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Britney had always been a bit of a snob; her privileged family helped her a little with the trip, but they didn't give her too much as they didn't approve of her going away on her own.
She's always wanted to backpack, experience other cultures of other countries, and explore different areas. She finds herself moving into a dirt cheap hostel in the first country she's visited; it's grim and well below her usual minimum standard, Britney figured it best to save as much money as possible so she can explore as best she can. She just hopes the strangers she's going to share a room with ain't creeps and respect her privacy.
When she walked into the room, she heard some laughter, the room was full with her joining and small. Three guys were sitting on the nearest left bottom bunk and one above, still in bed, listening to quite a chubby woman who obviously had their full attention as they had been listening intently. But that quickly changed when they glanced in Britney's direction. Obviously excited by another woman and a very attractive one at that, Britney thought they all looked a similar age to herself.
Mindy slightly fumed. She had quickly become like a ringleader with these guys; they thought she was so funny. Mindy came on her own for this trip, but unlike Britney, who had a notebook full of plans, she was just winging it. She, like the guys had enough money to travel around but didn't particularly care where. They were all more interested in getting drunk and partying in as many places as possible.
The other 4 men were pairs of friends: Jamie and Dean, who'd come together, and Alan and Ste, who'd come together. Britney introduced herself: "Hey, I'm Britney Stane; it's nice to meet you all. Have you established some ground rules yet on things like privacy and personal space?", This got a few chuckles out of everyone as they looked around the small room.
Mindy took charge, "So Brit, I'm Mini Mindy; that's Shy Ste (he was just wearing his underwear), That's Jamie, this is Big Dean, and on the bunk is "Aimless Alan", you'll be on the free bunk below me on the right.
Britney was so confused; she could understand Mindy and Ste's nicknames were basically the opposite of what they were, but Dean just looked like some average guy, and surely it couldn't be referring to his penis size because that's private, and what kind of nickname was "Aimless"?,
Britney was about to object to being called 'Brit," but Mindy started leading the group by asking Britney questions. After a short while, Britney quickly established that these seemed more interested in getting drunk in the city than exploring the culture like her.
She quickly excused herself for a shower, needing it after such a long trip. The cheap hostel only had communal showers. Britney was thankful the guys and women were separated, but the condition of the showers was poor and privacy would be an issue.
There were no lockers at all, in the bathroom or in bedrooms, which worried her quite a bit. She could leave things in a locker behind the lobby, but that would restrict her in terms of quick access, so she would only leave her passport and money there and hope her roommates just left her things alone.
Britney slipped behind the thin curtain, and she had the solution to no lockers in the bathroom. She just left her clothes, which she was going to wear, just inside the stall on a tiny ledge. There was not much room, so once she was finished undressing inside the little stall, she carefully placed her dirty clothes just outside her shower curtain.
Britney thought she was an attractive woman but was self-conscious about her small chest and was modest in general about clothing. When she was younger at school, they all had stalls with solid doors each, so now with just this small curtain protecting her naked body from any other woman staying in this hostel, she felt very nervous, but it wouldn't stop her from getting a full clean, as hygiene was very important to her.
Mindy hadn't liked that there was another woman joining her room; she had a bond with these guys and she had established herself as the leader of the group, the guys following her lead on nights out, she wasn't particularly interested in sleeping with any of them well maybe Dean with his big dick, none of the original 5 give a shit about their own privacy in the room, Mindy has seen all the guys starkers getting changed a some point (it had only been a couple of nights they was together) and she thought it was great fun.
First time the guys had seen Mindy's tits was in a bar on the first night when she decided to give everyone a flash, the guys all got her shot each after this; Mindy was a good reader of people, so now seeing this little prim and proper girl made her feel annoyed and knew she needed to knock her down off her pedestal, last thing she wanted was the groups balanced to be knocked out of place.
The more Mindy thought of it, the more she thought she could squeeze Brit into the group, but in the place Mindy wanted (the bottom), If Mindy's ideas went well, Brit may even be part of the group as they all travelled around or a funny joke to remember.
The guys were actually getting changed themselves shortly after they had disappointedly watched Britney collect her change of clothes and towels and leave the room. Mindy told the guys she was going to ring her mom back home. She slipped out of the room and crept into the awful communal showers, where she saw Britney leave her old clothes just outside the shower so not to get wet. Mindy usually just left her room in a towel and walked across, "but prudes like Britney wouldn't do that" Mindy thought to herself, Mindy thought of a great plan very quickly.
She picked up Britney's boring blue panties out of the designer jeans. Mindy always had some snacks in her pocket; she loved to snack, and she smeared a small amount of chocolate in the perfect spot and took a picture on her silent phone. She went back to the guys to tell them a little made-up story about what she discovered while brushing her teeth.
As Mindy burst into the room, a mischievous grin spread across her face. Dean, Alan, and Jamie had made some progress getting ready, but Ste, as usual, was still longing around in his underwear. "Guys, you won't believe what I found!" Mindy exclaimed, her voice dripping with excitement. "It seems our new roomie Brit Stane has a shitstain." All the guys went to burst out laughing, but we're a bit baffled.
Ste was smirking but a tad confused and asked "What do you mean she has a shitstain?, How do you know?".
Mindy giggling then told the story, "Right, I finished calling my mom and thought I'd do me teeth and check to see if Britt needs help working those crappy showers, so I poked my head around and noticed she left her old clothes outside her shower, she seems a bit prudish but wouldn't matter because her new clothes were in the stall with her. I'd take her old ones away so they didn't get wet, and when I walked over, I noticed, I picked up her panties and noticed the brown streak!
The guys all started laughing before Mindy continued "So think we settled on our new girl's nickname then right, it's "shitstain".
