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Kyra sobbed piteously as she watched their police escort turn back to his large truck, his hand still placed warily on his gun that was still in its holster. She couldn't bear being thrown out of the country she had been born in and raised, so she quickly raced back to the policeman, prepared to beg with everything she had.
She grabbed onto his sleeve, tugging gently as her tears continuously streamed down her face, "Please! You can't banish me from my own country! I'm innocent! I swear!"
The man immediately unsheathed his gun, jabbing the nozzle into Kyra's chest. "Get back! Now cross the border like everyone else, murderer."
She glanced at the large group of others waiting for the border's gates to be opened. "I'm not a murderer!" Kyra's body stiffened as the metal of the gun's nozzle dug into her skin before she slowly turning to face the officer again. "Please, there wasn't even any evidence against me! It was completely circumstantial, and it was only pinned on me based on motivation!" Kyra began to step back, her body shaking with fear from the gun pointed at her.
"It was an unanimous vote of your guilt. Now, off you go before I call for my backup." He gestured with his head towards the two awaiting soldiers at the truck's sides.
Kyra shook her head hastily, not quite ready to give up as she argued with the police officer, "I don't even know how to shoot a gun! I have family here that needs me!"
The man quickly grabbed Kyra by the shoulders, spinning her around and roughly pushing her towards the border with his hands still on her, "You had 24 hours until the banishment took effect. You had plenty of time to say goodbye, yet you didn't, so now you are being forced over. This was your choice."
Kyra finally looked at the massive metallic wall, fifty feet in front of her that harshly reflected the midday sun into her eyes. The border to Fell mostly consisted of steep mountains that were impassable, but at some points, a massive wall was put in place as a temporary border. The seven rulers of Fell had made the walls temporary, enabling the walls to be easily removed for when the nation expanded. Fell was already a large nation, experiencing a large growth in population and economic wealth, and it was preparing to war with Terran.
Terran was, luckily, to the east of Fell, and Kyra was being discarded into Hora, which was to the south and west of Fell.
Kyra finally took a deep, calming breath and resigned to her fate. She angrily ripped the police officer's hand off of her shoulders, her fiery red hair expressing her anger perfectly. She quickly marched to the borders as she joined the rest of the group, impatiently waiting for the guards patrolling the border to lift the gate.