I had a wonderful response to my first post, thank you all so much; I'm truly flattered! I have tried to be a bit more descriptive this time, but in response to a comment about the second paragraph in the first chapter, I'm not giving up the goods just yet as I have a master plan to - dare I say it?! - write a prequel. Eventually. This is double the length of ch. 01 (in case you were wondering) and there is also some French at the very end which I have translated at the bottom.
Thank you all again,
Love, Lily. X
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Lara's heart was pounding, her stomach was flipping and her skin was tingling as she gazed at the beautiful man. He probably wouldn't appreciate being called beautiful, but his even, unmistakably masculine features made him so. His dark, reddish hair fell over his forehead, and his green eyes glittered with intent.
It's adrenaline, not attraction.
She tried to convince herself.
I could have died! Technically.
She studied her rescuer again. He was still holding her. Lara was amazed; she may not be overweight, but she was still a fully grown woman and he didn't seem to be straining at all!
"Brother dear, let's put Lara down, hmm?" came from the doorway. Lara jerked in the man's arms and saw Ava, the bride, watching them with amusement and interest. Her face flushed. The Dreamboat's eyes flickered to his sister then back to Lara. He slid her down his body slowly, till her feet touched the floor yet kept his arm around her waist. Lara tried to take a step away, but the man's arm was immovable as steel. She continued to squirm and lean heavily against his toned forearm as Ava approached them, smiling.
"Lara, I see you've met my brother,Ruari. Ruari, this is Lara Matthews. She designed and made my wedding dress and the bridesmaids' dresses."
Lara struggled to compose herself and tried again to disentangle herself from Ruari, who released her begrudgingly. She couldn't believe she hadn't realised he was Ava's brother. The two were strikingly similar, though Ava's hair was a lighter, more vibrant shade of red.
"Enchanted," Ruari said simply, tracing circles on her inner wrist with his thumb as he brought her hand to his mouth and turned it to plant a reverent kiss in her palm. Lara stared at him like an idiot, shocked by the intimate gesture which caused her thighs to tingle.
Damn it, where'd my sass go?
Through the roof with your libido?
Oh, there it is. Not helpful!
Nor is having a conversation with yourself. In fact, it's a common indicator of severe mental illness.
"Lara?" Ava asked softly, "Are you okay?"
"Hmm? Oh, yes. Fine, thank you. Wonderful, really."
Blabbering idiot.
"Lovely to meet you, Mr McCarthy,"
"Ruari, please. Such formality would be wrong between mates,"
and he was doing so well. It's a shame really
. Lara hated slang. Was it really any harder to say 'friend' than 'mate'? Honestly. Lara deduced from Ava's narrowed eyes that she felt the same and decided that they
would
be
friends
.
"Ruari, you need to go now. The bridesmaids will be here soon and we all need to start getting ready. Did you bring Lara's cheque?"
"Erm... must have left my chequebook on my desk," he said with an innocent expression, "I'll find you later, Lara."