This is my first submission to Literotica and any constructive feedback is most welcome. Both characters are, of course, at least 18. All rights reserved, © Northern_One, 2012.
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The branch line was one of the quieter stretches of railway that I'd encountered. The carriages were an old-fashioned style with no corridor, only a door on either side that opened out onto the platform. Perfect for an uninterrupted journey and an opportunity for me to tackle to pile of patient reports that I'd brought with me. Travelling from London had been arduous so far and I was looking forward to a relaxing final leg before attending my niece's wedding.
I took my seat on the old banquette, facing the direction of travel, by the window so I could take in the rural vistas when my paperwork became too tedious. I took out my copy of The Times and lit a cigarette, the smoke rising and meandering its way through the sunlight towards the small open window. A mote of ash fell onto my pinstripe trouser leg and I flicked it away with my left index finger before settling into my seat and waiting for the old train to wheeze its way out of the station. I turned the page, idly scanning the text, my mind on other matters.
The knock on the window snapped me out of my reverie and I looked onto the platform to see a guard gesturing at me to open the door. As I swung it open the guard stepped to one side and I saw he was standing next to a young girl dressed in a school uniform, a satchel over her shoulder, her trunk by her side.
"Sorry to bother you Doctor Hamilton," said the guard, "but this young lady is travelling alone and her guardian has requested that she be accompanied by a, as she put it, 'respectable' travelling companion throughout her journey. Forgive the imposition, but I wondered if you would mind her sharing your compartment?" The guard spoke with a deferential air, something I found mildly irritating yet reassuring of my position in society.
"No, no, that will be quite all right", I said briskly. I glanced at the young girl, quickly observing that she was a student at one of the better public schools in this part of the country. "Do come aboard my dear," I said to her, standing and holding out my hand to help her up the step. "I do have rather lot of work to be getting on with so please forgive me if I don't interact much."
My travelling companion looked up shyly, and said, softly, in a most refined accent, "Not at all sir, please don't let me a nuisance to you at all."
"I'm James Hamilton," I said, "and you are?"
"Elizabeth Spencer," she said with an almost imperceptible bend of the knee.
"Charmed, charmed," I said absently, gesturing in the direction of the opposite seat.
She took a seat on the opposite banquette, a little way away from the window as the guard busied himself with her large trunk. I glanced in her direction and took in a little more of her appearance. She sat very upright, her hands folded in her lap. She was quite tall although clearly not fully matured. I estimated her height to be around 5 feet 6 inches, and she had a slender figure, although the signs of womanhood were immediately apparent. She wore a navy blue blazer and grey skirt that reached her knees, where it was almost met by perfectly white socks, smoothly pulled up. On her feet she wore black, lace-up shoes, her feet, like her knees absolutely together. Under her blazer she wore a white blouse and a neatly knotted tie. On her head was a navy blue, wide-brimmed hat that, as she sat with her head slightly bowed, covered much of her face. Her hair was tidied away inside the hat but I noticed from the wispy hairs on the back of her neck that she was blonde. Something inside me stirred at the sight of this primly presented specimen of wealthy society, her safety entrusted to me for the next couple of hours, at least.
I stubbed out my cigarette and crossed my legs, turning the page of The Times as I did. The guard blew his whistle and the train began to creep away from the station.
"My cousin is an alumnus of your school", I said, looking over the paper toward the girl. "Before your time, of course", I added.
She lifted her head and caught my gaze. This was the first time I had fully seen her face and I now saw that she did indeed have blonde hair, a neat fringe visible below the brim of her hat. Her large blue eyes became animated as she prepared to speak, clearly relieved to have something to talk about should this older man decide a conversation would be in order.
"Oh, how interesting," she said, "I'm in my final year there then Mummy wants me to go to finishing school in Geneva. May I ask what house your cousin was in? I'm captain of Bowness, you see". She stopped abruptly; suddenly aware she may have spoken out of turn. "I'm sorry; you said you had a lot of work to do. Please forgive me." Her head bowed once more, hiding her face.
"Please, please," I said encouragingly, "I'm always interested by connections, no matter how tenuous. Cousin Sophie was in Ulverston, I believe".
She looked up again, smiling. "Oh, wonderful, Mummy was in Ulverston too! How funny!" Her face had lit up, her full lips revealing perfectly white teeth. She was very pretty. My mind began to wander.
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We had been on the move for 20 minutes or so, conversing occasionally, exchanging pleasantries. I had explained to Elizabeth that I was on my way to the wedding of the daughter of my youngest brother. She had informed me that she was on her way to her Father's house in the country for the Easter holidays. Despite its great age the carriage was comfortable, if a little dusty. The sun continued to shine through the window, emphasising the specks of dust and smoke from my cigarettes.
Elizabeth had become visibly more relaxed in my company and had moved closer to the window, so she could enjoy the view and warmth of the sun. She really was a most attractive creature and I was finding it increasingly difficult to concentrate on either my work or the half-completed crossword on my knee. As she gazed out of the window I admired her high cheekbones and not small, but distinguished nose. Her mouth remained very slightly open, giving the faintest glimpse of those perfectly white teeth, glinting in the bright light. She had a most elegant neck, and the fine hairs at the back of her neck danced in the breeze from the open window.
She looked at me, and smiled shyly again. I realised I might have been a little too obvious in my observation of her beauty but I elected to hold her gaze until she turned away, perhaps slightly embarrassed by my attention. That feeling inside me was there again. A little stronger this time. I began to turn things over in my mind. Elizabeth was clearly becoming a beautiful young woman but I wasn't sure she knew just how beautiful she already was. A girl like this could have great power over men if she knew how to control her sexuality and use it to her advantage. I wondered if she had had the opportunity to sample anything in the way of sexual pleasure yet. Knowing the correctness of her school I doubted there had been any men around to corrupt her but there was always the possibility that she had secretly explored her own body or, conceivably, been introduced to the delights offered by another girl, or even woman. My feelings had become lustful and were beginning to manifest themselves in a physical way. I felt my penis stirring in my trousers and crossed my legs again, positioning the papers on my lap strategically.
My mind raced. My imagination conjuring up visions of this stunning blonde beauty entwined in a fumbling, naïve embrace with one of her fellow pupils. Their soft, nubile bodies full of new sensations, still-growing breasts pressed together, hands furtively exploring one another's most secret places, full lips eagerly seeking out one another, tongues dancing.
These erotic thoughts meant that I was now quite erect and in danger of becomingly evidently so to this innocent girl. I had to do something about this and the blood rushing to my still engorging member was beginning to influence my actions. I decided to test the water, to try and discover just how innocent Elizabeth really was.
"Do you smoke, Elizabeth?" I asked, opening the silver case and offering her a cigarette. She smiled at me as she took one.
"I've tried it a few times," she said with a giggle, "it does tend to make me cough though."
I leant forward and lit her cigarette - then my own - watching as she elegantly placed it between her full lips and inhaled a little smoke. As she'd predicted she coughed and, laughing now, wafted the air in front of her with her other hand.
"I told you!" she laughed. "I always seem to cough."
"You look very sophisticated", I said, encouragingly.
"Do I?" she asked, clearly pleased by my remark. She took another puff at the cigarette, giving me her best sultry look.
"Yes, very mature," I said, smiling.
"Thank you doctor Hamilton," she said, her eyes sparkling with pride at this older gentleman complimenting her.
That was the look I'd been waiting for. I decided then that before we arrived at the next station I would have made Elizabeth a woman.
I watched as she smoked the cigarette. I was willing to force this little blonde delight if I had to but I didn't want to hurt her.
 
                             
                         
                         
                         
                         
                         
                                 
                                 
                                 
                                