Copyright Oggbashan June 2011
The author asserts the moral right to be identified as the author of this work.
This is a work of fiction. The events described here are imaginary; the settings and characters are fictitious and are not intended to represent specific places or living persons.
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"Sophie's joined a free-love commune."
Rory nearly dropped his beer.
"She's done what, Mary?" he asked.
"Joined a free-love commune," Mary repeated.
I was as shocked as Rory. I could have understood it if Mary had, but Sophie, her little sister? Sophie was too much of a tight-laced person. She belonged in the early 1950s not in today's swinging 60s.
"How?" I asked.
"She went down to Brighton for a weekend to stay with Maureen. Maureen was working Saturday morning so Sophie went into central Brighton to look at the shops. She never came back. Maureen rang us at two o'clock when Sophie hadn't arrived. That was all we heard until a letter arrived on the Wednesday to say that Sophie had joined the commune and wouldn't be coming back..."
"But, she's what? In her second year at university? And doing well?" I asked.
Mary nodded.
"And term starts in a fortnight?"
"Yes, Angela. We thought that Sophie wouldn't want to miss that. Mum was hysterical. She persuaded Dad to take a day off work that Thursday and drive to Brighton to see Sophie. They did, but it wasn't the daughter they knew. She was listless and scarcely aware of who they were. She seemed spaced-out and just kept repeating that she wanted to stay with the commune. Of course, Mum and Dad went to the police who couldn't or wouldn't help. After all, Sophie is 19 and therefore my parents had no rights if Sophie had decided to leave home."
"And she's still there?" Rory asked.
"Yes. I went myself on the Saturday. I wanted to persuade Sophie to leave the commune. They wouldn't let me see her. They scared me stiff. The leader wanted me to stay too. Once inside they shut and locked the main door behind me. If the taxi driver who took me there hadn't refused to leave without me, I might still be there."
Mary was really upset. Normally she was very levelheaded. If the commune had frightened her, Sophie must be terrified.
"What can we do?" Rory asked.
"You've got a rugby match in Brighton on Sunday?"
"Yes. Angela's coming as our tea lady, as usual."
"Could you try to see Sophie?"
Mary was pleading.
"We're going by coach. I'll have to speak to the team and the manager. I'll try."
"Please, Rory. Sophie's important to me, and to my parents. If the commune is really what she wants, then we might eventually accept it, but I can't believe that she made the choice freely."
Mary was crying. Rory and I hugged her. If we could help, we would.
We were naΓ―ve. We had good intentions. We just wanted to help a friend and her parents.
During the following week we had discussed Sophie several times. The team were willing to help because most of them knew Mary and Sophie. We thought that if we arrived at the commune with the whole Rugby team we would have a better chance of finding out exactly what Sophie wanted. Perhaps we could even load her on the coach and take her home.
That Friday Rory pulled a calf muscle during practice. He wouldn't be fit to play but we would still go with the team to Brighton. The team would eat the sandwiches I'd made, have the drinks I'd provided, and would try to manage without me. The coach would drop Rory and me off near the commune, go on to the match, and collect us afterwards. We thought that a few hours with Sophie would be enough to find out what had happened to her.
The company's largest coach turned up. The smaller coaches were all being used for other groups. Although the driver had some difficulty finding the commune's base, Rory and I were able to jump out a few hundred yards from the gates. The coach left and on its return would enter the commune because there was a turning circle in front of the dilapidated house.
The gates were wide open, hanging drunkenly, and probably couldn't be shut. We walked up the drive holding hands. I was sure that with Rory beside me I wouldn't have the difficulty that Mary had had. Rory is the team's lock forward, their largest and heaviest player and even limping slightly he looks as if nothing and nobody could stop him.
The house looked like a sprawling Victorian vicarage but draped across the massive porch was a crudely hand-painted banner reading "Temple of Free Love". The house didn't look free. Every window was fitted with external bars.
The door was ajar but we pulled on the bell chain. A distant clanging told us that the bell was still operational. A tall thin man emerged into the hall.
"Welcome," he said, smiling. "Have you come to join us?"
"No," Rory replied. "We have come to see Sophie, Sophie (surname omitted to protect her family)."
"Yes, she's here. I think she is working in the kitchen at the moment."
His smile had switched off as soon as Rory mentioned Sophie. "Dawn!" he shouted. "Can you take these people to see Sophie in the kitchen?"
There was a distinct emphasis on the word 'kitchen'. It sounded as if it had a specific meaning. Dawn had come out of the same room. She would have been attractive except for a deep scar on her face from her ear to the edge of a twisted mouth.
"OK, Carl," she said. "This way, please. The kitchen is at the back, downstairs. We think that the Victorian servants had to keep out of the way. We're hoping to build a new kitchen on this floor but we haven't got round to it yet."
As she was speaking, she led us past the staircase, opened a door behind it and climbed down dark stairs to the basement. We followed picking our steps carefully. At the bottom of the stairs the floor was covered in stone flags. Dawn turned towards the back of the house. We passed through two doorways, the second equipped with a barred grille, into a large room bare except for a raised dais covered in mattresses. It could have been an exercise area for gymnastics.
Dawn stopped just inside the door.
"Sophie's in the kitchen, just through there."
She pointed to a closed door on the other side of the room.
"I'll leave you to meet her. I'm sure she'll make you a cup of tea or something."
We started across the room. There was a loud clang behind us. Dawn had shut the barred grille behind her. Rory rushed towards it as Dawn ran to the stairs. The grille was locked with no sign of a key or keyhole. He shook it. It was immovable.
"I think we've been fooled," he said. "But we'll check if Sophie is here."
We opened the far door. It was a kitchen but showed no signs of use. There was a door on the far side, firmly locked. We searched around. Off the kitchen were a scullery, a basic old-fashioned bathroom with toilet, and a small storeroom. There were windows high up on the walls with bars on all of them. We were trapped.
"Angela? It is Angela, isn't it?"
Carl was standing just beyond the grille. Behind him was a group of women. Dawn and another woman were holding Sophie. Dawn's hand covered Sophie's mouth, gripping hard. Sophie's face was very pale. Her eyes looked frightened.
I went to the grille.
"Yes, I'm Angela. This is Rory. We came to see Sophie and to talk to her. It doesn't look as if she's here willingly, does it?"
"You are in no position to ask questions, are you? I'm in control here. And I'm going to issue some orders. If you don't obey..."
"Why should we?" Rory interrupted.
"...Because if you don't, Sophie will suffer."
Carl took a cut-throat razor from his pocket, opened it, and held the blade next to Sophie's cheek.
"Sophie? Tell them!"
"He'll slice my cheek open, as he did to Dawn," Sophie sobbed.
Dawn turned her face to show the disfiguring scar.
Rory whispered in my ear.
"We need time."
"No whispering!" Carl shouted. "Strip off all your clothes. We want to see that you aren't coppers' narks. Off with everything and push it through the grille. Now!"
The razor's blade dented Sophie's cheek. We started to strip. I had never been naked in front of Rory. I had seen most of him after Rugby matches but not all. Slowly we peeled off our clothes and passed them through the grille. One of the women took them, shook them out, examined them carefully, and then neatly folded them on a bench we hadn't noticed on the way in. I covered my pubic area with a hand. I was very aware that Rory had been interested in my body as he undressed.
"Good," Carl said. "Now go and sit on the mattresses with your hands clasped behind your head."
He looked at Sophie.
"Dawn, take Sophie away for a while. Don't worry, you two, you'll see her again soon but first, since you have entered the temple of free love, you have to experience what we are here for. Angela? Are you on the Pill?"
I shook my head. I wouldn't admit that.
"Oh well, that limits our activities somewhat, but never mind. Girls? You know what to do."
Sophie was disappearing towards the stairs still held by Dawn and another woman. Carl followed them, shutting the next door behind him. We heard the key turn in the lock. We two were in the large room, stark naked. At least ten women were in the corridor between the locked grille and the door Carl had locked.