Thanks for waiting so long for this installment! Yeah, I could spend a lot more time on character development, they're pretty flat. I tend to write erotica infrequently, when I get the itch β so I focus on the kink aspects. The dom/abuser being sympathetic or humanized makes it less hot to me, and in general I find too much of a fighting-back period to be uninteresting (reading or writing). I also have no turn-the-tables kink, so if you prefer stories where the abused heroine gives the villain his comeuppance, I want to let you know that you might be better off with another one. Bondage, forced exhibition, humiliation, non-consent β these are what call to me. Any perceived plot is just an excuse for more scenes with them. Your critiques are all justified, but I have to confess that I'm basically just sharing stuff I find hot in hopes that someone else will get off to it.
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If it weren't for the spell, I wouldn't be able to force myself down the stairs. But I do, and the rough men waiting down there stare at me as I walk nervously into the kitchen.
"I'm here to take some dinner to my masters," I whisper to the cook. He can't hear me at first, partially because he's transfixed by the sight of my mostly-naked body, but when I repeat the request he remembers that there are wizards here and pays attention.
"Not ready yet," he grunts, and propels me to the door. "Go wait out there." Taking me through the doorway, he slaps me on the arse, causing me to fall over the lap of a man at a table, who laughs and gives me a few more slaps as I struggle up. In trying to get away from him, I fall onto someone else's lap, sitting, this time, and the new man clasps his arms around me.
"It's not very often that a tasty morsel like you comes in here," he says, and pulls me in tightly as I try to get away.
"Let go of me!" I whisper, which urges him on more β since obviously if I didn't want his attention, I'd be a bit louder. He bends down to my chest and fits one breast in his mouth, chewing on it softly as I struggle. The vine over my cunt shifts as I squirm, causing me to squirm even more. Judging by the catcalls, it's interpreted as pleasure. Pushing a finger into me and discovering that I'm, of course, still wet, he holds up the slick evidence into the light.
"Look at that! I didn't realize what a fast worker I was."
He twists me around so I'm facing the rest of the room, and everywhere I look is an eager face staring at me. Grasping both my wrists with one hand, the other roams over my breasts, twisting and pinching as he likes. They're all delighting in my murmured protests, speculating at why I bother to hide my obvious whorish pleasure. I am passed from man to man, fondled and caressed by each in turn. I even stop protesting in whispers, because what's the point? I wouldn't be heard over the carousing. But at the same time, I can't stop hating myself for it.
A man pulls me over his lap, facing up, and he and the one to his left each pay attention to a breast, one pinching and pulling the nipple and the other squeezing the whole thing in one hand. The man to his right pulls on the vine, somehow tightening it and forcing it deeper into my cunt. At this point, the cook comes out with a heavy tray. He sets it on a table, then reaches for me with one big hand and drags me away from the men by the vine.
"Take this up to your masters, slut," he growls, and stumps back to the kitchen. I pick up the tray and try to work my way back to the stairs, but every way I turn there's an outstretched hand to poke and rub at me, and of course the tray keeps my hands so full I can't even try to do anything about them. I collect so many more slaps to the backside that I'm sure I must be bright red.
Back in Geoffrey's room, the men look up as I come in.