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"Come on guys, where are you taking me?"
"You'll see, man. Don't wanna ruin the surprise."
Sam is turning 21 tonight. His friends Derek, Nate and Ben have 'kidnapped' him to take him to a club to celebrate his birthday. Twenty minutes ago, they grabbed him in the parking lot of his college, blindfolded him and threw him in Nate's car before driving into the night.
At first, the young man panicked, having not seen who abducted him as they came from behind, he thought he was about to end up in a cheap motel room's bathtub filled with ice and with his organs missing. Thankfully, though, one of them couldn't hold his laughter and burst out. Sam, recognizing Ben's voice, realized what was going on and calmed down.
"What the fuck, guys! You scared the shit out of me!" Sam shouted, half out of anger and half out of relief.
"Sorry, buddy, couldn't help it, we had to respect the tradition." Nate replies, looking into his mirror as he continues driving.
"I could've whooped your asses!"
Nate, Ben and Derek looked at each other in silence for a second before almost bursting Sam's eardrums with how loud they exploded with laughter.
"Good one Sammy, good thing you didn't bring your kung fu outfit!" Derek retorted between two wheezes.
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After a thirty-minute drive or so, the car comes to a stop.
"We're here, get birthday boy out and let's get the party started!" Nate says as he kills the engine and gets out of the car.
Sam removes the blindfold and gets out of the car. He looks around to take in his surroundings. He had never been here before. The group is standing in what seemed to be some sort of back street, behind the club. A bit away from where the four men are standing, the building is shaking slightly as loud bass-boosted music is heard all around. It was quite busy outside, people were sitting on the steps of the building's entrance, or leaning against its wall talking, kissing. As they finally head into the club, a burly man with a thick beard and wearing a suit that looks too tight for his comfort stops Sam to ask for his ID card. When Sam shows it to him, the man glances quickly at it and gestures for him to come in, scowling at Sam.
As soon as they get inside, they make a beeline towards the bar. To get there, Sam has to maneuver between couples dancing with the purpose of getting themselves all worked up and dudes that are way too close to him, swaying slowly as the alcohol makes them lose any hint of coordination. The DJ is blasting electro music that seems to shake the room with each beat. The crowd's volume makes sure the lyrics, if they are even intelligible, go unnoticed by the human ear. A thick cloud of sweat and the sweet smell of alcohol fills the air.
They arrive at the counter, where Derek slaps Sam's back vigorously.
"Okay, so here's the plan, Sammy." Derek explains, raising his voice as loud as possible to be heard over the music. "We're gonna get shitfaced, have some fun on the dance floor and then, for the really fun part, go get ourselves some ladies for the night!"
Nate and Ben shout "Yeah!" as they slam their hands onto the counter.
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~Two hours later~
After two hours of heavy drinking, bad dancing, and the exchange of an endless amount of lewd jokes with a lot more slaps on the back, the four friends start their quest for one-night-stands.
Ben, being the shortest of them all but definitely the most outgoing, starts a conversation with a redhead in a green summer dress and her brunette friend. A few feet away from the ladies, Sam could see Nate talking to a dark skinned woman. They soon walk away from his sight and head towards women's bathrooms.
"Need help getting you a chick?" Derek says, laughing before making his way to the dance floor to see what he can reel.
Sam rolls his eyes and goes back to the bar. "One beer, please."
"Here, from the cutie over there." The barman brings the young boy a pint and nods in the direction of a girl sitting five seats away from Sam.
The boy whips his head in the indicated direction and spots her. She smiles at him and begins approaching. She's wearing a tight blue dress, short enough to show off her shapely, thick thighs. She seems to be standing at around 5'6 tall, a head and a half shorter than Sam. She has short, wavy blonde hair that curls up down her neck. Blue eyes, thick, black-painted eyelashes with faint freckles ornating her face. Her lips glistened as they reflected the club's light. Her peach white skin makes Sam almost want to bite a chunk out of it to see if it's as sweet as it looks. As her hips sway as she walks up to him, the intoxicated boy could admire her curvy figure. Sam tries to be as subtle as a drunken, horned up young man can be when checking out a bombshell's body. She sits down next to him and as she leans on her forearms against the counter, her small, perky breasts push against the soft material of her blue dress, revealing a very generous view.
"How's the drink?" She says with a smile.
"Um, yeah. G-good. Sooo good. Yeah...very...good..." He blurts out, his brain going blank with all the alcohol it's been bathing in for more than an hour now.
"Got your tongue all twisted there, huh? First time being hit on in a club?" She chuckles before taking a sip from her own drink. She seems to be enjoying his lack of charms, probably happy to get the upper hand.
"It's my birthday today."
"No shit?." She retorted with a grin as she checked Sam out.