You guys.
Your reaction to this story surpasses everything I ever hoped. Thank you so much! I hope I keep up with your expectations.
Once again, oodles of merci to Doctime for reading, editing, encouraging, questioning and all around doing a great job of helping me become a better writer. I changed quite a few things after he sent the chapter back to me. I anxiously read it until I couldn't see it anymore, but I might have let slip a few things.
Enjoy!
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The air was fresh and cool, a typical May night. I ran, feeling the cool air through my fur. All sorts of scents assaulted my sense of smell: the freshness of newly grown leaves and the dry, slightly bitter tang of fir sap; the earthy smell of the ground beneath my feet and the sudden scent of a startled doe I crossed in my hurry. I tried to ignore all these wonderful new scents. I needed to focus my attention on running, but also on the distinctive spicy scent of nutmeg and cinnamon that would warn me of Gabriel's presence.
I climbed all the way up the steep mountain that towered over the Lake compound. It wasn't very high up, but the trees were becoming sparser at the top of the nearly bald mountain. I reached the stony summit panting with relief, and turned around to look down at the compound far below.
I could see the entire lake. It was a rather small, narrow lake, at least five times as long as it was wide. My Alpha had been right across the lake from me when he answered my challenge. It would take him quite a long time to run the whole way around, so I had a good head start.
Unless he swims across
, my wolf let out smugly.
Oh he wouldn't. Would he?
I eyed the calm, dark surface of the lake. I didn't
think
he would swim across; he probably could, but it was still quite a way to go, in the dark and in pretty cold water. I wasn't sure what to put above Gabriel's wolf, though. While our human forms preferred a smart, charismatic Alpha to an overly muscled one, our wolves still relied on strength and usually acted by sheer stubbornness. I sat down and sniffed the air. I couldn't smell him yet, but his earthy smell was so similar to that of the forest around me that I wasn't sure if I really would be able to pick it up until he was too close.
But wasn't the whole point of this chase in getting caught?
He has to work for it
, my wolf explained as I turned to pad down the hill, still heading east.
He needs to know he deserves you. And you need to be strong, to deserve HIM.
I snorted softly as I started running again. I wasn't going to try and understand males and their ego tonight.
A sudden howl broke through my concentration and I slowly stopped, surprised, to look back up the hill behind me. He sounded much closer than I had expected him to be. He had found my tracks. My heart raced with excitement, and I turned to run faster.
I nearly tumbled down the rest of the hill, and stumbled loudly, in a crash of broken branches and crushed leaves, into a clearing. I startled a small group of Weres in their human forms who had been sitting and chatting there, in front of a small cabin by the water. I froze as they stared at me.
One of the men suddenly gave me a bright smile and stood up before he turned towards the forest and cupped his hands around his mouth. "She's here!" he shouted loudly towards the mountain. I hesitated only a second, torn between the urge to tackle the young Were into the water and the more visceral need to run. Sadly, I didn't have enough time for the first idea, so I went with the latter and dashed right through them and towards the trees on the other side of the clearing. I heard the women's encouragements and the group's amused laughter, and cursed myself mentally for letting myself be seen; they would obviously point the Alpha in the right direction if he stumbled upon them as well, which would happen if he was following my tracks. I wasn't aware of how long I had been running, but my wolf was getting tired and restless, and the Alpha's patience was probably waning.
But... where was he?
Appearing out of nowhere without a sound, a large, dark shape suddenly leaped at me and tackled me from the side. Together, we rolled between the trees and further down the hill in a snarling tangle of dark fur and limbs. We landed hard on the gravelled bank and he rolled on top of me, growling and pinning me down on my back, lunging for my throat. I snarled and struggled, but froze when his teeth lightly closed on my throat, his chest rumbling with a warning growl. A single word broke through my thoughts, pushed upon my conscience in a tone of command.
"SUBMIT."
And I suddenly really wanted to submit. With all my rapidly beating heart.
I felt myself go limp as I responded to the order for a few moments, but instantly rebelled against it.
You said you wouldn't command me, Gabriel,
I thought furiously, and struggled against him again. I folded my hind legs and pushed my paws as hard as I could against his stomach, throwing him off of me. The big black wolf backed up in surprise, obviously taken off guard. I got to my feet to face him, and barely had enough time to notice how large - how much larger than
me -
he really was before he growled at me, his hackles rising in warning.
Oops.
I'd gotten him upset, but God, he was a beautiful beast, a huge wolf and yet a graceful one as he stood his ground, his glowing amber eyes bright and piercing as he glared at me. And all of a sudden, I saw him brace himself to jump.
I took a single step back towards the water just before he lunged at me. He tackled me again, but we were too close to the lake and we both rolled straight into it with a loud splash.
I shifted back to human form by reflex from the sheer shock of the cold water and surfaced with a loud gasp. Shivering, I quickly stumbled out of the water and collapsed onto the grass above the bank. I heard a booming laugh behind me and turned around, outraged, to find Gabriel standing in the shallow water, stark naked. "G-glad to s-see
you're
having f-fun," I hissed at him between clattering teeth as I crossed my arms over my bare chest in a futile effort to warm myself.
"I am," he laughed. He grinned wickedly and moved closer, the water rippling around him. I watched him silently, all my anger fading as I let my gaze travel across and down his body. He really was beautifully made: tall and lean like an athlete, with wide shoulders and a strong, defined torso that narrowed down to a lean waist. The dark water only reached to his knees, and I appreciated his strong, muscular thighs for a moment as my gaze latched onto his groin, where his large cock stood up to attention. Obviously
he
wasn't bothered by the cold water, I though wryly, and I looked back up to his face to see his smile completely gone as he stared at me with a heated gaze.
I stood up and turned to face him and pure, hot desire suddenly pooled in my groin as he slowly waded his way towards me. He easily climbed onto the bank and reached out for me without a word. His hands wrapped around my arms and I let him pull me firmly to his chest as he leaned down and slanted his mouth over mine in a deep, crushing kiss.
I moaned, melting instantly, parting my lips for his forceful tongue. It pushed against mine and I pushed back, demanding, wanting to taste him as he tasted me. My heart was thumping madly in my chest and I felt as if all my boiling blood had left my head to rush down lower. I let out a muffled groan of frustration and wrenched my arms out of his grip to reach up and roughly dig my fingers through his hair, pulling his mouth harder against mine as I kissed him back. My wolf was close to the surface, much too close for me to be patient. The chase had me so turned on and ready for him that I knew he could probably smell my arousal above everything else.
Gabriel growled deep in his throat in response, his hands moving down to my thighs to lift me up and carry me into the woods. Not once did he break the kiss as he walked between the trees and lowered me to a soft bed of grass and leaves. He pressed me into the ground, his hands desperately roaming across my bare skin. I moaned as he cupped my breasts and broke the kiss to lean down and close his mouth over one of my erect nipples. A loud gasp escaped my lips and I tugged hard on his hair as he sucked the sensitive bud into his mouth, his teeth grazing my skin and sending pure pleasure straight to my core.
His other hand had travelled down my abdomen and between my legs. "Oh, Gab..." I let out shakily as his fingers slipped between my wet folds to find my warm entrance and slowly slide inside of me. My legs wrapped themselves around his hips and I pushed against his hand as his fingers thrust more forcefully. "Gabriel!" I gasped. "Please..." My wolf simmered at the surface of my conscience, begging for more. I was more than ready; I had been for a week, and I could tell he was just as impatient as I was. "Baby, don't tease me!"
He leaned back over me and kissed me hard, his fingers moving in and out of me, bringing me closer and closer to my release. I slid my hand down across his chest to reach down and brush my fingers against his long, hard cock; he let out a muffled, pained groan as my fingers wrapped tightly around him. His fingers left me and he hooked his arm under my thigh to push it up, spreading me open for him. I angled his hard member against my entrance and he broke the kiss to look down at me, his gaze intense and darkened by desire. I shut my eyes with a moan, arching my back desperately to press my hips against his, but his other hand moved up to my chin to tilt it up. "Open your eyes," he whispered. "Leah.
Regarde-moi
."
I looked up at him, only to get lost in his hazel eyes while he moved on top of me, sheathing himself almost all the way in one thrust. He pulled out and thrust forward until he was finally nestled all the way in. Unable to hold his gaze, I moaned loudly and shut my eyes as my blood rushed through my veins to thunder in my ears, and I dug my fingers deep in his hair to pull his mouth to mine again.
He kissed me deeply, rocking his hips against mine in a slow, persistent motion. I felt every inch of him as he slid in; I had never felt so full, so complete in my whole life. I slid my hands down to his shoulders and held on tight, not caring that my nails were digging into his flesh. He groaned against my lips and broke the kiss with a gasp as he increased his speed, grinding his cock firmly against my clit. My orgasm took me completely by surprise, bursting in my groin to roll across my body like a tidal wave. I arched my back even more and cried out as he rode me through it, before his rhythm faltered and I felt him shatter in my embrace. He pressed his lips against my neck to muffle his shout as he came and I wrapped my arms around his shoulders, completely overwhelmed by pleasure and tenderness.
My wolf was howling in my mind, pushing to come forward. I could feel the skin of Gabriel's neck against my lips and fought down the suddenly irresistible urge to sink my teeth in it.
Not now,
I thought frantically, clinging to him.