Hello readers,
Here's the first chapter of Dominatrix, I thought it would be a nice change of pace to have girls being the ones in control for once.
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Anyway here's the first chapter,
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Ugh... my head feels foggy... where am I? I can hear the sound of tires scraping across gravel and feel the rumble of a powerful engine racking through my entire body. A pain radiated from the back of my skull, and every time I try to think of something, the pain gets in the way of my thought process. Well, guess there's no point in trying to remember at the moment... there's only the here and now. I peeled my eyes open, but all I could see was darkness. Either I was blindfolded or this place was dark as all hell. A shift of my head confirmed that I was blindfolded as the material snagged against the scratchy ground before catching up to my face again. I tried to say something, but the feeling of rough cloth against my tongue dissuaded me from continuing. My arms and legs were tied securely to one another... it made me feel like a trussed up pig, ready for the spit.
I strained my ears, and I could just barely make out the sound of heavy breathing around me... of course that could just be me panicking. I don't know where I am, and I definitely don't know how I got here. I don't belong here... wherever the hell I am. I let out a startled yelp as the vehicle came to an abrupt halt and I rolled forward, slamming into another body. Oh god, I'm going to get killed aren't I? The atmosphere around me tensed for a moment, and I knew it wasn't just me in this place. It must be at least a few other guys... the question is, what are we doing all bound up and blindfolded? I have an uneasy feeling about this...
What I assume are car doors flung open, and I was met with the chilly air of the dark night. The wind pierced through my shirt and bit me hard, raising goose bumps all along my body. Please don't kill me. I tensed up as a strangled, muffled cry was heard accompanied by the sound of scuffling and resistance. They were taking us out one by one... whoever "they" were. It wasn't long before it was my turn. I felt hands grabbing my shoulders and another pair grabbed my legs. I was carried out like this, as if I were a dead body being buried by the mafia. Even if I wanted to struggle against my captors, my arms and legs wouldn't budge. All I can do is wait for whatever they had in store for me... wait and hope that maybe I'll be alive by the end of all of this.
I don't know where I was carried to. I lost track of how many steps they took after about 1000. The sound of gravel against boots turned into the sound of dirt, and eventually tile. It wasn't hard to figure out that I was being carried down some narrow hallway by the echo of their footsteps. At this point, I'm just terrified, what are they going to do with me? Where are we? What did I even do to get myself in this situation? Okay... well... the throbbing in my head has lessened now so... let's see. I had skipped last block... and I was on my way to work after the school day ended. What happened after that?
Before I could dwell on it any further, I was dropped to the ground. I let out a frustrated grunt, letting them know that I wasn't very pleased about the way I was being treated. A second or two passed, and the bounds around my limbs were suddenly released. Instinctively, I went to rub my wrists, but someone grabbed me underneath my armpit and dragged me. I stumbled along, feeling along the floor with my foot so that I wouldn't trip. My breathing grew erratic as my body twitched with fear, both about my future and really just about tripping. I don't want to trip, that would just further humiliate me.