plotless, pointless, meandering shifts in personalities, step-daddy taboo bits, dub-con, wickedly dirty religious cult leader, and just a bizarre direction.
Honestly, I wouldn't read this past the first few chapters if you have a soul.
Also, please note that when it gets dark and weird it'll only get dirtier and darker.
Also, also, this is fiction and not actually addressed to any specific group.
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I'd almost gotten my step-dad's laundry put away when I heard his steps into his room. I wasn't ready for an encounter with him, and I had to hope he didn't find a reason to punish me. It was something he did now that my mom wasn't home as much due to her decision to care for her ailing aunt over the past few weeks. My step-dad upped his controlling manner and any misbehavior earned severe punishment while I was on his watch.
At nineteen and my freshman year at a small private college, punishment should have been a problem of the past. Yet it seemed I was punished worse and worse by the day. Recently, he'd determined spankings were the most effective.
I turned from his closet, aware a confrontation was inevitable given how close the tall man already was. And I had to look up into piercing blue eyes that were always far too calm despite his disappointment.
"There's a dish in the sink downstairs and my bed is wrinkled."
He'd fired the maid just to make me do these chores for him.
I looked to the mattress, but saw nothing out of place aside from the pillow corner exposed.
He went to the bed and sat on the edge, pointing to his lap in his silent demand that I bend over him to accept my punishment. The problem with these punishments included the fact that, aside from the humiliation, they left me drenched.
I went to the bed slowly. Did I tolerate this shame again?
"Five extra for not wearing a dress like a respectful woman of God should always be in during the day. Take those pajama pants off," he ordered.
I wasn't a child, and he knew it. I needed to refuse, but the words of self-respect didn't come.
After what couldn't have been more than ten seconds, he leaned forward, stretching a long arm far enough he captured me at the waste and ungently pulled me to his lap.
"Dad, I -- "
"Five more for addressing me with that tone." With a swift yank, he had my pajama pants and underwear down.
"Daddy," I cried, already ashamed that he had my small panties down my thighs, making me feel almost naked.
"Too late, sugar!" he replied, giving me the same name he used on my mom.
The first blow landed, hard, sending me forward on his lap. He pulled me closer, bumping my side to his erection. I'd never been so close to feel that before. He gripped me below my neck to brace me before the next spanking landed a bit lower on my rear.
Three more heavy blows and I was struggling, winding up with my chest thrust forward onto his firm hand, pushing down the neckline of my pajama tank top.
I wasn't a child. I didn't have to tolerate this. And I didn't want him to know how excited I was. "Daddy, stop!" I demanded. But I was still terrified.
"It isn't cold in here." His grip to my breast lowered to my tingling nipple. He pinched the peak that already felt tight with obscene arousal I had no control over. "If I find out you're having sinful thoughts, your punishment will be worse."
Not that the man was truly religious, he just liked to be in control. And, by the way he was touching me, he knew how to make sure to rile my body to a point that could make him claim I deserved punishment.
Now his hand rounded the curve of my stinging hind. Lower in a tormenting crawl while he also pinched and kneaded my right breast forcibly.
"Daddy, please," I squirmed more, twisting from his groping palm at my chest. The act only led to more pain as he squeezed my breast and held me in place by that strong grip.
"Not another word." His cock prodded my side, threatening to pierce my sensitive flesh. And the hand lowering on my rear found its mark, stroking my folds. "Just what bad thing were you doing while I was gone?"
I shook my head in my effort to be believed. "Nothing, Daddy."
He reached all the way to my nub that had begun to ache, exploring it. "Don't lie to your daddy!" he pinched the sensitive bundle of nerves, causing me to cry out.
"I was doing my chores."
Now his hold on my breast softened. "Doing your chores in my room." He spread my folds and plunged a finger into me. "I think my bed wasn't properly made because you decided to touch yourself on it." That finger pumped into me a few times.
"No, Daddy." Truthfully, I'd done that well before I started my chores. And hate his punishments as much as I did, they were still what I thought about. Him spanking me to the point I couldn't sit and then stealing my innocence.
"I'm never letting you leave this house again." He may have removed his hand, but soon enough, a smack landed on my core. It was quickly followed by several more rapid slaps that added to the blissful heat between my legs.
"I'm good, Daddy," I breathed, but my eyes were rolling upward.
"You've already acted like a little bitch in heat, haven't you?" He continued to pinch and pat me. "How many men have you fucked?" he sneered.
"None. I promise." I would have if he hadn't been so strict.
Several rapid smacks landed on my backside. "This pussy is too wet for you to never have experienced pleasure." He twisted so my head was on the mattress. "Bend over the edge of the bed."
I rushed to obey and bent forward on the bed, next to him.
He stood. "Lean forward further."
Again, I obeyed. He'd never been in a mood like this, and the possible punishment to come terrified me.
He plunged a finger into my throbbing core, pressing inside in what must have been an examination.
I couldn't help the arch to my back, which had him bent forward against my back to yank my top downward. "You like this, you little virgin tease!" He spoke as though I'd committed a heinous crime while also being innocent.
He returned upright, pressing that finger deeper into my enveloping wetness. I didn't realize how good it felt until he pulled it away, but soon his hard cock bumped against me.
So much heat bubbled inside me at the realization of what was about to happen. But he was my stepdad. Sure, a man of forty that every friend I had happened to have a crush on. Even I did if not for how big of a controlling jerk he was.
"Daddy -- "
"If this is what it takes to teach you..." He slammed his cock hard against my entry, which hardly yielded, causing me to whimper. "You're going to learn better than to misbehave." He pushed and pushed into me, breaking my barrier as he went into me as deep as my body allowed.
I was helpless. Unable to do anything but fist the blanket beneath me as my stomach pushed against the mattress.
"This is the punishment that happens when a woman misbehaves the way you do." He had a bruising grip on my waist, rapidly thrusting so hard I bobbed on the bed.
Amidst the pain was also a strange pleasure I tried not to pay attention to. This was meant to be punishment and if he knew it caused an ounce of bliss, he'd take that away and make it hurt like my still-stinging spanking.
His hand tangled into the long hair at my nape and pulled upward, arching me close to him in an angle that sent shocks through me with every pump. His movement slowed to a rhythm and angle that hit a perfect spot. "You're not going to be bad again, are you, Sugar?"
"No, Daddy."
His free hand went to my breast, yet again adding a sensation I loved. This may have been meant as discipline, but the way he rocked added to my building desire for release that I couldn't let him know about.
My gasp as he continued gave away my secret.
His fist tightened in my hair, adding to the building need for release he caused. "You better not enjoy this, Sugar." It felt as though he deliberately touched me in ways that made my body responsive, whether I willed it or not.
I wanted to fight that building pleasure. I might have been able to until he reached around me and found my nub, touching it -- toying with it.
"Daddy..." I pleaded against the blanket in my hope he wouldn't find out. I couldn't lie and claim I hated it, though. That could lead to countless punishments. And he might come up with any punishment.
How long did I struggle against my own body's response? By god, how long did he pump into me, riling my core and stroking my most sensitive spot. I felt dizzied in my struggle -- fogged in my brain as I focused on decreasing my physical awareness. That only made the sensations stronger in a way I couldn't make myself feel on my own.
I clawed at the sheets, but soon enough, his rocking and the sound of his heated breathing sent me over the edge. My muscles tensed, all of them, letting me ride out that wave of absolute bliss I'd never in all my nineteen years experienced.
But that release had him pushing me down to the mattress. "That was bad, Sugar." He pulled out, smacking my rear three times in rapid succession before he said, "On your knees."
I rolled over to sit, still a bit loopy from the orgasm. I looked up to him, uncertain what he actually wanted.
"On. Your. Knees. With the back of your head to the mattress." He pointed toward his feet.
The realization of what he planned to do relieved and frightened me. I would have to put that thing in my mouth?
He grabbed my nipple, firmly pulling me toward him and downward. I had no choice but to land on me knees and look up to him.
His massive hands gripped both sides of my head before he pushed his cock to my lips, smearing my own desire against my mouth that opened in submission.
He plunged in ungently, knocking the back of my head to the mattress. "I should be knocking you up for what you just did."
The thought sent more want and deep fear into me. I couldn't become pregnant. I had no husband. He was married to my mom. No one would want me unwedded with a baby. I would shame him and my mom.
He began to piston into my mouth, holding my head with a tilt, so I looked upward to him as he pounded into my throat. "That's my bad girl, take your punishment."
Soon, he shoved so deep I couldn't breathe and his trimmed pubic hairs scraped my face. Blasts of seed shot into my throat and he pushed deeper, cramming my head against the side of the firm mattress.