Dear Reader,
This story was originally published in 2008. Supposed to be the first of a multipart story, until now, the rest of the story never got finished. Why not? Mostly because of the feedback from you, the readers. I suddenly found that I was the spawn of the devil. I was tried, convicted, castigated, excommunicated. I walked away with my "tale" between my legs. Why? Because I published a story of Non-Consent/Reluctance that included non-consensual sex in the Non-Consent/Reluctance category. Hmmm.
There were multiple mistakes that I made. I should have had the entire story finished before I published Part 1, but I was a "young" (read: inexperienced) writer and the personal attacks caught me by surprise. Instead of a response of "Oh My God!" and "So... why was it not what it seemed?" which would have led directly into the following chapters, I took my ego and pouted for a few years. Every once in a while, I considered that perhaps I should finish the story.
And then a few months ago, the time became right. I retired my ego, salved my mental bruises, and here once again, is Part 1 of "It's Not Always What It Seems."
Keeping the name in mind, expect that at the end of Part 1 of this story you may want to vomit. You may think I'm the Devil's Spawn. You may think this is the Worst Story Every Written... but remember, It's Not Always What It Seems, and perhaps you should check out the remaining two parts of the story...
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It must have been the sudden hush of voices in the mildly crowded hotel bar. Not that it was that noisy, just one of those "something's happening" drops in the background sound level. The majority of the room was full of businessmen and women, all of us away from our homes on Valentine's Day. I glanced up, the wrong direction, but saw enough faces glancing toward the door that I knew someone new must be entering the scene. Across the room at the noisiest table I saw one of the young "studs" -- at least they thought they were -- nudge his partner and immediately stand up heading my way at the bar. It was exactly as I'd figured; a somewhat stunning blonde had been in earlier; they'd bought her a drink but had obviously gotten nowhere as she was gone, and they were still here.
I finished my gaze around the bar, looking up into the mirror behind the bottles where I could see the cause of the commotion. Or, was that sudden decrease in the ambient din, a "lack" of commotion? I nursed my Martini, not really wanting to finish it -- just not my kind of drink really -- but my buddy Larry who'd left moments before had bought it for me. He was a Martini fan; I was more of a Scotch on the rocks. All that flashed through my mind moments before all thoughts of anything except the beauty standing in the doorway, allowing her eyes to become accustomed to the dim light, left my head.
Long black hair surrounded a picture-perfect complexion which would have been stunning if that's all there was, however, the form fitting red dress and long shapely legs made her just that much more stunning. I watched her reflection scan the room, and the look of distaste cross her face just as the "stud" reached her.
"Well, helllooo, hot stuff. Can I buy a pretty girl a drink?"
His classless words were barely audible to me from this distance -- maybe I just imagined what he said because I'd already deciphered what kind of jerk he really was from his interaction with the blond earlier. But there was no mistaking her retort; "Go Fuck Yourself," reaching my ears just as I took another sip. The harsh liquid burned my throat as my sip was interrupted by my internal guffaw, similar responses taking place at other spots around the room, tears momentarily rolling into the corner of my eyes.
I slightly shook my head, enjoying the humor of the jet jockey going down in flames, and decided I'd had enough of this shit. Motioning to the waiter I said, "I think I've had enough of this -- what have you got in a good Scotch?" His answer was pleasing to my ear and, as I awaited his delivery of the goods, my eyes once again caught motion in the mirror. As I looked up, her eyes caught me admiring her from afar. She didn't look away, so I nodded. Not much, just an acknowledgement that I'd been looking, and she caught me looking. I'd long ago given up on pretending these things didn't happen. I looked away, my drink arrived, moments later I sensed a presence off my shoulder.
Turning, I found myself eye to eye with those gorgeous green eyes. She smiled, but she didn't have to. "Buy a girl a drink?" She said, repeating to me virtually exactly what had shot the jet jockey down moments before.
"Only if you'll join me," I said indicating the open bar stool beside me. "Hooker" passed through my mind, exactly the look that she'd obviously cultivated. What else could this be? A gorgeous twenty something brunette in a businessman's hotel on Valentine's day, allowing herself to be picked up, or rather, picking up on me? I mean granted, I've got that same male ego I had when I was a young stud, but believe me, I don't fool myself. I'm still good looking at 37, even if I am becoming a bit "Folically Challenged." Not bald, at least not yet, but the forehead is a lot bigger than it used to be and I better not go golfing without a hat or I'll have a sunburn up top in no time. But I'm not bad looking; I run 5 miles a day (and have for damn near as long as this vixen's been alive) so I'm still in shape, but still... A terrible thing to think when you first meet someone, but I'm a realist.
"I'd sooner join you than dick wad over there," her arm flinched in the "stud's" direction; I didn't have to look; I knew who she meant. I observed her closer as she slid into the seat beside me. Her breasts were unencumbered by a bra; besides the tear drop cleavage of the stretch dress that exposed clear to the under curve of her breasts, their gentle sway as she moved and the two hardened nipples confirmed that observation. There was no bunching, no panty marks, no indication that she was wearing
anything
underneath. Despite all my misgivings for this evening, I had to admit she looked, and was, damn sexy, and desirable -- even if she was a hooker. She played that role quite well.
"Here on business?" I asked, the words out of my mouth before I realized the double entendre.
"Not exactly." Her look and slight frown told me she'd thought I'd asked if she was for sale, not exactly on script for the pickup.
Shit,
I thought,
how'd I blow that so quickly?
" What're you drinking?" I immediately offered, returning to script, and her tension eased just a bit. Negotiating was supposed to be somewhat subtle; we knew that others were in earshot.
"Chardonnay."
"You got it. Bartender! Chardonnay for the lady." He'd already anticipated the order, was just steps away.
"Coming up." He turned and I saw him begin to pull down a wine glass.
I returned my attention to my new acquaintance. Turning towards her, I offered my hand. "I'm Jim" I said simply.