunk all at once, β 'and we can give you one of those yandere types mixed with tsundere too' β he showed another chimaera who was made up of several shifting bodies with faces: a shirohebi having blue flames in her hands and a crazy grin on her face, a jinko who appeared to be uninterested in anything at all, but who was glancing at the man out of the corner of her eye repeatedly as if hoping he would pick her, a sad-looking oomukade who had her arms half-raised in the air with a pleading expression on her face, and a satyros who was holding up a bottle of sake while jerking her hand towards herself and giving the man a saucy wink. His cold glare didn't have any effect on her, since she began pouting at him, sometimes like a human supermodel, sometimes like a sulking child, and slipping her fingers between those of her other hand to show she just wanted to hold his hand, not get him drunk and take advantage of him when he was passed out β at least, until it actually happened.
'We can even give you the types of monster girls who are dominant and take control of everything by wresting it from you β or they can beat the shit out of you if you don't give in.' He gave a rather evil grin and raised his hand, palm up, towards an eight-foot tall amazoness who was sharpening her blade with a rock, casting glances of pure hate around the place, both at the slave master and the monster girls around her. When her eyes fell on the new buyer, she gave him a disgusted glance while raising her sword and making the rock slide across the sharp edge with a horrible screeching of metal on stone, then dropped it. She kept her gaze on him as he walked parallel to where she was. As he reached opposite her, she raised her hand, palm-up, and then lifted her sword above it.
She brought it down with shocking force, the sharp edge hitting her hand. She lifted it up and turned her palm towards him, showing him that no damage had been done. She gave him a wicked smile, closing her hand into a fist and raising her middle finger at him. She wiggled it back and forth, sneering at him, then dropped her sword and raised the other one at him too. After giving him the double bird, she lowered her hands and went back to working on her blade, glancing at him repeatedly out of the corner of her eye with a mixture of disgusted and sultry glances, licking her lips as she thought of beating the crap out of him if he chose her and then forcing him to apologise for no reason. He might even be dressed in nothing but a smile while he cooked her meals every night after she hunted, getting a few swats on his ass if he got her preferences in food wrong, and some more as a reward when he was done. The man gave her an equally disgusted glance as if reading her thoughts, moving on ahead to the next set of monster girls.
'If you're not into being a househusband, we have the 3D greenies,' he went on, showing a group of ogres sitting casually against the wall. 'They can bear hug you hard enough to break your ribs, or spank you like a piece of meat. And their kind of lovemaking is almost never gentle, unless they've had several rounds of rough, hot and dirty sex. They won't take kindly to you asking them to slow down, it just makes them go at it harder. So as long as you want a waifu who doesn't listen to your demands and will have her way with you every night, one or even several of them are perfect.'
One of the ogres glanced up lazily at him, and then chuckled. She brought her hand to her naked breasts and dug her fingers in, wincing at the pain from tittytwisting herself. She tweaked her nipple, crushed her own breast, and even slapped it around a few times. She lifted her slightly bruised tit to her lips and wrapped them around the nipple, sucking away at it and looking at him. Her expression clearly showed 'there's so much pleasure in pain, innit, boy?'
The man sighed, rolled his eyes, and walked on, deciding that anyone in the ogre family wasn't for him.