I've completed Janet's Tongue chapters 7 through 10: however, I'm unable to submit and publish them as my submission page doesn't recognize paragraph breaks in the new chapter(s). It did recognize paragraph breaks in previous submissions but not at this point in time.
Without paragraph breaks, the story is difficult to read. I've reported the problem to Literotica, so I assume the problem will be fixed forthwith or I'll be told how to insert breaks into subsequent chapters. In the meantime, this is an interim story.
I can see that this story WILL have paragraph breaks; therefore, I must be doing something wrong in trying to submit ch. 7 of Janet's Tongue although I haven't done anything different by submitting prior chapters.. Any suggestions from LitE or readers would be gratefully received.
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This is my strongest fantasy / daydream. I think of it as my "frame fantasy". I've been using it to masturbate by for years, but this is the first time I've committed it to print.
To make my fantasy relevant, I need to remind you that I'm a six on the Kinsey scale.
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I'm held captive on a 40' boat by two gorgeous women with great bodies. (A) is a (collar length) brunette and (B) is a (pixie cut) ash blonde.
On deck, there's a large metal frame with a rotating inner frame. I am strapped spread eagled to the inner frame. I'm wearing a dress with nothing on underneath. The boat is anchored a few yards off the pier where about fifty men and women are gathered watching what's happening on the boat.
The blond rips my dress down the front until my breasts are bared. She pull, pinches, and twists my nipples until I scream in agony. My screams elicit laughter and applause from the crowd watching this spectacle. B lifts her own dress and pushes her white cotton panties down her legs and takes them off. She puts them against my nose and mouth. They are sopping wet, sticky, stained with her discharge, and reeking with vaginal odor. She has been wearing them for quite some time and has been masturbating while wearing them. I gag from the smell, but she folds them inside out and shows the crotch to me. They are disgusting and make me want to gag just looking at them. She holds my nose until I open my mouth to breathe and then shoves them into my mouth with the crotch on my tongue. I almost throw up, but with the panties in my mouth, I don't dare. I would strangle on my own vomit so I keep swallowing to keep from vomiting.
She says, "Try to scream now, bitch." My saliva is getting the panties even wetter and i have to keep swallowing to keep from strangling. She tapes the panties into my mouth, so I can't spit them out.
IRL, I'm wet by this time and very close to an O. It wouldn't take much to get me off now. My fantasy doesn't stop.
The brunette (A) flips the inner frame upwards and locks it. I find myself upside down. My dress slides down my body, and my bottom and genitals are exposed. The people on shore are clapping and yelling obscenities.
'A' rips my dress away and I'm completely naked. She inserts a large candle into my vagina; then, attaches a clear plastic, circular shield onto the frame around the candle to keep the breeze from blowing it out; then she lights the candle; she and the blonde 'B' go into the boat cabin leaving me with the lit candle dripping hot wax onto my labia and into my vagina. I try to shake the flame out, but that causes hot wax to splash on my inner thighs, buttocks and belly. It hurts quite a bit, but I can't do anything to stop it.