Hi everyone! This is my very first story. Please vote and comment. All constructive criticism is welcomed.
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It was a Friday night and I was a little mad. My friend Mayella (liked to be called May or Sissy) had dragged me here to this club called "The Raven." It opened about a week ago and Sissy wanted to give it a try.
Now I'm not really one to go clubbing but I had promised Sissy that I would go to a club with her for her birthday. Today was her birthday. She just turned 19 and I had promise her.
So here I sit at the bar sipping my Pepsi. (I use bar when really it only serves non-alcoholic drinks)
Sissy was out on the dance floor with two guys. She was kissing the guy in front of her and grinding the guy behind her. Sissy was desperate to get laid tonight.
Sometimes I couldn't help but be jealous of her. She had a nice body. She was a little over weight but she knew how to show it off and it just made her look sexy. Her hair was dirty blond and reached almost all the way to her ass. She was a small 5' maybe 5'2" and had blue eyes. She had a sort of sexy personality. She loved to flirt with both guys and girls. She was also very confident.
Me. I was just a plain 18-year-old girl. I was maybe 5'4" or 5'5". I was overweight but I didn't look sexy. I have been dying my hair since I was 15. It reached to the middle of my back and was thick. I liked my hair and my eyes. My eyes were green. Sometimes my right eye would look blue. I hated my smile. My gums would show every time I smiled and I had little self-confidence. Plus I was shy.
The song ended and sissy came over to sit next to me while the two guys left.
"Hey Nilla," Sissy said as she sat down. Nilla was her nickname for me 'cause my skin was so pale. "I'm leaving for the night. Is that OK or do you want me to stay with you a bit longer?"
"No that's OK," I replied. "I was just going to finish my drink and leave"
"OK!" She looked like she was going to burst with excitement.
"Let me guess?" I said. "They're vampires?"
"How did you know?"
"You look like you're going to burst and I know how much you love your vampires."
"You gotta try it Nilla! They're the best lovers. You gotta loose that cherry of yours soon sweetheart. You're 18."
"Jeez, why don't you just post fliers around?"
"I'm serious Nilla. It's not that hard. I bet if you went up to any guy in here and asked them to fuck you they would."
"Yeah, right. You sure you're not confusing me with you?"
"I'm serious."
"Go fuck your vampires."
She laughed, pecked me on the cheek and ran out the door.
As she ran out the door I had this really strong feeling that I was being watched.
I turned in my seat to search for the pair of eyes watching me. I found them in the back corner.
The man they belonged to was gorgeous. His eyes looked deep brown. His skin was a dark chocolate color and he had no hair. He wore a black shirt and black pants. He looked like he belonged in a gang except for the cloths and the lack of tattoos covering his body.
The most amazing part of him was eyes. When you looked into them you got lost. They kept everyone who looked into them memorized till he let you free. I was no different.
I don't know how long it was before he dropped his gaze.
When I was free I paid for my drink and left.
My home was only four blocks away so I had walked here.
As I was walking down the street I felt as if I was being followed but every time I turned around no one was there. So it was a relief to finally get to my apartment.
I locked my door and turned around to go to my room but before I could take a step, I walked into a tall, hard, muscular body.
I looked up into the face. It was the guy from the club!
