Thanks for the feedback, I will make those revisions in consideration from now on. As for the narrator I write in limited third person, we follow a person without using "I". The narrator is no one, but I will be clearer with who we are following.
Also, I apologize for the musical references, I don't want to do homework for this and I'd be lying if I said I couldn't work around it. It's just the one of the things I usually use to set the mood. My other works probably won't have music as a plot point.
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Mia
Sleeping was not on the menu tonight. Mia was upset with Sam's reluctance and it was creating some doubt. Laura had said he would be the last person to question her but so far out of the few sentences he did speak two of them were questions. Well not really two different questions rather just-
Mia sat up out of bed and rubbed her temples. She never gets stressed, nothing has ever gotten under her skin like Sam had. She's always had her way, no matter who tried to stop her. All her relationships ended by them calling her a control freak. Mia got up and walked to her office catching the time to be 2:34 and looked at her computer.
"They are right, this proves it." Mia whispered staring at the monitor. Her hand reached for the mouse to turn it on, paused, then clicked it. The screen lit up to show Sam's room from two different angles. Two hidden cameras. Mia wasn't ashamed though. She sat in the chair and watched him, Sam had done something no other man had ever done.
He got her attention.
And her obsession.
She shut it off for the third time tonight and let her head hit the desk. Mia was not used to whatever this was, this yearning for someone. She didn't want to call it love, not yet, they had just met. So, for now she resided to call it a crush.
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Mia woke with a start, her neck hurt and as she raised it saw she was sitting at the computer desk, monitor on. But Sam was not there, she blinked a couple times and realized that the shower was on. She checked the time, then remembered that she had arranged to get off work today, so she had nothing to worry about. But if Sam wanted to clean up so would she. Mia started to get up when the shower stopped, she sat back down and watched as the bathroom door opened, and a towel clad Sam stepped out. He was in good shape, but nothing toned, he still seemed so small and crushable. He went to a suitcase with his stuff and pulled out a polo, slacks, and boxers. Then Sam waved at one of the cameras and proceeded back to the bathroom to get dressed.
Mia frowned and shut off the computer, she thought she hid them well. Then she got out of the chair and went to her room. Mia took out her phone before she started the shower and called Laura.
"Hey Mia, did everything go as planned?"
"No, he's too shy, what do I do?"
"Oh, just force yourself on him, or tell him what to do. He may seem anxious, but he loves that sort of stuff."
"I kissed him, but he resisted after a few seconds."
Laura was silent for a moment as she thought.
"Have you tried bondage?"
Mia shut the phone off and turned on the shower.
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Sam
Sam paced across the room, his room. This was all too overwhelming, he was kind of bought by someone. Which was doing wonders for his self-esteem. The feeling that he could be wanted was flattering. The only thing that kept him propped up before was his band and the rest of the boys from the gentleman's course. This certainly threw a wrench in his calm life, but he did have a choice and if it wasn't for Mia's hungering gaze that would be the scariest part.
Either way he had a performance today and had to find a way to get Mia to let him go. He could see the hunger in her eyes, to be completely honest it scared him. To have someone like that lusting after him with power over his new home. He was going to become reliant on her, and that scared him even more.
The door across the balcony opened where her bedroom was, and she stepped out in a maroon silk robe. Sam kept his jaw from dropping, the dress at the event was nice. It was simple but did its job as clothing to cover her. This robe did not hide her, it was tied loosely around her waist letting her cleavage show a lot more, her long tan legs peeking out of the robe inviting his eyes to try to follow the cut into her. She was busy putting her hair up, no makeup. It always looked a bit odd to Sam, that might just be because most of the women he saw lately were at expensive parties and decked out in as much as they could put in their faces. Mia looked, natural. And she was already to him smirking at his gaze. Sam blushed and looked away.
"How about we spend today getting to know each other." she said pulling on the collar of his polo, her thumb rubbed the button reminding him that she didn't want to see him in clothes. He could feel his face growing hot and Sam took a second to build up some resolve and cleared his throat.
"I have a performance today," he said slowly and deliberately. "At one thirty."
He could instantly see the disappointment in her eyes as she stepped back folding her arms. Last night was late for both of them, Sam was nervous, and his mind went spinning from that kiss, not to mention that it was a long party and he didn't get dragged off until 11:30. They had both slept in to 10.
"A performance?" Mia asked, Sam good see her thinking back and remembering something. How much did she know about him?
"Yeah I play piano, in a-"
"What's the dress code?"
Sam gave himself a moment to process the change of emotion. From seductive to sad to excited.
"The, um, dress code?" Sam stuttered out.
"Yeah, what do I wear to come watch you? You can accept that I'm coming one way or the other, I am your ride after all." The smile had returned to Mia's face, a less sultry one.
"Casual, jeans and a T-shirt" Sam was trying hard not to lose it. He had to admit though, having someone control the relationship, or whatever this was, was a bit stress relieving. He no longer had to worry about maintaining it as much. "It's a three-hour gig. You don't have to."
Mia leaned in close and kissed his cheek, gently, not like the passion and forcefulness from last night and ignored his last comment.
Find something for us to eat, kitchen is in the right hallway from the living room." and with that she spun around and walked confidently back to her room. Sam couldn't help but stare at her butt that she was putting in some effort to gain his attention. She wanted Sam, and for Sam to want her. And it was definitely working.
"What do you like to eat?" Sam whispered as an afterthought to his musing about her body. She was beautiful, not striking, but soft and comfortable. Sam stopped mid step, comfortable, that's something he's never been with another person. On top of that he's never wanted to be comfortable with someone. Sam realized how much the training must be paying off if Mia was this much into him. Either that or she just liked his physical appearance, but then why would she want to spend time with him at the performance?