Here is a little story for your enjoyment. The story is presented in three chapters, and all have been submitted.
Obviously it's not the third part of
Emily & Ellen
. I'm still working on that.
E & E 3
is a long tale (similar in length to the first two parts) and may take some time yet to complete.
However, hopefully you will find this little tale interesting. It is a bit different from my previous stories in that there is no actual sex in the story. I hope that won't disappoint. But I have formed some ideas to submit an additional version of this story, but one in which the plot goes in the direction of reluctant sex.
This is usually where I encourage my readers to post their comments and observations about the present story. I've discovered through experience that making a general and open invitation of that nature is not the best way to handle the matter. I very much and very genuinely enjoy comments related to the literary elements of my stories.
BUT, really, if you are a budding junior attorney and just have to post to let everyone know about the dire legal ramifications of the actions in the story, or the potential divorces and child custody battles that will arise from the tale's plot line -- well, I'm really not interested in reading about that (and I'd surmise that very few others are either). This is an erotic literature site: just enjoy the story (or don't, and click on some other story and bother some other author with your pseudo-legal babblings).
AND if you just have to post a comment that is really nothing more than you venting your anger at women in general, who in your estimation are all skanks and whores because they might occasionally have less than entirely morally upright sex, and you just have to lash out at women (even, and most pathetically, fictional women) because somewhere in your past some woman done ya wrong, well I'm not at all interested in reading your rant in that regard.
AND there is a permanent marker mentioned in this story. If you feel moved to post to give me the unabridged history of permanent markers and their antecedents: sorry, not interested in that either.
ALSO, if you're posting with the hope of influencing the story line, there is no need to do that either. My stories are in final form when I submit them and before you see the first chapter.
OH, YEAH. And I really don't need any opinions on whether or not anyone feels I've submitted this story in the wrong category.
HOWEVER, ALL THAT ASIDE: if you have comments or observations on the literary aspects of the story (characters, plot, plot progression, settings, writing, imagery, etc.) those are very welcome and eagerly read and responded to.
I finally found the button to turn off anonymous comments to my stories, and that's bound to block at least 90% of the most lame-brained comments.
Anyway, thank you for your interest and please enjoy the story.
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Rita's Bet -- Chapter Three
A loud cheer filled the room, mixed with laughter so loud and raucous it was almost a collective scream. Again my eyes found the mirror. I have no idea why -- it would have been a humiliation to do so -- but I had the desire for free hands. I saw my imagined free hands as they tentatively touched at the tiny stubble my head of luxurious hair had become. In the mirror my eyes widened and brimmed anew with tears as I saw with my mind's eye my hands fluttering over the humiliating wreck my head had become. Finally my illusory hands lighted firmly on my head. On the palms of my actual hands, lashed firmly to the sides of the chair back, I clearly felt the short, sharp, and pliable stubble I saw in the mirror.
I desperately wanted to rise to my feet: to somehow escape this embarrassing, shaming, humiliating horror. I began to struggle against my bonds, to try to rise to my feet, needing movement to escape this nightmare, but Rhiannon's hands were on my shoulders in an instant, stilling my entirely futile struggles.
The next thing I knew Rhiannon was in front of me, leaning down, and her face a foot from mine. She picked up a handful of the hair in my lap and slapped my face back and forth with it and then shoved it at my nose. The sweet scent of my hair that I have loved so well filled my senses again, but this time with the strands I smelled no longer attached to my head.
"We're not quite done yet, now are we, Rita?" Rhiannon asked, again rubbing my own hair in my face.
I again went through the futile effort of trying to make words understood through my gag, but Rhi was no longer there. I heard a noise behind me like an egg being whisked in a bowl before being put on the griddle to make scrambled eggs. Then there was what looked like a large coffee mug in front of my face. It took me a moment to register that it was an old fashioned shaving mug, a cake of soap at the bottom and Rhiannon swishing a shaving brush around in the cup to build a head of suds.