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Kyra sobbed piteously as she watched their police escort turn back to his large truck, his hand still placed warily on his gun that was still in its holster. She couldn't bear being thrown out of the country she had been born in and raised, so she quickly raced back to the policeman, prepared to beg with everything she had.
She grabbed onto his sleeve, tugging gently as her tears continuously streamed down her face, "Please! You can't banish me from my own country! I'm innocent! I swear!"
The man immediately unsheathed his gun, jabbing the nozzle into Kyra's chest. "Get back! Now cross the border like everyone else, murderer."
She glanced at the large group of others waiting for the border's gates to be opened. "I'm not a murderer!" Kyra's body stiffened as the metal of the gun's nozzle dug into her skin before she slowly turning to face the officer again. "Please, there wasn't even any evidence against me! It was completely circumstantial, and it was only pinned on me based on motivation!" Kyra began to step back, her body shaking with fear from the gun pointed at her.
"It was an unanimous vote of your guilt. Now, off you go before I call for my backup." He gestured with his head towards the two awaiting soldiers at the truck's sides.