The Fallen - Part 3
I know it has been a while since the last installment of this story. I have had other problems. More directly, I liked my first two chapters but did not like where the story was going.
I intend to get this story done now in a reasonably prompt fashion. Each part I publish will be a "Part" that will consist of one or more Chapters. Sorry I did not get the organization down earlier. Sorry also that you will need to read or remember the first two parts of this to follow the rest of this well.
I appreciate the views of those who think I should have written this in the third person although that did not accord with my concept. I cannot switch gracefully mid-story but I will make some adjustments in view of the problems that were pointed out.
My biggest problem is that I have a hard time accepting hard-core non-consent as erotic even in fiction. Yes, I know it is just a fantasy but it is a fantasy I have a hard time accepting even when I have it.
The story explores what a dystopian society would look like in which women were valued entirely for the sexual pleasure of men and breeding. Part of my discomfort comes from my fear that modern society is moving in that direction. I may not be helping things by creating fantasies of such a world. I would fear to be alone with someone who liked this story too much for the wrong reasons.
As before, my stories are not made to be read with your hands in your pants. I can't write such stories. There is much here that relates to matters other than sex acts. If you don't want to read that, there are many good stories that focus more exclusively on sex in Literotica and elsewhere.
Thanks to those who gave any thoughtful comments, positive and negative. As always, thoughtful comments are welcome but major changes will not be made in response to comments because I have now pretty well thought out the whole story. The unavoidable adolescent comments (e.g. "barf" or "total garbage") will be totally ignored as always.
Apologies again to the ghost of Camus.
Chapter 11 - My Fate
Ah Monsieur, it is so wonderful to feel you in me again. The way you started slow and now ... . You say that it feels like a home-coming. Well I guess it will be in a few minutes. It feels so good, oh, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes. Yes, please, you have my body and my soul, yes, yes, yes.
Oh lord, oh. Yes, Yes, yes. And the way you tongue my tit while your cock rubs me inside. Oh god, oh god. Yes, yes.
(Panting for breath) ahauh, ahauh, ahauh. When I, ahauh, feel you throb in me like that, and, ahuah, then, god, the warm blast in the center of my womb. You are the best, Monsieur.
Let us rest now a few minutes as I pant and feel the lovely gooeyness inside. All the contentment I feel can just settle into me.
Thank you, thank you, thank you. Yes, I can talk again now. We can lie here together and restore our strength before we begin again.
You want to take up where we left off last week on the story of my captivity and sex slavery. Yes, Monsieur, we can do that although it is not a very happy story for me. But if it will help you to do what you just did again, it would be in both our interests for me to tell everything.
Where were we, Monsieur? I think I told you how Sturmer, my former law school classmate, then called Alan Storm, began working with mobsters who were running our City of Orange. had told me that I would be humiliated, tortured by many men, given numerous piercings, made to look like a complete slut, and impregnated by Wayne Dickerson who hated my guts because I had represented his wife, Theresia, in a very nasty divorce case. I think I ended with me saying that Ms. Stein who also had a grudge against me, led me off from this very room No. 215 to see Dickerson to start the abuse.
Actually, as I now recall, Ms. Stein only took me as far as the elevator. There she said that she thought it would be more fun if I walked to my own doom and surrendered myself to Dickerson's tender mercies. She said I should take the elevator down to the basement, turn left, walk about 25 meters down the hall and go into the room with "Torture and Abuse No. 4" written on the door.
You may imagine Monsieur how I felt in that elevator. I was completely naked, naked even of hair below the neck as the Pleasure Palace had removed it all as part of my training at "Fuck University." I could not be more vulnerable but there was nothing to be done about it. My mind repelled at the situation but my obedience was automatic and reinforced by an ingrained fear of what would happen if I failed to do exactly as told to do.
When I saw the door labeled "Torture and Abuse No.4," I had to give the managers of the Pleasure Palace some credit for truth in advertising. When I opened the door, I could give the Pleasure Palace no credit for originality. The room seemed like a torture chamber from a grade B horror movie. It was unfinished with a large ancient wooden table that looked like a shop table from the last century, no windows, a dim incandescent electric bulb hanging from the center of the room, brick walls with various hooks and rings screwed into the mortar, and racks full of whips, electrical mechanisms and other devices. Wayne Dickerson was there, dressed only in a sort of black leather vest. He had a large erection and a nasty smile.
To my surprise, I also sensed another person to be in the room and saw a dark outline of someone in an almost black corner.
Dickerson looked at me in the most violent and lecherous manner imaginable before saying he had waited months to see me and let me feel what I meant to him. He said it was unfortunate some of his plans for me and the Pleasure Palace rules kept him from causing as much pain as he'd like me to feel.
Dickerson added something like, "I intend to do just as much as I can to make you feel pain like you've never felt it before and then fuck you over and up to my complete satisfaction. I have debated with myself how I would chain or rope you as I gave you what you deserve but decided it would be more fun to make you present yourself for every form of pain I intend to deliver without any support or restraint. It would be too nice to allow you to hang on chains or ropes and passively be beaten and electro-shocked like the wayward cow you are. No, you should be constantly forced to present yourself for pain and degradation. So, stand facing the wall, hold your arms up, and spread your legs about a foot so I can slam your hairless clam along with the rest of you."
I thought about what a crude hateful asshole Dickerson was, but realized that it just did not matter what I thought about anyone or anything anymore. I did exactly as I was told and immediately was jolted by some sort of shock on one of my buttocks. This shock was soon followed by numerous furiously administered swats with some sort of thin rubber like swatter. I cannot say it was boring for me but it seemed to go on forever and would have been boring to watch unless one enjoys seeing a man tire his arms with blow after blow, and a woman grimace and contort her body while struggling not to move. Soon the pain of holding my arms up was almost as bad as the pain all over my back and legs from the swatting and the involuntary twisting and flexing I did in reaction to the blows.
A few full-strength swats between the legs up against my naked vulva caused me almost to collapse into the wall. Then Dickerson told me to turn around and pull my arms tight behind my back to thrust out my breasts.
I hardly began to face him when Dickerson swatted me across the face. I had no opportunity to recover from that or decide how to hold up my head when he brought some sort of plastic fork up against my left breast. The shock was brief but incredible and followed with a similar shock across my right nipple. Convulsively, I moved my arms to protect my breasts but caught myself and pulled my arms back into place before he went crazy administering shocks randomly around my body.
Dickerson was right. It was much worse having to constantly present myself for his ministrations than it would have been to be confined by physical bonds.
After numerous shocks, I just lost control. I fell to my knees while still trying to hold my arms behind my back. I could not help but start to scream as Dickerson administered a shock to my nose and yelled at me to stand up because he wanted to start causing me some real pain. After he shocked each nipple again and held the prod across my labia, I could not hold my arms behind my back anymore and, without thinking, started begging for him to kill me. Dickerson only told me to shut up and held the prod to my pussy again with his left hand while using his right to swats my breasts.
I could not take anymore but I could not stop taking more. I was a primitive blob of consciousness consisting of nothing but pain. If I could have thought at all, I would have wished to die.