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The Sting Of Her Nails

The Sting Of Her Nails

by isaacmiller
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Chapter 1: The Routine

The city bus hums along, a tired drone beneath the muted noise of passengers and the occasional squeak of brakes. It's a gray afternoon, the kind where the city feels half-awake, and the people onboard mirror that with heads bowed to screens or eyes glazed over as they stare out windows. Totally lost in the rhythm of their own routines. Near the door, Michael sits, broad-shouldered and solid, his presence taking up more space than the seat allows. His well worn jacket strains slightly at the seams, and his sturdy fingers swipe lazily across his phone, scrolling through something mindless; headlines or photos...he won't remember.

At the back, a woman rises. She's almost invisible at first, a slender silhouette swallowed by a plain coat, dark hair framing or perhaps even hiding her face. Little about her demands attention, but a keen observer might catch a glimpse of her nails catching the light, long and pointy adorned with an ornate design in black and red, with tiny silver accents glinting. She moves toward the exit, her steps light as though wanting to avoid attention, fingers occasionally brushing the seat backs to steady herself against the sway of the bus.

Without warning the driver hits a pothole, and the whole vehicle jolts. A collective murmur ripples through the passengers. She stumbles, her balance slipping. Her hand darts out, landing on Michael's shoulder to catch herself. He barely registers as her nails graze his neck, with one tip pressing in just enough to inflict a brief prick. She steadies herself, breath hitching, and murmurs, "Sorry," her voice low and barely there, as if meant to dissolve the moment it's heard.

Startled out of his phone's glow, Michael looks up. Her back is already to him, her slim frame weaving toward the door as it hisses open. Her nails flash as she grips the railing, a glimpse of brilliant red and black before she steps off into the drizzle-soaked street. The bus groans back into motion, but he's an awestruck statue, thumb hovering over the screen. His neck faintly tingles where her nail pricked him. Not pain, but something else, a faint echo that won't settle. He shifts in his seat, suddenly aware of his own bulk, the heat under his collar. Who was she? He didn't catch her face. Just the shape of her retreat, the quiet intent in her stride, and of course those eye catching nails.

Such a brief, forgettable encounter and yet, somehow anything but. There's...a pull now. Inexplicable and nagging, it gnaws at him like a question he didn't know he'd asked, yet still demands an answer. His eyes flick to the window, scanning the blur of sidewalks, half-expecting to spot her vanishing into the crowd. He doesn't, of course. She's long gone, swallowed by the city. But that prick lingers, a hook sunk into his thoughts, tugging at him. He rubs his neck absently, fingers brushing the spot, wondering why it feels like she left something behind.

Chapter 2: The Weight of Her Absence

The bus follows the same route, the same passengers, the same time. So much sameness. But not for Michael. He's there again, near the door sunk deep into his seat. His phone is in hand, but it's merely a prop tonight, his thumb hardly moving. His eyes dart up repeatedly, expectant, anxious...hopeful. He's undeniably restless, though he'd never admit it. Something's been itching at him since the last ride--the faint sting on his neck he can't quite shake.

The doors hiss open at a stop. The mysterious woman steps on. He knows it's her before he sees her. His body knows it before his brain can catch up. A scent hits him, faint but sharp, cutting through the stuffy air of the bus. Her scent. His chest tightens. He shifts, suddenly keenly aware of his bulk, how his broad shoulders extend past his seat and protrude into the aisle. His gaze snaps to her boots--tall, black, gleaming leather beneath the fluorescent lights. The rest of her remains muted however: plain coat, jeans, dark hair spilling loose. But those boots shift the equation. They're a sign of something far bolder beneath the surface. She makes her way to the back again. That slim silhouette is almost lost in the press of bodies, yet he remains keenly aware of her presence.

Stop after stop passes, all the while Michaels mind remains focused on the woman behind him, his anticipation for the moment she passes by him building and building. As her stop approaches she begins to move forward. Her steps are steady this time. There's no sway as the bus rolls on. He waits. His breath is shallow. He's caught in the pull of her approach. That scent grows. It curls around him. He finds himself willing her closer, hoping, stupidly, for her hand to brush him again. He's near desperate to feel the scrape of her nails against his skin, wanting to feel that spark of something in him again. His whole spine tingles at the memory. It's a phantom ache. He shifts again. Heat creeps up his spine. She's near now. She's close enough that he could reach out if he dared. But...she doesn't falter. Her fingers graze the railing instead as she passes by without indecent. Her brilliant nails flash like a taunt. She passes him by, cool, deliberate, untouchable.

He exhales, unaware that he was holding his breath. It's a ragged little sound he hopes no one hears. She's at the door now. Her boots click faintly as she steps off. That drizzle-soaked street swallows her again. The bus lurches forward. He's stuck. His eyes are locked on the empty space she left. Her scent lingers. It's faint but stubborn. It's doing something to him, unraveling him, slow and sure. It's not just her shape, her quiet stride, those damn nails or boots. It's the weight of her absence. It's the way she's hooked into him without even trying. Or maybe she is trying. He doesn't know. That's the worst of it. His hand drifts to his neck. He rubs the spot where she'd marked him originally. The pull tightens. It's a thread stretching taut across the city. She's gone, but she's not. Not anymore.

Chapter 3: The Pull of the Unseen

The bus trundles along its usual path. Same stops, same hum, same faces half-lit by flickering overheads. Michael's there again, near the door, broad shoulders hunched slightly. His navy jacket is creased, phone forgotten in his pocket. His eyes skim the crowd each time the doors open, restless, waiting. That faint sting on his neck still lingers, a quiet pulse he can't ignore.

The doors hiss. She steps on. No warning this time, just her presence, sharp and immediate. She's closer, a few steps in. Her plain coat is gone, swapped for a black sweater, loose and soft, over muted jeans. Those tall black boots still climb her legs, leather faintly gleaming. Her nails catch the light, red bleeding deeper into the black, silver flecks sharper now. She's shedding the drab shell, slow and sure, but it's not loud. Not yet.

She moves past him, steps light. Something falls. A soft clack on the floor. His mind is too occupied by her proximity to catch it until she's a few seats back, settling in. His eyes drop. A lipstick lies there, sleek and black, glossy as her boots. His pulse jumps up. He bends, large fingers closing around it, rough skin brushing the smooth case. It's hers, he's sure of it. He stares at the tiny object he holds ever so gently in his hands as though it was worth a lifetime of riches. It was an excuse, real and solid, to interact with her. The realisation lights up his chest. He turns it slowly in his hand, waiting, feeling her behind him like a shadow he can't shake.

The bus rolls on. She's there, a few rows back. He feels her presence, steady and quiet, tugging at him. His neck tingles. His grip tightens on the lipstick. He imagines her lips, the black smear it might leave, and his breath deepens. Minutes stretch. The bus slows. She rises, boots clicking faintly, as she moves forward. His heart stumbles. She's at his side now, reaching for the door. He turns, voice rougher than he hoped it to be. "Hey. You dropped this."

Her eyes flick to him, dark and unreadable. She stops. "Oh. Thank you." Her voice hits different now, firm, not dissolving like before. It lands, clear and deliberate, cutting through the bus's drone. She reaches out, both hands closing around his. Her fingers are cool, slim, nails pressing lightly into his thick, calloused palm. Not a scratch, just a press, enough to spark that old ache in his neck. She lingers, a beat too long, lipstick slipping from his grip to hers. "I appreciate it," she says, even stronger this time, each word a weight. Then she pulls back, nails glinting as she tucks it away. She steps off, vanishing into the damp night.

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Michael's still, hand warm where she touched him. Elation floods in, sharp and wild, a rush that starts in his chest and spills everywhere else. Her voice, that firm edge, replays in his head, sinking deeper with every loop. It's not just sound, it's a command, a claim, and he's caught in it. His neck burns where her nail once pricked him, a flare that spreads, tying him to her. His pulse hammers, loud in his ears, and he can still feel the press of her nails in his palm, cool and deliberate, like she'd meant to leave a mark this time. She's in him now, a current he can't fight, a shadow curling around his thoughts. He's hers, consumed, and he doesn't care. Doesn't even pause to question it. The bus lurches on, city lights blurring outside, but he's lost in her wake, grinning faintly to himself, oblivious to the game. He doesn't notice the faint smile she'd let slip as she left, or how the lipstick had rolled too perfectly to his feet, a baited hook he'd swallowed whole. She'd played it smooth, a move, not a slip. But he's too far gone to wonder, too tangled in the thrill of her touch, her voice, her pull.

Chapter 4: The Consequences of Disapproval

Since their last encounter, the world has felt better, full of hope and optimism. Today, the bus feels brighter, as if the sun decided to break through the city's dreary shell and paint everything in gold. The light outside filters through the windows, illuminating the faces of the passengers in soft, welcoming hues. Michael feels the shift in himself too--everything's lighter, more pleasant. His chest feels fuller, like the air is just a little easier to breathe. It's the kind of day where he feels like anything's possible. He feels good.

He looks up. It's her. She's here.

She's not wearing her plain coat today. No, this time it's a sleek black sweater, form-fitting, hugging her body in all the right places. Her jeans are dark, almost black, the fabric sleek and smooth against her legs. She walks like she owns the space, a quiet command in every step. When she gets close enough, she slides into the seat next to him, close enough that he can feel the heat of her body next to his. His pulse spikes instantly. The air between them is electric.

She doesn't speak at first, and neither does he. His heart beats in his chest, loud and fast, but in this moment, it feels like the world is spinning just for them. He can't remember the last time the bus felt this vibrant. The faces around him blur, their voices fading to background noise. All that matters is her.

Then, as if she's been waiting for him to realize something, her hand brushes against his. The touch is light, but it's enough to make him freeze, the tingling warmth of her fingertips sparking through his body. She leans in slightly, her voice soft but pointed. "You look... happy today," she murmurs. There's a question in it, but it's not for him to answer.

"I am," he says, his voice a little too eager, his heart fluttering with the thought of her attention.

She's watching him closely, eyes sharp, calculating. "Good," she says with a smile that's both approving and a little too knowing. She leans back in her seat, and for a moment, he breathes easy again, caught in the warmth of her approval. The world feels perfect.

But then, she shifts. Her eyes flicker to his hand where it rests at his side, fingers curled loosely around the edge of his seat. His heart stumbles in his chest, and without thinking, he shifts slightly, adjusting his posture, moving his hand farther away. There's a hesitation, a brief flicker of resistance.

The pleasant hum of the bus, the soft voices, the warmth of the sunlight--all of it feels wrong now. The light dims. The passengers seem colder, more distant. The chatter turns into muffled murmurs, an oppressive drone. The world is losing its color, bleeding out into washed-out tones of gray. He feels it, the shift. The optimism that filled him moments ago crumbles. His heart sinks.

He tries to speak, but his throat tightens. The bus feels heavier, the air thick with something suffocating. People around him cough, shift uncomfortably. The hum of the engine becomes a low, threatening growl. His pulse races, and yet, it's not excitement he feels anymore--it's dread. Everything has changed. The warmth, the brightness, all of it has evaporated, leaving behind a cold, gnawing emptiness.

Her gaze fixes on him, steady and unforgiving. She's not just noticing his resistance--she's punishing it.

The light in the bus flickers once, then again, and the overhead lights take on a harsh, sterile glow. The passengers' faces twist into expressions of annoyance, impatience, boredom--disdain. He feels it all, like a weight pressing on his chest, dragging him down. The city outside, once bustling with energy, now seems distant, unfocused. The world feels hollow.

"I didn't want to do this," she says softly, but he can hear the edge in her tone. "But you had to learn."

His breaths start to come quicker and quicker, and he's sure she can hear his heart pounding in his chest. He doesn't want to look at her. He doesn't want to admit that he's falling apart, that he's losing control. But the coldness of the world outside, the bitterness that's settled in his bones, it's all her doing. It's her disapproval, and he can feel every ounce of it pressing in on him, suffocating him.

"Why?" he manages to whisper. "Why are you doing this?"

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Her smile returns, but it's colder now, a jagged curve that doesn't reach her eyes. "Because you pulled away from me," she says simply. "I didn't like that. And now you see what happens when you earn my disapproval."

The bus jerks to a stop, and the doors hiss open. The noise outside, the harsh wind, all of it floods in, a stark contrast to the oppressive quiet inside the bus. The light dims further, casting long, deep shadows across the seats.

She turns her gaze back to him, and for a moment, everything is still. Then she leans in closer, her breath warm against his ear. "You wanted to resist me, didn't you? You wanted to fight this. But I don't think you can. Not anymore."

He wants to scream, to shout at her, to push back, but the words stick in his throat. All he can do is sit there, crushed under the weight of her control. He realizes, with crushing clarity, that it's not just the world that's changed. It's him. He's broken, slipping into a world of cold, gray emptiness that she's created for him. The only way out is through her approval--and he's starting to realize that's the only thing that can save him.

With a barely perceptible tremor in his voice, he whispers, "I... I'm sorry."

Her lips curve into a small, satisfied smile. "Good boy," she purrs, and just like that, the world lightens again. The color returns to his face, the warmth seeps back into his limbs. His breath comes easier, and his chest feels full again--because of her.

The world is brighter, his mind racing, but before he can come to any conclusion, she slides a card into his hand. It's smooth, black, with only an address and a time written on it. No explanation, no instructions--just those two pieces of information.

Her eyes lock onto his, her voice soft but stern. "You'll be there," she says, not a question, but a command. "At exactly 7 p.m. tonight. You understand what happens if you don't show up, don't you?"

His fingers tremble around the card, and for a brief moment, he wonders if he could just throw it away, resist her completely. But as soon as the thought crosses his mind, the weight of the world presses down on him. The gloom returns, and he knows without a doubt that disobedience will only make it worse.

He nods, his throat tight, unable to voice the fear strangling him.

"Good," she says, a satisfied smile curling at her lips. "I'll see you then."

As the doors open and she starts to move toward them, Michael calls out, his voice rough with a mix of desperation and something else, something raw.

"Wait! What's your name?"

She pauses, glancing over her shoulder at him, eyes glinting with something else that unreadable. Her smile widens just slightly, and she tilts her head, the faintest glimmer of amusement in her expression.

"Mystic," she says, her voice soft but firm, as if the name itself is a title, a brand that belongs to her alone.

With a final, lingering look, she steps off the bus, leaving Michael sitting there, staring at the empty seat beside him, the weight of her name echoing in his mind.

And with it, the pull. The tug. The thread that will inevitably bring him back.

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