I am rewriting my original story Under the Black Flag. I am trying a new writing style and hope the story makes a bit more sense as we go along. Anyway, enjoy!
Part One
Winslow
I am scrambling along the blood slick deck to get to my fallen crew mate. I slide next to him and assess the blood flowing from his sliced arm. My hands are steady as I wrap it the best I can, the battle continuing to rage around us. I squeeze the man's shoulder and we exchange encouraging grins as I hear another man go down a few yards away. I swear under my breath and make my way to him, dodging fighting men and fallen bodies. Too many. Too many of us have fallen. We are not going to win this fight. The thought hits me, making me stumble as I get to him. He stares into my eyes as he clings to my sweat soaked shirt. I watch the light fade from him as he slumps to the deck. My teeth grind in rage as I look wildly about the ship for our captains.
The two captains are locked in a duel, swinging at each other with bone crushing strength. Their swords clashing together again and again. My breath catches as I see the other ship's captain make the move to cut my captain down, his body falling to the deck with a dull thud. Their captain turns with savage eyes, willing anyone else to challenge him. He tries to shake his shoulder length black hair off of his neck and face, but it is plastered to him with sweat and blood. He raises his sword above his head as my crew begins dropping their weapons. I am studying the blood turning his thigh dark when I feel his icy gaze on me. I am still kneeling on the deck holding my dead crewmate. I break the stare first and put my hands over my head. I have never been a good fighter. Too skinny and not aggressive enough for the sport. The ship grows silent as the captain does a slow circle, his sword still raised, the waves crashing against the ship the only sound. When he finishes his scan of his crew he lets out a loud whoop and his crew jumps into an answering war cry. They begin celebrating and move throughout our ship looking for whatever goods they can gather.
A huge man with a long braid of bright red hair hauls me to my feet. I glance up at his weathered face and blink as I take in the faded gray bandana wrapped around his head covering his left eye. A gnarled scar runs from his hairline under the bandana and through the corner of his mouth. He shoves me in front of him to be gathered with the remains of my crew. I look at the remaining five of us, all beaten and bloodied. We are herded across to the other ship and I see the black flag proudly snapping in the wind above us. It has a single white hourglass tipped on its side against the black background. So this is the ship of Captain Bayless, a ruthless captain with a reputation that precedes him. Why the fuck did we stand and fight? My whole crew was damned from the beginning. As we are ushered below deck to the brig, the last thing I see is our ship going up in flames.
As the night wears on each member of my small crew is taken from the brig one by one. We wait in silence in the musty dark until I am the only one left. My body is exhausted and I need food, water, and sleep. The huge man with red hair and the bandana finally comes to get me. My joints ache as I follow him back up into the cool night air. I cannot see my crew anywhere, I know this is not a good sign. I try to prepare myself for my certain death as the man leading me pounds his fist on a door. The captain opens the door and nods curtly to the man. As he turns to leave I catch a quick glance at his face. There was something about the look on his face, but I don't have time to read it. I follow the captain into his quarters lifting my chin to hide my fear.
The captain walks behind a large desk and sits, appraising me for a long moment. I am about to open my mouth to say something, anything, when he motions for me to sit. I oblige him and wait tensely on the edge of my seat feeling my pulse pounding.
"What is your name, age, and role with your old crew?" the captain finally speaks. His voice is surprisingly low and soft. I blink, surprised by the tone.
"M..my name is W..Winslow. I am t..twenty-five. And I was... I am.... A surgeon...," I reply, quickly adding, "Sir."
He continues to stare at me. His blue eyes glimmer in the lamp light. He looks as tired as I feel. As the silence stretches on I feel my mouth go dry. I am going to be killed. This is it. I am so focused on my wild train of thoughts that I jump when he sits back and clears his throat once.
"Alright, boy." He says, "I am in need of a surgeon on this ship. Will you serve me and my crew? Or shall I end your life and send you to Davy Jones?"