Whore Four Score And Two Weeks

[This is a compressed retelling of Fronker's whore 94. The purpose is to include Chapter 10 (which was removed from the original). To avoid possible administration issues, all names will be changed, except the main character who will still be called Elisabeth. And everything will get skewed a bit, since I'm writing this so my fetishes will predominate.

BUT there will be no fetish changes involved in Chapter 10; there's no need - the original feeds right into mine. That's why I made a copy of the second half of chapter 10 (it is only that second half that is the source of my "inspiration" here).]

[The following contains no quotes from Fronker's Whore94, except for the Chapter headings, unless the word "Elisabeth" is viewed as a quote.]

Chapter 1 First Visit

Elisabeth was enchanted by the place. Naked women dancing when told to, fawning over everyone, fawning over her. By the end of her evening there, she was cruelly ordering them to please her better, and spitting in their faces when they did.

The boss of her boss - the director who with her boss had brought her here - smiled at her. "Yes, Elisabeth, treat them how they deserve to be treated. The fawning sluts." Elisabeth gladly spit in their faces again.

"Thank you mistress" they responded, kissing her feet.

"Such whores" Elisabeth thought.

Chapter 2 First Taste

Elisabeth was alone with the director. She so wanted to make a good impression. He was telling her of her great potential, if she developed in the right directions. She found herself fawning over him, so eager to please, to have him guide her upward. He encroached more and more on her personal space; she let him, pleased that he seemed to like her. A new job with increased pay was mentioned. Somehow he seemed to maybe indicate, in the common joy of her future prospects, that she kiss him.

She did. He kissed her. He asked her to dance for him. She did. He touched her, her arm, her side, a slight sweep of a breast - all while talking of that new job. His hands moved to her waist, he moved behind her, he raised her skirt.

Confused, but afraid to protest, afraid of losing that new job, she kept dancing.

She kept dancing as he raped her. Not knowing what to do or say, at the end, with him looking intently at her, she thanked him.

Chapter 3 The Promotion

Elisabeth, horrified by what just happened, is consoled by her boss. She confusedly lets him guide her into accepting a version of the new job: great offers of future pay increases, only minimal extra duties now. And a clause stipulating her total consent to everything that has happened. She signs off on her own rape.

At the end, her boss insist she leave his office dressed decently; she puts back on the sperm sodden panties she had removed after her rape.

Chapter 4 The Promotion

She learns that her new contract, agreeing to "dance a few times a week" which includes the requirement to be "dressed as specified", actual means dancing nude.

Neckle, a secretary to the director, instructs her about how to dance. By threatening to report Elisabeth for not performing to the letter of her contract, (which would break the contract but still leave Elisabeth's signing off on her own rape in tact), Neckle coerces Elisabeth into far exceeding the parameters Elisabeth had insisted on when signing the contract. Neckle treats Elisabeth as if she were one of those fawning dancing girls Elisabeth found so contemptible, and Elisabeth complies:

"Thank you mistress", says Elisabeth, kneeling before Neckle and bending over to kiss her shoes.

Chapter 5 Saturday Visit

Elisabeth must dance at the place with the other fawning dancing girl's (her contract specifies she dance as required to time and place). On Saturday she is there with the director. A valuable client of of the director's firm is enamored of her dancing.

The valuable client is an owner of the place; he wants her to dance there, among his fawning dancing girls, a few times a week. The director insists: this client cannot be refused. The director promises Elisabeth future greatness, future glory, becoming one of the superior people, rather than her remaining an implicit slave like all the inferior people.

Chapter 6 Registration

Elisabeth agrees. She agrees to be registered. She is humiliatingly examined and marked as a numbered whore.

And then, the director, cane in hand, says: "You are now a whore, my whore, I own you." Placing the cane on her asscheeks, "These are mine".

Whoose: He beats her with the cane.

"Hold position" she's told. (She had been required to exhibit herself - on her knees, legs spread wide, bending over, her ass raised high, her hands gripping her vaginal lips and spreading them apart, all while raising her head smiling.)

She holds position while whoose whoose whoose...the cane beats her thoroughly, ending with a strike directly on her cunt.

"Thank your betters." She, with her mouth and pussy, avidly thanks all involved.

Chapter 7 Office Duties

She is required to show up for work. Her position there is now "coffee girl". (In earlier chapters these "coffee girls" were mentioned as scantily dressed low level servers, who followed orders as directed, bringing things like coffee... and fulfilling other less clear duties.)

She and another "coffee girl" Laura (who, in chapter 3 was portrayed as hugely beneath Elisabeth) make themselves available to Elisabeth's boss in any way he requires.

Chapter 8 Induction and Training

She is told she needs to be trained.

She enters the world of those fawning dancing girls, or "whores" for short. She has a trainer, her "mistress". She must curtesy always, at each slightest instance of interaction with anyone as exalted as her mistress, her eyes always lowered until told she may deign to look.

She kneels behind her mistress and tongues her asshole, instructed about how to put her entire sense of being, the entire meaning of her life, into successfully fulfilling her tongue's mission of being pleasure inside her mistress.

She is shown more; told to scrub a floor, staying on her knees scrubbing intensely for as long as her mistress directs.

Chapter 9 More Induction and Training

Her mistress has her kneel, body and head tilted back, mouth wide open. Her mistress lights a cigarette and smokes it, using her as an ashtray. "I don't enjoy doing this" she tell Elisabeth, or rather "whore94" as she is now always known as; "but others do, so you need to be trained".

Elisabeth is given a break period, soaking in a tube. The director appears, plays with her pussy through the water, brings her towards climax.

Her mistress appears, makes her get out of the tub. Makes her sign various papers the director has brought. The director explains them to the trainer - all of Elisabeth's possessions and new severance bonus are now to be used to pay for her training. "I'm paying to have these things done to me" Elisabeth thinks.

The director tells the trainer he wants to use the whore's asshole (something the director had disstained to do after caning her). Her mistress screams at her to bend over and comply. As she is brutally taken she thinks how she had let this man rape her, beat her, and sodomize her. And she has yet to be paid anything.

Afterward, the director and the trainer smoke, with Elizabeth on her knees, head back, mouth wide open - their ashtray.

Chapter 10

Elisabeth is about to ascend the stairs from the training area to the area where the fawning dancing whores please the customers. She is naked except for stiletto heels, thigh height sheer stockings, a waist corset pushing up her bare breasts and leaving her cunt and asscheeks bare. Her wrists are bound behind her back, she wears a leashed neck collar. Her trainer holds the leash.

She is to appear as a slave girl.

"I am not really a slave girl" she thinks, tottering on the high heels as she hurriedly follows the pull of the leash as her trainer climbs the stairs. "It is just pretend".

She is exhibited to an important customer. "String it up" he orders. Clamps are painfully put on her nipples by her trainer, they are attached to a chain. The chain is hoisted and she is on tiptoe in agony. She grunts.

"Noisy" the important customer says.

"Be quite" her trainer hisses, slapping her on the face. She grunts again.

"Do something" the customer.

The trainer starts whipping her. "But they can't" grunts Elisabeth. The whipping intensifies.

"Be quiet" the trainer whispers.

Elisabeth holds herself still and quiet, accepting that she can casually be tortured for no reason at all. They are the privileged ones. Why? Why them, and me their whore?

As she dangles she hears voices she recognizes. A party of former coworkers have arrived, are sitting nearby.

Eventually she is let down, crawls on her knees to the important customer, kisses his feet, repeatedly thanks him, pleasures him avidly until he tires of her and her trainer pulls her away by the leash.

She is led on her knees to that party of former co-workers. Many of them were once her subordinates. Her boss is there. The director is there. Neckle is there.

She is led to kneel before the director. She kisses his shoes. "Thank you" she says to him."

"For what" he asks.

She thinks "For raping me, caning me, making me a whore."

"For everything" she replies.

"She crawls to each member of the party" kissing their feet and thanking them "for everything".

When she comes to Neckle, her "thank you" receives a responce: spitting spittle into Elisabeth's face Neckle also spits out "I told the director you would make a splendid whore".

"Thank you" says Elisabeth kissing Neckle's shoes, as she thinks how utterly hopelessly lost she has become and will continue to become.

Chapter 11

Elisabeth is at last working, now just one among the fawning dancing whores, smiling as the customers abuse her, smiling as her overseer berates her. Earning lots of money that she never sees a cent of. This is still considered part of her training, readying her for her "audition" which if successful would induct her into full whoredom.

Chapter 12

For her audition she is chained helpless to the floor kissing the director's shoes while Neckle whips her ass, required to finger her pussy if she does not accept what the director is telling her. She feels utterly helpless, pushing her fingers deeper inside herself while kissing the shoes and holding her ass high to receive the blows. So she withdraws the fingers, the shoes withdraw, the beating stops. She has accepted what she has been told:

She has passed her audition and will join the other whores, day and night. she will never be paid, not a penny. She is now their slave. She has for a long time now given herself to them, surrendered her freedom to their every whim.

She is now Neckle's slave. She has been trained to tongue assholes because Neckle wanted to have her own asshole-tonguing slave. She is now Neckle's maid, servant, 10% of what she earns goes now to Neckle. "Why is Neckle the privileged one? Why couldn't that be me and Neckle the whore?"

Epilogue (not Fronker): Elisabeth followed a descent of choices. At each step the offerings were erotically tinged with her hidden desires revealling themselves; although repulsed by each next descent, she was equally attracted by that prospect - lured by future promises of money the descent in the now seemed justified and excitingly attractive.