This is my first attempt at a story, and I would appreciate any feedback. This story builds gradually but becomes quite intense, with some violent cocksucking. It was inspired by my friend, Refresher_bar.
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You first noticed him on that afternoon as you glanced over your shoulder in the park. You had been walking with a bounce in your step and enjoying the bathing warmth of the sun on your bare shoulders. In celebration of the spring weather, you were wearing your favorite sundress--bright yellow against your golden skin and dark hair. Its cut flattered your high, softly-rounded breasts; the swish of the knee-length skirt kept offering enticing glimpses of your athletic legs to all the other park-goers.
He seemed to be watching you as he leaned nonchalantly against that tree. You raised your hand to shield the sunshine from your eyes as you turned to look back across the pond you'd been circling, and his obscured figure captivated you. The branches of the tree shifted continually in the March breeze and cast shadows around him in various patterns. He wore dark pants and a shirt in Oxford blue. You couldn't quite make out much of his olive-toned face, but you saw the gleam of his eyes, and you noticed how quickly they returned to his newspaper as your head came around. You knew he had been watching you; you knew he wanted you. As you followed the path along the pond's edge, you turned twice more only to see the same response in the distance: your turn, a flash of his eyes, a dramatic shake of the newspaper. Each repetition brought a thrill to your breast and a rush to your pulse.
You arrived at the park gate sooner than you expected and you turned back one more time, half-hoping to see him following you. You were disappointed to see he had disappeared altogether, and you briefly wondered whether you had merely imagined him. As you turned out of the park and down the street toward your home, you let your mind wander and indulged your fantasies. In your mind's eye, you saw him staring at you across a dinner table and sitting quietly as you removed your black heel and ran your foot up his thigh to his hardening dick. You saw him grabbing you, pressing you against the wall of an alley, and running his hands down to your panties to find them drenched in your arousal. You saw him bending you over your living room sofa to inspect the glistening lips of your pussy and to take in that intoxicating scent.
Lost in your thoughts, you find yourself on your doorstep. You pause to search your shoulder bag for your key, and you suddenly feel a pair of strong heavy hands on your upper arms. You are momentarily frightened, but a blend of excitement and arousal holds you in place. "Don't turn around yet," you hear. He stands close enough that the warmth of his breath cuts through the breeze and tickles the back of your neck. Your wispy hairs stand up on end and send a shiver down your spine as you listen. "I know you saw me. I couldn't resist following you, and I can't let you walk into that building without me. I need you." As the music of his voice echoes in your ears, you unconsciously lean back against his hands and relax until you feel your upper back pressed into his chest. "Do you want me to come in?" he asks. Your slow nod leaves no doubt.
You unlock the front door and enter. As you walk up the stairs, you cross your arms across your chest. You cover his hands with yours and ensure that they do not leave your body. Arriving at the landing, you lead him into your living room and turn him around in front of you. Your fantasies haven't betrayed you this time; he is exactly what you thought he was. You push him insistently down on the couch and look up into his brown eyes as you kneel before him. Your hands grasp his knees and push them apart before slowly caressing along the seams of both legs. When your hands reach his crotch, he inhales quickly and gives an involuntary jump before releasing his breath in a deep sigh.
You continue upward and run your fingers teasingly over the bulge you feel through the material of his black pants. You lower the zipper; you open the pant flap wide to reveal a pair of white boxers. You bring your nose down to them, inhaling his scent as you nuzzle and nibble playfully. You reach up to his waistband, he raises his hips off of the sofa's surface, and you pull pants and boxers together until they rest in a heap around his feet.