Hello to all... I'm new here and not too sure how this works, but wanted to share something to see what people thought. I have only ever written for friends before and as such all my stories are written in the first and second person, so not sure how it will read. I had thought of re-writing it to be in only first or third person, but didn't want to take away from what it was intended to be, a story written for a woman, for her to be able to imagine herself in the story, for it to be about her. As this is the first time I've ever shared anything to a wider audience I'd really appreciate feedback, good or bad, and if a new muse might be out there it'd be lovely to hear from you.
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Arms full of bags I reach with my elbow and ring the door bell.
As I waited for an answer I tried to work out how long it had been; it had been sometime as I'd been out the country for 3 years.
The door starts to open and I prepare myself to greet my old friend, wondering if he had aged since we had last met, I am some what surprised to instead be greeted by somebody I didn't recognise.
"Oh.. erm... is..." I'm a bit lost for words as I wasn't sure who the very attractive young woman I was talking to was... had I got the wrong house?
"Uncle Michael!!" Suddenly the sexy nubile girl who had answered the door threw her arms around me and I felt her young ripe bosom pressing against my chest.
Then the penny dropped...
"Oh my god... Laura... is that you?" I stand back and look at you. Almost unable to believe my eyes.
The last time I'd seen you, you were a girl, now before me stands a very attractive and fucking hot young lady.
"Wow... haven't you grown (comes the somewhat predictable response..) how old are you now?" I find it quite distracting as you stand there sweetly toying with your hair and keeping very prolonged eye contact.
"I'm 18 now.. I've grown quite a bit since the last time you were here don't you think, but I was only 14 then." As you speak telling me that you've grown, almost by instinct your hands go to your breasts, like you were illustrating the fact that when you say you've grown, what you are really saying is.. Look at me, I'm a woman!
As you stand before me cupping your breasts to illustrate your transformation I find myself quite relieved that your father has suddenly appeared..
"Michael!! How great to see you, it's been for ever.. Laura, what are you doing, don't leave your Uncle Michael out on the doorstep, especially as by the looks of it he's brought gifts! Take a bag, there's a good girl"
With that you look at me coyly and smile... "You better come in, then." Your dad is just behind you but you move close to me, far closer than you needed to be and link your fingers over mine as you take one of the bags from my hand. In seductive soft tones you whisper..