authors note: The corrections I've promised have been made. Be sure to let me know if I've overlooked anything. I want the story to be as good as it can be. I appreciate all of the wonderful feedback, be it praise or criticism.
The story that follows is pure fantasy, the kind you might act out with a loving partner or think about when you are all alone. In real life a woman in this situation would not respond with pleasure, and would hopefully file criminal charges. I am well aware of this, and hope that my readers are too.
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Valerie was bored at the party and just about to leave, but she thought she'd better say good-bye to the hostess. She wandered around searching, but couldn't find her on the main floor so she decided to go up-stairs and look.
At the top of the stairs she saw an open door and peeked in but the room was empty. Catching her reflection in the vanity mirror, she stopped to admire her daring outfit. She wore a leopard print zip-up top and miniskirt with faux-fur trim. Thinking about how different this was from her usual style, she ran her hands over the material self-consciously. It was her first college party, and her dorm-mate insisted that all of her own clothes were too conservative. She had rummaged through a half-unpacked suitcase and found what she had deemed perfect. "It totally goes with your hair," her new friend had insisted.
Valerie's long brown tresses reached almost down to the back of her knees, and actually fell lower than the hem of the tiny skirt. As she shook her head to watch her prized locks swish back and forth, she thought she saw something move in the darkness behind her. She turned quickly but there was nothing. Laughing nervously at herself she continued her search.
There were several doors in the long hallway. She could be anywhere, Valerie thought. The next door was closed; she knocked softly. She didn't hear anything, so she pushed the door open. Edging in through the doorway, she gave her eyes a moment to adjust and scanned the room. On the opposite wall by the window was a king sized bed, but other than that, the room was empty. As she turned to go she felt a strong hand cover her mouth. "Don't try to scream" said a low male voice. "And you won't be hurt."
He pushed her across the room onto the bed. She could hear the blood pumping through her veins and she fought back the urge to yell. Yet there was something in the sense of danger that excited her that she didn't quite understand.
He crawled up behind her on the bed and leaned toward her so that his lips were almost touching her ear. She could feel his hot breath on her neck. "You're not going to scream are you?" She shook her head no. Her heart was pounding; her eyes wide with fear. He let go, and she tried to turn to get a look at him. He grabbed her face and shoved it back toward the wall. "Don't even think about it."
"Tell me, have you ever thought of having sex with a perfect stranger?"
When she found her voice, it came out wobbly and uneven. "Y-yes, but-"
"Shh, don't worry. It's going to happen, you don't really have a choice." He paused and ran the back of his hand over the delicate skin of her neck. "I'm calling the shots. You just do what you're told and everything will be fine, got it?" His voice was soft and reasonable yet his words where anything but.
Time seemed to stand still. "Valerie," he said. "Did you hear me?" Her blood ran cold. "Yes, I know your name. There's a lot I know about you. And yet, you know nothing about me. So you better do exactly what I say or you will be very sorry. Do you understand?"
She only managed to whimper a soft pathetic, "yes."
"That's more like it," he said, sliding his hand down between her legs. "Naughty girl," he chuckled. "No panties. You where practically asking for this to happen. Maybe you're not such a good girl after all. Maybe you're just a naughty little whore."
"No," she whispered. "I'm not like that-"
"Yes, Valerie. Yes you are. You're a naughty little whore. Why your pussy is all hot and wet. I want you to tell me that you're a naughty little whore."
Valerie wanted to cry. She couldn't do this. She could have laid there and just let it happen maybe but she couldn't say the things he wanted to hear. "I-I'm I'm naughty." She said weakly.
She felt a sharp sting as he slapped her hard on the ass. "That was no good Valerie. No good at all. I know you can do better than that."
Her face burned hotter than her ass as she held back the tears. "Please don't hurt me" she whimpered.
"Valerie, Valerie, Valerie. Love is pain." He slapped her again, and again, and again. He undid her skirt and took it off of her. He pushed his fingers up her pussy and pumped being sure to bump up against her tender g-spot. "Your cunt is wet and sticky. I know you're a very bad girl. If you don't confess to me, I'll have to spank you again."
"I'm naughty, I told you. I'm a bad girl"
He spanked her again, this time he didn't stop until he heard her sob. Her tears where now rolling down her cheeks. "What do you want me to say?" she cried.
"Tell me that you are a naughty little whore."