**Note from Sabs**
Hey guys, this is my second ever post here. I took some of the feedback I got from the first post and hope that this one came out clearer. Most of what I write comes from a larger story, and this one is no different.
So to just quickly fill you in, the main characters here are Asher (the God of Hunt and Fire) and Raine (your average kitsune woman).
I'd really appreciate more feedback and any advice. Thanks a bunch for reading.
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Her ass was sore. That was the most annoying part. They had been riding for most of the day now and Raine wanted out of the saddle. She fidgeted, growing impatient with every hour that passed, but Asher had been unrelenting. It was for her safety, he had said, but she already felt safe.
An arm wrapped around her middle and his voice growled in her ear, "Keep squirming and I'll give you a reason to."
He was warning her, she knew that, but it wasn't working. "Don't make empty threats to me, boyo, I won't buy them." Her tail flicked in annoyance. She was 'really' tired of being in the saddle.
At least he could say he tried. Asher pressed into her from behind, and a shiver went up Raines spine. Maybe it wasn't an empty threat after all.
The kitsune reached behind her, feeling for him. When her palm pressed against his length she heard his breath hitch. Knowing she could make him crave her touch and attentions gave her a power she didn't know she wanted.
She stroked him as they rode, her fingers curled around what she could of him through the fabric. Now and then she felt him pulsate and twitch and she knew without looking that glint in his gray eyes would be there.
His hand wandered down her stomach and over her hips. He returned the affection, cupping her sex and pressing his fingers against the clothing between their skin. As the horse walked on the pressure changed and shifted. It wasn't enough for either of them. They would drive each other mad like this. She had begun to squirm again, her hips pressing into his touch, begging for more. "Asher..."
That tone killed him. Every time his name left her lips like that he would have given her all this realm had to offer if she'd asked. But she never wanted more of anything but him. He struggled with himself, "We can't stop..." she was a target now, and he was not about to put her in harm's way for the sake of sinking himself into her.
His fingers pressed harder when she let out a pitying whine. But Gods, it was tempting. He went to work undoing her pants, when the fabric around her hips loosened his hand found it's way inside. The new sound was not so disappointing. She was hot and moist already, their mutual teasing setting her up for more. His fingers slid between her folds and parted her. Stroking her lips he teased but did not enter her and she arched into him, silently begging. Her hand had stopped stroking him and his disappointment came second only to his need to finish her. He would be left wanting, but she wouldn't.
After several more minutes of him refusing to give her more he plunged a finger inside without warning. Raine jolted back into him, the surprise welcomed. "More... Asher, please..." he obliged her request and slid another in with the first, then a third.
He let his fingers fuck her slowly, drawing out the fire within her and letting it build until it threatened to consume them both. This was what she liked most, the torment before the fall. And he would give it to her as many times as she needed to satisfy the hunger that consumed her in those moments.
Raine let him lead her close over and over again, his fingers working her until she was slick with need. Each time he brought her to the edge he backed off, leaving her panting in frustration. "Asher-"
"We can't." He knew what she wanted, and he wanted it too. His voice must have given him away, the gravely tone informing her just how badly he regretted that decision. Raine grabbed his arm and pulled, drawing his fingers out of her. The silver haired man tried to slip back into her clothes but she wouldn't let him. "Woman." There was that warning growl again.
"Let me change clothes." He made a noise in his throat, "That's all, just let me change." She begged.
The horses snorted, tossing its head when Asher pulled up hard on the reins. He let the woman slide off and dig in the packs, pulling out a skirt. His steely gaze never wandered from her as she stripped her lower half bare and slipped into the new article of clothing. True to her word she packed her pants away and let him pull her back up in front of him.
He clicked his tongue and they continued on. "What was the point of that?" It hadn't taken much time, but it had hurt to see what he craved and not take it.
"You said we couldn't stop..."
"I did."