My thanks to MormonJack for edits and crits.
Chapter 8
"Are you over eighteen?"
"Huh? What?" The young woman standing in the aisle at the display of cellphones had clearly not noticed Liz until that moment. Short hair, no makeup— her fresh face didn't need any— sweatshirt over gym shorts. Trim, nice legs. J liked all kinds of women's bodies. This girl had a good one.
"Are you legally an adult?"
She looked Liz up and down, wariness and hostility replacing her initial shock. "Who wants to know?"
"The woman who just recorded your shoplifting." Liz pointed her phone at her, playing the short video she'd just made of the young woman snipping the security cable from the phone and then slipping the phone into her purse.
"You— I just wanted to— you don't look like—" She weakly waved a hand at the display, but couldn't come up with a response.
"No," Liz answered the unfinished question, "I'm not store security. Luckily for you. But not that lucky. You're going to pay for your stupidity."
The girl took the phone out of her bag and put it back. "I'm leaving."
"Won't help. I'll just show it to security and then put it on TikTok."
"Who the fuck
are
you?"
"I'm your guardian angel. Again, are you legally an adult?" To the woman's silence, Liz continued, "If you're under age I'll just show this to security and they'll send you to juvenile court. Might do you some good, although your parents will ground you until you're 85. If you're an adult—" still no answer— "you're in serious trouble. You picked an expensive item. Felony territory. Jail time. Just county if this is your first offense. If not . . ."
The shocked face answered Liz's age question. But she recovered quickly enough. "Fine," she said. "You got me. You FBI or something?"
Liz just laughed. "You go there?" She pointed at the girl's sweatshirt, that had the name of a local university on it and touted its women's soccer team. Pricey but worn-looking athletic shoes.
"What's it to you?"
"If that's the case then you're a smart girl. Stupid, too, pulling this stunt. You play?"
"Yeah." She'd been cowering a little from Liz's intimidation. Now she straightened up. "Varsity, striker. All-Conference."
"That's great. Congrats. Scholarship? Hate to see you lose that." Liz wagged her phone.
The young woman looked around. It was a big box electronics store and they were deep inside it, far from an exit. Liz watched the wheels turning behind the hostile eyes— which turned blank. "What do you want?"
Liz reappraised her. Attractive in spite of her hostile glare. Short black hair that was a mess, probably cut by a roommate. But nice features, an athlete's body. J would be pleased. "I have a proposition for you. Show me your driver's license."
"No fucking way."
"As you wish." Liz turned to head for the front.
"Wait!" Liz turned back. "Here." She pulled it out. Liz photographed it. Yes, legal, barely nineteen.
"Okay, Tracy, let's talk outside." Liz led her toward the exit. As they walked she asked, "So what made you pull such an idiotic stunt like that?"
"Sorority."
"Hazing? That's just—"
"Criminal? I'm starting to see that."
"Are they out here now?" They'd exited the store. Liz surveyed the parking lot. She knew where J was, parked close. She suddenly grew wet, thinking about how she was about to surprise him.
"They're coming back to pick me up."
Liz turned to her. "Okay, here's the deal. You see that car over there. The Porsche?"
"The shiny black one? Nice. That yours?"
"My husband's. You can see him in it. Good looking guy."
"Okay. Um, what—"
"You're going to go to him and give him this." Liz reached into her bag and found her notepad, tore out a page. Light green paper. Symbolic, like a playing field. "What name do you want to use?"
"Huh?"
"You can give him your real name if you want— I just saw your license so I know it— but I'm guessing you'd rather not have anyone else around here knowing your real name. So, think of a nice, sexy name. You know, something you'd pick if a Hollywood agent found you. You're quite attractive, more than you think you are. Great bod."
She looked at the note and Liz holding a pen, ready to write. "I don't know. Monique."
"Hi, Monique." Liz wrote the name and folded the note. "Here's what you're going to do, Monique." She handed the co-ed the paper. "You're going to go over to that hot looking car and you're going to give that note to the hot guy in the driver's seat. Tell him Elizabeth sent you. And then . . ."
The young woman had been focusing on the man in the car. Liz waited for her to turn back and give Liz her full attention. "And then you're going to get into the front seat and give that man a blow job."
"Uh, wait, wait!"
"Have you ever given a blow job?"
"What the fuck?"
"Fine. Doesn't matter. I don't care if it's your first time or your hundredth. Your next blow job is going to start in a minute and you're going to give it to that man in the shiny black Porsche."
"Your husband? Did I hear you right? You want me to, like, blow your husband? In pu— pu— right here?"
"You'll be hidden below the dashboard. Make sure you please him for as long as he wants. And afterward you'll come back here. If you've satisfied him I'll delete the video in front of you and you'll be free."
"I— uh—" The girl scanned around, looking desperate. "They'll be coming back. They said they'd be waiting for me. My sisters. I can't— there's no time." A glimpse of hope flashed across her face.
Liz squashed that in a second. "They're not your sisters, they're your abusers. And they won't be back soon. They'll keep you waiting. Just to torment you."
The co-ed closed her eyes.
"But don't worry, I can take care of them. He's a great guy. You'll like him. Make sure you eat every drop of his come."
The girl opened her eyes. She swiveled them around wildly, searching for an escape, and almost said something, but she held herself back. She took the notepaper and walked to the car. Liz watched her tap on the driver's side window and hand the note to J. Then she went around and got in the passenger seat. J turned to her. Liz wished she could hear the conversation, which was animated, at least on "Monique's" part. Liz got pointed out, followed by gestures Liz couldn't interpret. J put a hand on the girl's shoulder, calming her. Even from across the parking lot, through the reflections in the windshield, Liz could see him turning on the charm. His hands moved to the co-ed's face, soothing her. Amazingly, soon they were kissing. J was an excellent kisser. She was talking, he was nodding. More necking. He lifted the girl's hand and kissed it as if she were a princess.
The co-ed's face told Liz everything. J was a fast worker. Sooner than Liz thought possible, even given that Liz had cornered her into it, Tracy/Monique's head dipped out of sight and J sat straight, a beautiful smile on his face.
Liz caught his eye and blew him a kiss. He made a short nod and then he was looking down at what had to be a wonderful sight for a man. Her crotch moistened more. Giving him these male fantasies always turned her on so much. She could see him talking to the girl, maybe directing her, maybe telling her how great she was, or what incredible pleasure she was giving him. Probably all of that and more. Liz knew from personal experience that his charm never stopped, even when he had his woman exactly where he wanted her.
Strong emotions washed over her as she watched, minute by minute, while the pleasure increased in his expression. She knew him so well and was so connected to him that she could visualize what her gift was doing to him with her head in his lap. She gushed so hard it was almost like coming. She would have run to the ladies room if she could have taken a step. Even now he was continuing to charm the girl. He was deliberately putting on a visual show of enjoying the blow job he was getting, grimacing and making sounds of pleasure she could hear in her mind, for an audience of one. Well, two. He could have let himself come, she knew, or told the girl what to do to make him come, but for their mutual titillation he extended the moment on and on.
A tiny compact car pulled up to the curb nearby, full of young women. Liz knew what to do. She caught J's eye again and made a stretching motion with her hands. She didn't want this to be a quickie and she definitely didn't want to miss the climax. Then she went over to the car and stood in front of it, letting the occupants see her take photos of them, the car, the storefront, and especially their license plate.