Author's Note:
Know how everything gets rebooted and ret-conned nowadays (e.g., The Amazing Spiderman, Superman, Batman, Star Trek, Casino Royale, Red Dawn, etc.)? Well, this
Series
is sort of envisioned like that... only, rather than movies, it'll be reboots of certain Literotica stories. Fan fiction of fan fiction, if you'll allow.
First off, a clarification:
the reboots published here will not be full-story reboots, but ret-cons only of particular
scenes
from those stories. In other words, this Series will be like movie "trailers" of re-imagined classics.
The scenes I plan to reboot are from stories published on this site that I personally liked --enough to read more than once, certainly. I could never pretend to be as skilled as any of the original authors, but something in their style, in the atmosphere of, and the characters living in, their stories (and those stories' particular scenes), spoke to me.
I will likely keep a lot of the original framework and phrasing of the authors, unchanged except for brief points where I might alter dialogue, back-story, perhaps tweak the sex scene, or add my own alliterative prose, just for personal stylistic reasons or for silly kicks. My poor attempt to re-write a tiny sliver of the original author's invention is, I think, just a means for me to project myself into that world.
I hope that the original authors of those stories from where I draw inspiration for my Trailers in this "Reboot Series" take my effort for what it is meant --a homage.
This first trailer is taken from a 2007 Literotica story,
"Quarrelling With Kaylee"
, by
en_extase
. He is a fine writer, with a number of stories on this site; I fully recommend all of them.
The
re-booted /ret-conned
story thus far
:
The narrative below begins around mid-Chapter 3. Kaylee, a sexy young college student, has recently come to visit and briefly stay with her older sister Melissa and her fiancé, Peter. There's an old family dynamic at play here: growing up, Melissa had occasionally flirted with Kaylee's crushes and dates, and, Kaylee believed, had even gone out with at least one of her high school boyfriends, back during Melissa's bitchier, skankier college days, when she was just a little wilder. (College does that to person, after all). Although all that was a few years ago now, and Melissa has changed --especially since her long-engagement to Peter-- Kaylee had been deeply, secretly hurt by Melissa's past behavior of seducing her men. Kaylee had always fantasized about getting back at her senior sibling for those past slights, but things are different now --rather than just being with a boyfriend, things are a little more serious. Melissa is engaged. To Peter, at that. Kaylee has always had a thing for Peter, too, from back when she was still in high school and he'd come to visit her then-college sophomore sister. But, again, that was a few years ago; nowadays, it's Kaylee who's in college --and she's in the very flower of her wild, adventurous youth, and at the height of her sexual power.....
The trailer starts moments after Kaylee has had an initially-casual conversation with Peter regarding his sex life during his college days; only faintly aware that Kaylee's subtle flirtations over the last few days have kept him in a state of uncomfortable half-arousal, Peter confesses to her that he didn't experience much back then. He is both astonished and confused to find himself erotically entrapped by his fiancée's younger sister's suggestive comment that she could help him make up for missed experiences .....
III
. . . . . . .
I briefly paused in my tracks, shocked at the comment. I felt a nervous flutter in my stomach, which promptly flew down to my cock and gave it a little life.
Goddamnit.
Before I could react, Melissa came back in.
"Food is ready!" I announced and quickly took a seat, desperate to hide any potential tent in my slacks.
The evening proceeded fairly calmly then. Kaylee's comments were significantly less risqué, if not less sarcastic, while her sister was with her. This was a relief, although I could have sworn she was laughing at me with her eyes from time to time.
After dinner, the girls informed me we were going to have a 'pajama party' and watch a movie. They picked up some teen humor-
slash
-spy flick-
slash
-horror movie about sex demons, secret agents, and requisite hijinks in college. Stupid, I know. Kaylee revealed she had watched it before, but since Melissa hadn't yet, had suggested it. I had remembered seeing it some time ago myself, and recalled it being somewhat silly but arousing at the time.
"So you can see, more-or-less, what college is really like these days...," Kaylee had explained to me, stopped to pause, then continued, "...-Mostly, less..". I had to think about that for a moment, as she grinningly sashayed off. She momentarily lingered by the stairs up to her guest room, turned back a bit, and finished, "...clothes".
Damn.
I wasn't really in the mood, since a rental night-and-popcorn evening in PJs is a weekly tradition Melissa and I had celebrated a few nights ago already, but I knew better than to go against two women when they had their heart set on something frivolous. Melissa and I changed into our typical bedtime loungewear; they were nothing special. Just your fleecy PJ bottoms and long-sleeved tee-shirt for her, and the run-of-the-mill plaid flannel pajamas pants and a tee-shirt for me. As customary for us, we were comfortably commando under our regular rental-night regalia. We came back out and put in the movie. Melissa immediately stole one side of the couch. Then patting the middle cushion next to her, "You can sit next to me!"
I gave her a dry smile and sank in next to her. Honestly, it didn't occur to me right then that I'd be sitting in the middle. Not until
she
came out. Kaylee's sleepwear consisted of a short thin white cotton top, an extremely short non-existent skirt, and socks. Though cut short at the waist and sleeves, her shirt was loose and had oversized arm-holes which would've given a great view of her bra --if she were wearing one. As it was, her bare side-boob visibility was high, deliberate, and achingly magnificent. The cut of her top's neck was such that it provided a teasing view of her cleavage, but only if one could breakaway one's gaze from the outline of perky puffed-up areolas that determinedly poked through the thin fabric. Kaylee also went through the hassle of putting her hair up in a pair of pigtails.
My eyes popped when I first saw her, and I'm positive that she knew it. I dropped my stare away as quickly as my wits would allow and grabbed the remote for something else to concentrate on. Even Melissa was taken aback for a second, then seemed to immediately dismiss the thought possibly as unbecoming of a big sister, making an innocuous comment about her sister's 'cute' outfit.
More like dead sexy.
Kaylee made a display of not knowing where to sit.
"Get on the couch! Don't worry, he won't bite," Melissa teased.
Pulling her arms back for a little stretch before sitting down, her top was pulled back to reveal a tantalizing display of her toned co-ed stomach. I couldn't help myself and tried desperately to watch out of the corner of my eye, without my girlfriend noticing. Next thing, Kaylee casually flopped down into the last cushion next to me.
She pulled her knees up to her chest in this cute little position. In a way, it made her look only innocent and vulnerable --with no hint of the playful predatory mischief I must've been imagining earlier. But the fact that her gorgeous, bare legs were drawn up, right next to me... . My mouth went dry as I did my best not to drag my eyes along the length of her body. That poor excuse of a skirt did nothing to cover up her thigh, but only a slightly better job of showing just the fleshy tip of where the arresting curve of her bottom met the back of her bare leg...
I brought one leg up and rested my foot on my other knee, then placed my hands in my lap.
Look natural...
I panicked that one (or both) of them would see the start of an involuntary erection forming in my loose pants.
Shit. Should've worn briefs. Tight ones.
My goal for the rest of the evening was to not tear my eyes away from the television, except to look at Melissa.
Just pretend Kaylee isn't even there.
We watched about a half hour of the movie before Melissa paused it. So far, it turned out to be your typical low-budget sexed-up teen horror spy flick: college students who happen to be rogue CIA agents, a vampiric succubus terrorizing the campus, lots of beautiful young people running around, getting into stupid problems while wearing next-to-nothing. Normally I could have appreciated the eye-candy without much fuss, but tonight I couldn't help but associate everything I was seeing with Kaylee. It drove my anxiety through the roof.
And my hormones.
