Granted from most of the reviews I have gotten on this one it kind of made me wonder why I even try to make my own story. But then of course what you guys have said isn't as bad as I've seen on my fanfiction. You are going to be more truthful than they will be because in all honesty 90% of the writers on these sites do not even speak proper English at all. I just ask those that are reading my stories that you do not judge before you finish. These stories are my own and are not created by anyone else. If someone wants to say otherwise I will provide the direct copy written proof.
Btw my pin name will be changed when it goes to print. So I will allow you to know that it will be different if you want to see the press release.
Annie Angel
Chapter Two
"Mitsuki!" Fumiko calls out in the woods on the pack territory. Her eyes widen when ropes tighten around her foot. The next thing she knew she was hanging upside down. "Hey! Let me go!" She shouts looking around at the culprit. She heard a giggle. She saw Satoru hiding behind a big tree. Her face explodes with anger. "Young man this is the last prank you will pull on one of your parents!" She transformed her hand to form claws. One swipe and she was free to land directly on her feet.
"Eeep!" The ten-year-old boy squeaked out. He starts running only to run face first into a wall of muscles. Arms rose up to catch the blond haired boy. His blue eyes rose up to look into his father's blue eyes.
"Satoru, what have you been doing to your mother?" The blond man asks while his mate comes up to them. Her red hair billowing out behind her.
"Just a little trick?" He said as he looks at his mother sheepishly.
"You little, brat." Fumiko says as she hits her fist to the top of her son's head. "Just be glad that I am not human. That could have broken my leg."
"You should chill, Satoru." Kenji says to his son. "Now, go to your room and wait for us." He swats his son on his rump making the boy run as fast as he could. He turned to his mate. "You're too hard on him, mate. He is just a boy after all." He smiled as he watches the boy run. "Besides, what are you doing out here?" He asks her.
"Mitsuki is missing again." She told her mate. His face shows his irritation.
"That girl needs to learn not to run off." Kenji growls out as he storms off. 'Everyone! Let me know if any of you knows Mitsuki's where about' He sent out the message to all of the members in his pack.