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Castle Mroczna Travelling Prey

Castle Mroczna Travelling Prey

by gadenerensy
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Castle Mroczna - Travelling Prey

George Ruddock still wasn't sure why he decided to take this route of all routes to get to where he wanted to go. Sure, as the crow flies, going through this isolated and rather unknown county was a logical shortcut. But the terrain was rough, and the chill was always lurking, held only at bay by his brown overcoat, splashed with mud and bits of grass.

And there was only one town on the way to where he was going. He barely knew anything about the place outside of rumours and the occasional gossip; people ventured through there, offered trade, but it wasn't an oft frequented locale for outsiders. Just enough to keep the place alive.

Though news had reached him that the near-forgotten noble family who presided over the county was looking to gain some relevance. Not that it mattered to him.

Perhaps, he just wanted a change of pace from us usual routes. To get somewhere through more scenic environments, though so far the hard environment of the mountain-flanked valley he was traversing offered little in the way of breathtaking sights.

Oh well, it was at least different. But the sun set quickly in this little valley, and it was starting to get dark, long shadows cast by the trees and the mountain peaks.

He picked up the pace just slightly, and soon, he was standing on a slope overlooking most of the valley, and whistled appreciatively at the castle he saw in the distance, surprisingly large for such an inconsequential locale. And in good condition, at least at a distance.

But said castle was not his destination, instead overlooking the small town near the floor of the valley; Dolina Mroku.

He could see wisps of smoke from the chimneys, so that put those silly little thoughts about the place being abandoned out of his head. Of course he knew it wasn't, people had passed through there, traded there, but it just got into his head that it was. Something about the gossip gave it that impression.

Well, as long as they had an inn or a tavern to get a drink and a place to sleep for the night, he was okay spending time in a 'ghost town'.

He trudged down the path, his brown boots crunching into the soil. Ahead, he spied someone hitching a mule to a post outside a hut on the outskirts of the village.

The old man spotted George, and stared frostily. He did not say a word as George passed, but George got the impression that outsiders weren't that welcome here. Not a hostile response, but a lack of hospitality wasn't uncommon for some of these isolated villages.

He wandered further, until he came to the town proper; the place was a little grungy, and the wood-walled structures were weather-beaten, the shingle and thatch roofs showing signs of patchwork repair and snow damage.

It wasn't dilapidated, nothing was falling apart, but the place felt old, and worn. And the people seemed similar, even the younger villagers looking tired and hard, though some of them seemed oddly nervous, and not necessarily about him.

He did his best to ignore them; if he wasn't exactly welcome, he didn't need to give them any reason to be angry with him. They had their own problems, and he didn't need to know.

He looked around, until he found the local inn. He couldn't make out the name on the sign, the written language was not his to understand, though he could speak a little of it. The sign also sported what looked like a hog's head bursting from a barrel of ale. That was clear enough.

He looked up and down the two story structure, the windows along the top floor covered by curtains. The angled roof sheltered the upper floor windows, further leaving their interiors obscured in shade.

There was a small fenced porch along the front of the building, but the entrance was only a single door with a circular window in it, though it was rather badly smudged, so all he could make out was a flickering candle within.

He scraped his boots on a piece of wood left by the door, and then entered, a small piece of metal rattling against another serving as a bell.

It was a small place, and there was only a handful of people inside at the moment. The layout was simple enough, the bar directly ahead with a few small casks of alcohol arrayed along a table directly against the back wall with spigots at the ready, a handful of wine and whiskey bottles sitting on a set of shelves just right of them. A cupboard on the left held all the wooden flagons.

An old, wizened man with thinning white hair and one grey eye, the other too sullen to make out a colour, was busy wiping down the counter, working out a splinter with a knife between sweeps of his rag. He looked up at George, and made an expression that George couldn't quite tell was a sneer or begrudging acknowledgement before he went back to what he was doing.

There were stools at the bar, and the rest of the floor was filled with round tables with wooden seats. At the far left of the room, in the corner, was a set of stairs running behind the bar area, going upstairs to where George hoped there was lodging available.

Candles burning in their holders mounted to the wooden pillars provided the lighting inside, but as the sun set, it got darker inside, so the bartender lit a fireplace just right of the bar area itself.

The handful of other patrons gave George suspicious glances, before returning to their drinks.

He did not entertain their brief stares, and instead headed over to the bar, taking a seat and taking off his overcoat, laying it across his lap.

It felt nice to take the heavy thing off, his regular beige shirt and grey pants far more comfortable to wear. Simple, uncomplicated, easy. If he was to live in them day in and day out, he didn't want to make it more complex than necessary. He could save the adventurous spirit for more entertaining things.

He politely got the bartenders attention, hoping to get a mug of ale.

"Co chcesz mieć?"

the old man asked bluntly.

George paused for a moment, trying to parse the man's accent and rural dialect, as well as his terse, upfront tone. Eventually he just asked for an ale, and the bartender obliged without much more than a quick nod, grabbing a flagon from the cupboard, filling it with an ale, and placing it down in front of George.

George nodded his head politely, and took the flagon in hand and brought it to his lips. The barkeeper didn't respond, subtly shaking his head and moving over to attend to other parts of the counter.

George heard the old man muttering something under their breath.

"Osoby z zewnΔ…trz..."

George opted not to pay it any mind, he didn't want to aggravate these people. Clearly they didn't get many visitors and they didn't trust them. Again, something George was not unused to.

So he sipped his beer in quiet, occasionally casting surreptitious glances around the bar to check if the other patrons seemed like considering a violent eviction of his person. Or at least, trying to drive him out.

But they were content to whisper amongst themselves and drink their beer, and George was fine with that. He sighed softly, and looked up at a shelf above the table with the casks on it; there was a mirror there, and he could see his pale face staring back, the slightly crooked nose of his the only thing really dragging down his looks, at least according to this one woman he knew.

Handsome, but not chiselled, and a little bit on the rounder side. He sported some stubble from the last time he shaved, but he did not grow facial hair quickly, or all that well. It was better left shaved, though it did make the blotchy birthmark beneath the left side of his lower lip more noticeable.

Blue eyes seemed sullen from time on the road, but there was a twinkle of adventurous spirit in them, George not one to pass up the occasional experience of note. His short brown hair needed reigning in though, the fringes wild and strands sticking out, fussed by the hood of his overcoat.

Well, he could tidy himself up at his ultimate destination. This place was just a little stop on the way.

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As he drank quietly, he heard the door open, and idly turned to see who it was before turning back without much notice... and did a double take when he realised the woman who had just entered felt rather out of place, if it weren't for her dusty black dress, the colour unusual but the design simple and rugged.

But her face, deathly pale but beautiful in an almost otherworldly way. She was gorgeous, her slender frame possessing hints of curves beneath that dress of hers, simple boots tapping on the floor with a light gait. She had a hood on, obscuring her hair.

He turned away from her to keep himself from staring. He just hadn't expected someone looking like that to be in a place like this, least of all to pop into a tavern. If it weren't for her clothes, she would've been the perfect fit for the kind of nobility whose lives were just so out of reach of the common folk, it was almost impossible to comprehend them.

But she sauntered up to the bar, and spoke in a voice that dripped with a surprising amount of sensual grace. She asked for a drink, and the bartender obliged. Though oddly, he seemed quietly tense to George, when he wasn't before.

Was this woman perhaps more than she seemed?

He'd have ample opportunity to ponder, because she sat down next to him with her flagon, and sipped slowly. She sat with a regal grace, making George wonder if she might have actually been a noble in disguise. But why any noble would do that outside of avoiding unfriendly sorts looking to take their head, George didn't know.

He did his best to ignore her, to drink quietly and not cause a fuss, but it was she that spoke first.

"You are not from here, yes?" she asked; even accented, her voice in his language was soft and rich.

"Yeah, I come from Saxony originally, but I have been living in the neighbouring duchy for a while now. I make a trip every now and then for business and family to the country on the

other

side. Normally I go north, but decided to go through this time. A change of pace, you could say. And a surprising guess of the language I speak."

He really shouldn't have divulged too much to a stranger, but what did it matter, really? He had nothing valuable on him save his coin.

"Ah, a traveller!" the woman exclaimed softly, as if it were exciting news. "We do not get many of them in Dolina Mroku. There is not much around here but for Castle Mroczna. The family there rules over this place, and is responsible for the town's wine exports. If you did not come for that, then you must learn of it. The wines from this valley are some of the finest in the world. As for my guess, consider it intuition. Many travellers know that language."

She then got the bartender's attention again, and called for a bottle of wine, though the name eluded George, the word in the local tongue not familiar to him.

The bartender obliged, bringing out a bottle with a simple but stylish silver frame around the neck. The dark green bottle obscured its contents, but when the cork was popped, George detected the smell immediately. Strong, pleasant, fruity, but curious in a way.

The bartender produced two simple glasses, and poured out two serves of the deep red liquid. The woman exchanged some coin, and the bartender handed a glass to the both of them, and then quickly got back to what he was doing, leaving George and the woman to converse.

They exchanged a nod, and both took a sip, and George felt that his nose had given him a hint of the quality wine he now tasted. Fruity, with a rich, deep taste, strong, but not overbearing, with an edge to it that was pleasant but curious, in that he couldn't quite describe it.

"How is it?" she asked, and he took another sip before issuing an appreciative grunt.

"This is some quality stuff," he praised. "I didn't realise County Mroczna made such fantastic wines. I had heard of it, but you'd think your home would be the talk of the wine trade. Not that I'm familiar with such things, admittedly."

"Alas, our wines haven't traded far until recently... but perhaps, in time, our name will become more famous. And more travellers like yourself with come. Even if only to pass through. But curiosity... is a powerful thing~"

She laughed softly, and delicately sipped her glass of wine.

"Well, had I known... that might've made the decision a bit less of a whim," he agreed as he sipped his drink.

"If you don't mind me asking, what is your name, traveller?" the woman inquired.

"Only if you give me yours in exchange, Miss," he bartered. "It's George."

"Aniela."

A pretty name for a pretty woman, he thought. Her hazel eyes were so bright, they almost seemed golden. He was being quite calm, but he felt a sense of excitement and fear talking to her. He told himself to get a grip.

"Well, Aniela, it's rather pleasant meeting you," he said, nodding with a raise of his glass. "A beautiful woman like yourself to talk to always makes a long trip worthwhile."

"And meeting a handsome traveller is always exciting," she retorted.

Coming from her, being called 'handsome' made him feel all sorts of giddy. He laughed a little, hiding it well enough to continue the conversation.

"So, if it is no mind to you, what is it you do around here?" he asked.

"Oh, just a farmhand at the local vineyard. It's at the castle, though I've never been inside it proper. I live here, in the village."

George just barely saw a glance from the bartender their way, but he couldn't really decipher its meaning. It was brief, before the old man returned to wiping out a mug.

"Seems like a harsh place for making wine," he remarked.

"Oh, this valley has its bite. But the soil here is more fertile than appearances suggest, and the cold is good for the grapes. The variety we grow thrives in it, and we know how to protect them from deep winter's claws."

"Oh? Tell me more," he ventured, leaning a bit closer. This woman... she seemed to suggest herself as simple, but there was something beneath it all that had his attention, and he wanted to learn about her.

She shook her head apologetically.

"Sorry, George, I'd love to tell you, but I'm afraid I don't know much more on the specifics. And what I do know, I can't talk about. The Family wants to keep its secrets, after all."

She gave him a teasing wink, and he smirked in return.

"Ah, so there's something special about this wine after all," he said.

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"Just some techniques that the winemakers would prefer stay secret. But you know, I'm curious as to what you do. You said you do business on these trips?"

"Nothing major," he admitted. "But I broker deals of shipments of goods between merchants. I don't mind a good trek, and often enough I take a horse. Just this time I figured a long hike would be good for me."

"That is a long hike though... a few days, with not a lot on you," Aniela observed.

"Perhaps, but I can read maps well, and pay attention to the right sort of gossip. After my night here, I'll be on my way, and should make it to the Hamlet of Piorun Obszar. And then, my destination."

"Ah, I see. Truth be told, I've not really ventured outside of Dolina Mroku. Just doesn't seem like there is much out there for me. Though, it does mean things can become rather... stale, here."

"Are you lonely?" he asked.

"I wouldn't say that," she said with a sly smirk, swirling her glass. "But when you grow up in this village, you know everyone and everything. I love my friends, but sometimes I crave variety in the people I meet. Which is why you're so refreshing."

"Well, glad I could be of help," George answered.

Aniela laughed coyly, and leaned in towards George with a knowing expression.

"The world is full of excitement and opportunities, they say. I have to seize every one that comes through this village. Like yourself~"

She swirled a finger around the rim of her glass.

"Oh? And pray tell, what you mean by that," George retorted, also leaning forward.

"Well... an exciting moment with a handsome stranger from another land. A little thrill, to soften the hard months. And for you, a memory you won't forget."

Now this was getting interesting.

"Tell me more," George said with a smile.

"I could tell you more," she trailed off softly, reaching over to delicately trace a finger along his arm, earning a tiny shiver from him, "or, I could

show

you more~"

George's heart began to race. There were warnings as well, propositions from strange women were often a bad idea to accept. But she seemed like a lonely sort, and there weren't tales or gossip of people going missing in the area. Legends and tall tales, about the Castle being filled with vampires, but nothing recently.

Besides... she was exceptionally beautiful.

"And where would you show me~?" he continued.

"The walls of the inn are pretty thick~ And the beds comfortable, but you'll have to pay this time, for the room that is. Old Bartek wouldn't like me paying for an outsider's room after paying for the wine."

The bartender loosed a quiet grunt in acknowledgement but otherwise said nothing.

"Fine, fine, I was going to pay for a room at some point anyway," he conceded, as he fished out some coins of the local currency. He handed it to the bartender, who took them into their fist and secreted them away quickly, before pointing upstairs.

" Pierwsze drzwi, ktΓ³re widzisz . "

George nodded, and finished the last of his wine and his ale, and Aniela did the same. If what he thought was about to happen, was about to happen... well, his heart was already pounding away like a galloping horse.

Aniela followed him with a soft giggle, and they ascended the stairs together.

The upper level seemed even more bare than the lower, having only a handful of candle holders burning for a modicum of light. The first door he saw was directly ahead after turning right at the top of the stairs, painted a dull green.

There was no key, so he was able to open it easily enough.

It was dark inside, barely any light flowing through the curtained window that otherwise overlooked the street. He could only make out the outlines of the furniture in the room. But Aniela seemed to navigate the gloom well enough, crouching down somewhere, and lighting a candle with a metal sparker, providing the room with a modicum of light.

The inside was rather simple, a single bed with grey sheets and a pillow that seemed to be missing some of its stuffing, with a bedside table on which the candle sat in its holder. At the end of the bed was a chest, which George threw his overcoat on.

And when he turned around, Aniela pressed herself against him, sliding her hands around to his back and slowly dragging her palms and fingers up his shirt, looking into his eyes with a seductive smile. Her chest gently squashed on his own, and he felt a stirring in his loins when she leaned in to give him a gentle peck on the lips.

She pulled back, and he let out a sheepish laugh.

"Wow... you really are excited," he remarked.

"When you spend so much time in this place, something new and different is... hard to pass up~"

She leaned in again, and pecked at his neck, curling her tongue over his throat, earning a sigh from his lips.

His own hands moved around around her waist and slid down to rest atop of her rump, gently rubbing her. Her lips moved upward, and met his once again. Though this time, her kiss was... far more salacious, meshing together with a gentle twist of her head, but an eager working of her jaw.

He murmured softly, but was rather surprised by her tongue invading his mouth. That was quite unexpected! But he did not mind all that much, his tongue grazing against hers in return.

She was oddly cool to the touch, though perhaps that was just the nature of living in such a harsh area. He'd have to warm her up.

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