This chapter is a spin-off exploring Sara's intense sexual experience in the Spa.
I introduced Sara as a counterpoint to Sofia - an unwilling and rebel judicial slave versus a more willing submissive. Their contrasting backgrounds create new dynamics and challenges for Miguel.
As English isn't my native language, I welcome any feedback on both the writing and the narrative choice of bringing Sara into Miguel and Sofia's story.
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SARA POV
"Stand up and look at yourself. Aren't you more beautiful now?" Mariana said, gesturing toward the mirror after finishing with my hair, nails, and body hair removal.
I stared at my reflection, hardly recognizing the young woman looking back at me. Yes, she was beautiful, but she wasn't me--she was the slave my owner wanted me to be.
"Don't make that face," Mariana chided. "You're a very pretty girl. Now, lie down on the massage table. We need to remove the dead skin."
I complied, and she began applying a blue exfoliating cream across my body. The rough particles scraped against my tender skin, making it burn.
"Stop! You're hurting me," I protested, flinching away from her touch.
"Hold still," she said firmly, continuing her methodical work. "This removes the dead skin. Better now than looking like a snake when all that sunburned skin starts peeling off." Her fingers moved relentlessly, and I watched as rolls of dead skin and cream accumulated on my body and the floor.
"How did you get such a bad sunburn?" she asked, working the cream into my shoulders.
I swallowed hard before answering. "I was sentenced to slavery, but I chose death instead. It would have been more dignified, but... I couldn't go through with it. So here I am." The shame in my voice surprised me. The logic had been simple: life always holds opportunities, the fight could continue, and I could still study, and maybe have a family. So why did I feel like my principles were peeling away with each layer of dead skin?
"Sunburn as punishment?" Mariana asked, her hands never stopping moving across my body. "Don't worry about it. I'll make you good as new."
"They submerged me in hot water and then left me in the sun for about four hours," I explained quietly.
"Did you kill someone, like the boss's girlfriend?" Her question was casual, almost friendly. "You can tell me. You know, many of my other clients only avoid wearing steel collars because they wear diamond ones instead."
Her words hit home. If I'd make money destroying the planet instead of trying to save it, I'd be at home right now, planning a vacation with my parents.
"I didn't kill anyone," I said. "I was taking an exam when the crime they convicted me for happened. I was even a minor at the time." It was my truth, but to the capitalist system, I was an enemy who needed to be silenced.
"Even so, they convicted you? How many years?" Mariana asked while working on my back and shoulders, removing layers of dead skin.
"Twelve years," I replied, my voice hollow. "My comrades were working for the Russians, but I didn't know that. What I thought was a protest action was actually a Russian intelligence operation. I just wanted people to realize how their cars were destroying the planet." There was no point protesting my innocence anymore--the sentence had already been passed.
"Come on, let's go to the gym," Mariana said, reattaching the leash to my neck.
"What are we going to do at the gym?" I asked, anxiety creeping into my voice.
"Come along--you'll like this part. It's where the good part begins."
"What good part?" I muttered. The only semi-positive moment of the day had been seeing my parents, and even that had been bittersweet.
"You'll have a shower and then a relaxing massage. You'll enjoy it," she assured me.
What I didn't enjoy was being led barefoot through a service corridor to the shopping center's gym. Walking through the main gym area, my body still covered in patches of blue cream, was an exercise in humiliation. The mirrored walls seemed to multiply my image infinitely, though most people pointedly ignored my presence. Only a few young men stared, then I saw her, an older woman probably in her fifties, sitting on a weight bench. As I passed, she caught my eye in the mirror, deliberately ran her tongue across her upper lip, pressed two fingers to her mouth in a V-shape before sliding them slowly down her chin. The gesture was unmistakable in its meaning, made worse by her predatory smile and the way her eyes raked over my naked body.
I took a deep breath, remembering Guard Helga from the prison and what my fate might have been if she had won the auction instead of Mr. Miguel. Guard Helga, with her smelly hairy pussy, who had made it clear exactly what she would do with me if she ever owned me. Sometimes, I supposed, small mercies came in strange forms--even if that mercy wore the face of a man who represented everything I had once fought against.
Mariana opened a frosted glass door and pulled me into the bathing area's antechamber. Steam hung thick in the air, and I could see the outline of a small pool and jacuzzi through the mist.
Mariana removed her silk kimono and hung it on the rack alongside clothes belonging to others who were either enjoying the space or simply showering after their workout. The communal nudity didn't faze me--after weeks in prison surrounded by naked women, it felt almost normal. What surprised me was the complete absence of sexual energy; none of the men had erections despite the presence of several beautiful naked women in the pool area.
"Don't stare--it's rude. You can see but not look," Mariana chided as I observed her body. My attention fixed first on her breasts, round and perfect--too perfect, really. Like everything else about her, they had been surgically enhanced to match patriarchal beauty standards. My gaze drifted to her vulva, so different from mine: completely hairless, without even the small patch above, and her labia weren't swollen like mine.
"Sorry, it's my first time in an upscale gym. Everyone's just... naked," I stammered. Was this gym a front for a swingers' club? But no, there was no sex happening--I was the only one aroused. Had anyone noticed my hard nipples and wet vulva? The shame burned through me.
"Come on, let's get you cleaned up." Mariana tugged my leash toward one of the showers and turned on the water.