Many thanks to whoredinarygirl for first editing and improving this story.
The brilliant author/editor
GigglingGoblin
, whose carpet bombing of the story was as devastating as it was astonishing, would sneer at ordinary editing praise, so maybe shock and awe will do.
My gratitude to oVerallxaVerage for some excellent additional editing, but, more importantly, for fearlessly and forcefully challenging me until I made the story less horrifying.
For helping fix more problems, thanks to author/editor hentaikitten, whose specialty is luscious, sensually saturated interracial matings -- not couples of different skin color but of different species, such as a male demon with a human virgin and an elf with an orc.
Mississippi maidens love stronger than whiskey
They stand by their man and they never forget
Mississippi maidens they catch you at cheatin'
They scratch out your eyes and they beat in your head.
—Traditional
"I don't want to drive another twenty miles to the TraveLodge," Loretta said. "I've had enough for today. We're stopping at the next place we see."
"But honey," John said, "we're in the middle of nowhere."
"Look on the left side for a sign, and I'll look on the right," she said.
"There it is," she exclaimed a few minutes later. "'No Tell Motel,' next exit."
"It doesn't sound like a place we want to spend the night at."
"If the room is clean and it has a bed, it's fine. Take the exit."
The motel was more than ten miles off the highway. As they pulled into the parking lot, John started to say that they would have made it to the TraveLodge in less time, but decided not to.
The place was a long, flat, weather-beaten old building with a dirt parking lot coated with oil. At least the room was clean and air-conditioned.
Though it was late afternoon, it was still hot and humid. After he brought their bags into the room, John started to speak when Loretta interrupted him.
"You're tired from driving and you want to take a nap. Do I know you?"
"Sorry I'm so predictable. Aren't you tired?"
"Not really. I'm going to check out the motel's café to see if it's decent for dinner. Otherwise, I'll buy stuff at the gas station minimart next door and we can eat in the room."
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John woke, looked at the clock and saw he had slept more than an hour. Loretta wasn't back yet, so he turned on the television. Ten minutes later, the key turned in the door, and Loretta came in.
"Where have you been? I was starting to get worried."
"Nothing to worry about," she said, sitting down next to him on the bed. She was sweaty, and her makeup was smeared.
"You didn't go for a walk in this heat?"
"Just a short one."
She leaned over and kissed him, pushing her tongue into his mouth. At the same time, her hands went to his belt. She struggled with it and finally took her mouth off his so she could see what she was doing. His clothes were soon on the floor, followed by hers.
He was surprised how aggressive she was. It wasn't like her, and it made him hard quickly. She climbed on top of him, guided him into her and began moving. He watched her thighs rise and fall and listened to her breathing and the sounds their bodies made as she speeded up. The quiet room seemed to amplify everything.
He looked up and saw her large breasts bouncing wildly on her chest and looked away quickly because he knew he'd come in a few seconds if he didn't. He focused on her face.
It was more flushed than when she had walked in, but her expression was one he hadn't seen before. She usually looked dreamy and transported during sex. But now her eyebrows were narrowed, and her mouth was tight. It made her look like she was concentrating hard on something.
John felt himself close to coming and tried to hold back until she came at least once, as he usually did. Because of her strange look, he had no idea how close she was.
Finally, he couldn't stop himself. As he thrust up into her and released, he saw her smile a strange smile. Then her mouth turned down, and she stopped moving and sat on him.
"What's wrong?" John asked after he recovered. He was no longer hard, but she was still in the same position, so he hadn't dropped out of her.
"Nothing, honey," she said, "but I didn't come."
"I'm sorry. We can try again in a few minutes after I recover."
"No need to wait," Loretta said as she got up off him and quickly stood up on the bed. Just as quickly, she dropped down hard on his belly. All the air went out of him. He felt like he'd been punched hard in the stomach.
He started to open his mouth, but before he could say anything, she did it again. Now he felt nauseous and dizzy and couldn't speak. She kept standing up and dropping down on him until the room was spinning in front of his eyes. He passed out with his tongue hanging out of his mouth.
She waited a few seconds and then slapped him hard with her right hand. The slap woke him. She continued to slap him, and he tried to lift his hands to ward off the blows, but he was so weak he couldn't. His face felt like it was on fire.
His eyes closed, and she stopped slapping him. He felt her moving, and opened his eyes to see her sliding forward over his stomach, over his chest and onto his neck. She raised herself up and lowered her pussy against his mouth.
"I didn't come," she said in a growling voice he had never heard before. "You need to use your tongue."
John kept his mouth tightly closed. The sight of streaks of his come in Loretta's thick pubic hair disgusted him. No way was he opening his mouth.
She slapped him hard again, once on each cheek.
"Start licking."
He didn't respond.
Loretta grabbed his nose with her thumb and index finger and squeezed tight.
"If you don't start licking, you're not going to breathe," she said.
He held his breath. He would rather pass out than obey her command. But instinct made him open his mouth and gasp for air. When he did, she flexed her vaginal muscles, and suddenly his mouth was filled with his come.
As the torrent gushed into him, a lot of it went down his throat, and he swallowed involuntarily, but some of it went into his windpipe and up his nose and he began coughing and sneezing it out.
His reactions made more of the come flow into his mouth. He couldn't believe how much of it there was. He had never thought about how much he produced, but it seemed like a gallon was coming out of Loretta. Finally, the flow slowed down and then stopped. His face was covered with semen. It was in his eyes, his ears and his hair.
He felt Loretta get up from the bed. He was still gagging and coughing as he sat up and wiped away the come from his eyes and opened them. She had her back to him and was getting dressed. He tried to say something, but as he moved his mouth muscles, the come sloshed in his mouth and made him gag.
He ran to the bathroom, spit into the sink ,got into the shower and turned it on as hot as he could stand it. He opened his mouth let the water pour into it and then spit it out, trying to get the foul taste and smell out of his nose and mouth.
He kept spitting and blowing his nose for a few minutes, and then he just stood and let the hot water rush over on him as he tried to make sense of what had just happened. Loretta had never done anything like this in eight years of marriage.
He had been standing in the shower for more than ten minutes when he heard the bathroom door open. A second later, the shower curtain was ripped to the right side. He turned, expecting to see Loretta. Instead, he was faced with a strange woman aiming a gun at him.
"Put your hands up!" she shouted.
As he quickly raised his hands, he saw a man standing next to her, also aiming a gun.
"Let him turn off the water, Viola," the man said.
"Turn off the water."
He followed her order.
"Put your hands back up."
"What is --?" began John.
"Shut up," said the woman. "Step out of the bathtub slowly."
John saw that she and the man were wearing uniforms and badges. As he stepped out and stood on the floor dripping, the woman and man backed away from him.
Viola stood in the doorway of the bathroom with the man behind her. John looked at her closely. She was stout and had a serious expression. Her gun was still aimed at his chest as she quickly glanced around the bathroom.
"Take a towel and dry yourself," she said.
When he walked out of the bathroom, he looked around for Loretta but didn't see her.
"Is this your gun?" Viola asked.
John turned where she was gesturing and saw the man holding up a revolver wrapped in a handkerchief.
"No. I don't own a gun."
"Then how did it get on the dresser here?"
"I don't know, I swear. Is Loretta okay? Where is she?"
"Who is Loretta?"
"My wife. She was just here a few minutes ago."
"Is this her gun?"
"She doesn't own a gun either."
"We're going to trace this gun, John," Viola said, "so it's no use lying."
"I'm not lying," John said, exasperated. "Why are you aiming your gun at me? I didn't do anything wrong."