Here is a little story for your enjoyment. The story is presented in three chapters, and all have been submitted.
Obviously it's not the third part of
Emily & Ellen
. I'm still working on that.
E & E 3
is a long tale (similar in length to the first two parts) and may take some time yet to complete.
However, hopefully you will find this little tale interesting. It is a bit different from my previous stories in that there is no actual sex in the story. I hope that won't disappoint. But I have formed some ideas to submit an additional version of this story, but one in which the plot goes in the direction of reluctant sex.
This is usually where I encourage my readers to post their comments and observations about the present story. I've discovered through experience that making a general and open invitation of that nature is not the best way to handle the matter. I very much and very genuinely enjoy comments related to the literary elements of my stories.
BUT, really, if you are a budding junior attorney and just have to post to let everyone know about the dire legal ramifications of the actions in the story, or the potential divorces and child custody battles that will arise from the tale's plot line -- well, I'm really not interested in reading about that (and I'd surmise that very few others are either). This is an erotic literature site: just enjoy the story (or don't, and click on some other story and bother some other author with your pseudo-legal babblings).
AND if you just have to post a comment that is really nothing more than you venting your anger at women in general, who in your estimation are all skanks and whores because they might occasionally have less than entirely morally upright sex, and you just have to lash out at women (even, and most pathetically, fictional women) because somewhere in your past some woman done ya wrong, well I'm not at all interested in reading your rant in that regard.
AND there is a permanent marker mentioned in this story. If you feel moved to post to give me the unabridged history of permanent markers and their antecedents: sorry, not interested in that either.
ALSO, if you're posting with the hope of influencing the story line, there is no need to do that either. My stories are in final form when I submit them and before you see the first chapter.
OH, YEAH. And I really don't need any opinions on whether or not anyone feels I've submitted this story in the wrong category.
HOWEVER, ALL THAT ASIDE: if you have comments or observations on the literary aspects of the story (characters, plot, plot progression, settings, writing, imagery, etc.) those are very welcome and eagerly read and responded to.
I finally found the button to turn off anonymous comments to my stories, and that's bound to block at least 90% of the most lame-brained comments.
Anyway, thank you for your interest and please enjoy the story.
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Rita's Bet -- Chapter Two
The front door opened, and I jumped a little. I had been that lost in my recollection.
"Well, Rita," Rhi's mother said, "right on time. Please do come in," she added as she stood back to allow me entrance. I knew Mrs. Paulson very well and, in spite of not having been in her presence for a long while, could tell that something seemed not quite right about her demeanor. I could hear, was it condescension in her voice? Did I detect an almost mocking tone I had never heard from her before? Ridiculous. I dismissed my feeling as just the product of interacting with someone I had not talked with in over a year.
I was stepping through Rhi's front door now, rather than vice versa, because the scarlet and blue of my school, East, had gone down to defeat three days previous on Thanksgiving at the hands of the gold and white of Rhi's school, West. The score had been 32 to 27. It meant West had won the intra-district bragging rights for the next year. And it meant our bet had been resolved: I was stepping into Rhi's house now to pay off my lost bet to her, rather than the other way around.
I supposed Rhi might enjoy this. Certainly she would enjoy the experience more than she would have had West gone down to turkey day defeat; certainly more than I was about to enjoy the result of our bet. But was I getting the impression right that her mother was going to enjoy this every bit as much as Rhi?
With nothing else to do I stepped through the doorway feeling as if I were shrinking by the second.
Again that possibly derisive tone of voice as Mrs. Paulson said, "You know where the rec room is, don't you, Dear?"
"Yes I do," I said, the first words I had spoken since arriving. Mrs. Paulson smiled sweetly (and sarcastically?) at me and held out her hand in the right direction. I made my way through the kitchen to stairs at one end of the house leading downward. The Paulson's had finished the entire basement some years ago as a recreation room and entertainment center.
Immediately on opening the door I could hear a substantial babble, and as I descended the stairs the magnitude of my audience was revealed to me. The room was not exactly packed, but it was filled with many dozens of kids, seemingly about equally divided between boys and girls. At least I knew now that I had been right about the meaning of all the cars parked along Rhiannon's street. Some kids I knew from Rhi's side of the county highway: kids who had gone off to the new high school with her three years previous. But many I had never seen before. Many of the kids, probably most, were certainly seniors like Rhiannon and me. But others seemed younger, some even appearing, as freshmen and even sophomores sometime can, to be of junior high age.
As I descended the stairs all this came into my view and I also came into the view of Rhiannon, standing at the far end of the room laughing and talking with a girl I'd never seen before. Rhi's eyes settled on me and she smiled broadly and in the same sarcastic way I thought her mother had. What had I gotten myself into?
"Well, well," Rhi said in a loud voice to be heard above the gathered spectators, "it seems the guest of honor has arrived." This announcement was met with deafening cheers and whistles, and with every kid turning his or her head to catch their first sight of the loser of the bet, of the victim.
I didn't stop or even pause, just continued my progress to the bottom of the stairs and then began to slither my way through the assembled throng toward the other end of the room and Rhiannon. Midway through the room my progress was interrupted. Two girls I had to move between stopped me, grabbing my arms on either side. With their loose hands they pulled my top slightly down and outward to flatten out the front.
My boobs pushed against the fabric of my varsity letter sweater with the big E on it. There was really no avoiding those two mounds beneath my top since the E on my sweater could refer with equal validity either to East high school or my bra cup size. One of the girls read the writing on the front of my sweater. "East High School. Varsity Cheerleader. Co-Captain." She paused for just a beat then added, "Impressive!"