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The Neighbours Influence

The Neighbours Influence

by inytours
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Chapter One:

The first time Melissa saw Evan's face through the fluttering blinds, she assumed it was a trick of the late spring sun, just a glimmer, a shadow thrown through the slats. A coincidence. But then it kept happening.

Their neighborhood was the sort of place built on echoes: neatly spaced mailboxes, asphalt still warm from noon, the scent of barbecues and cut grass thick in the evenings. Melissa had lived on Winterberry Lane for six years. She'd married Mark two years into her accounting career, bought this two-story colonial nestled between hydrangea bushes and lilac trees, and if you'd asked her last month, she would have said she was content.

But Evan had moved in across the street, and now, nothing felt certain anymore.

He was younger, maybe early thirties. Tall, lean in the hips, with that kind of casual unshaved jaw and dusky olive skin that made every other man on the block look like an afterthought. He walked his German shepherd shirtless some afternoons, and Melissa, Melissa who never stared, Melissa who used to roll her eyes at the women at Bunco night, found herself watching through the kitchen window, chewing on the straw of her iced coffee like a girl in heat.

The first real encounter was innocent. A knock on the door, and there he was: olive button-up open just enough to show a peek of chest, mirrored sunglasses pushed up into a mane of thick black hair, his voice a smoky baritone that made her knees bend reflexively.

"Hey," he said, holding up a set of envelopes. "Think these are yours. Mailman's got dyslexia or something."

Melissa blinked. Took the letters. Her fingertips brushed his.

"Thanks," she said, tucking a piece of hair behind her ear. "I'm Melissa."

"I know," Evan said, his smile slow and sure. "You're the prettiest thing on this street."

Her face flushed immediately, heat blooming down her throat, pooling under her blouse. She laughed it off. Made a polite excuse and shut the door, only to lean back against it, heart drumming. Her panties were wet.

*

Two weeks later, he was in her kitchen.

He'd shown up unannounced again, just as she was wiping down the counters after Mark had gone off to work. He was working long hours lately, some finance merger or another, Melissa couldn't remember. Couldn't care.

"Morning," Evan said. "Hope you don't mind."

He held up a tray. Two steaming cappuccinos. No sugar, just a dusting of cocoa on the foam.

"I figured you'd prefer something a little better than what your husband probably makes."

She snorted, covering her smile. "Mark doesn't even touch the coffee machine."

"Of course not. Guys like him never do." Evan stepped inside without waiting for an invitation, set the tray down, and pulled out a chair like he belonged there. "You got a minute?"

Melissa hesitated, then found herself nodding. Sitting. Laughing too easily.

Evan asked about her job. Her hobbies. Her marriage. The way his eyes pinned hers made it hard to lie, even harder to speak in full truths. She said it was fine. That she and Mark were doing okay.

"Okay," Evan murmured. "That's a shame."

Melissa swallowed. His voice had dropped an octave. She wasn't sure if she liked the shiver it sent through her spine, or the wetness it brought again between her thighs.

Then came the first suggestion.

"You ever try guided breathing?" Evan asked, leaning back, legs sprawled, his fingers cradling the mug. "It helps calm the nerves. Lotta people underestimate how powerful breathwork can be. Especially... women under stress."

Melissa blinked. "Stress?"

Evan tilted his head. "You've got it in your shoulders. In your voice. Want to try?"

She gave a nervous laugh. "Now?"

"No time like the present," he said, voice as smooth as dark silk. "Trust me."

She nodded.

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"Close your eyes."

Melissa obeyed, slow, unsure.

"Inhale through your nose. Deep. Feel it in your chest, feel it spread into your belly. Hold it. Three... two... one... Now exhale through your mouth. Long. Controlled."

She obeyed. The room dimmed behind her eyelids. His voice filled the space.

"Again. Inhale... hold... exhale. Good girl."

The phrase pinged something primal. Good girl. A phrase her husband had never said.

"Feel yourself relaxing. Feel your arms go heavy. Legs soft. Head light."

Melissa exhaled. Her back slumped gently against the chair.

"That's it. Let me guide you."

And she did.

*

The next day he came back. And the next.

Sometimes he brought coffee. Sometimes fresh strawberries. Once, he handed her a little pink choker with a gold ring in the center, and she idiotically let him buckle it around her throat. "Just for fun," he said, eyes unreadable.

He kept doing the breathing sessions. Longer now. Deeper. Sometimes he'd snap his fingers, and she'd drop into a trance like her body had been trained to recognize his command. She stopped questioning it. Stopped thinking.

He never touched her, not at first. Just the voice, the commands, the way his presence filled the room and pressed her down into velvet compliance.

He used phrases she didn't understand but craved: "Soft minds make pretty girls." "Empty is elegant." "Let the thoughts drain, and let the pleasure replace them."

Each time she came out of it, she felt... different. Flushed. Giddy. Her thoughts came slower. Her eyes lingered longer in the mirror. Her lips looked plumper, her laugh sounded airier. She began humming Britney Spears songs while folding laundry, started wearing gloss again.

Mark noticed none of it.

Or if he did, he didn't care.

*

One afternoon, Evan leaned against the doorway as she bent to pick up a dropped spoon. Her tank top was tight. Braless. He clicked his tongue.

"Goddamn," he said.

Melissa glanced back over her shoulder, smiling sheepishly.

"You ever think about dyeing your hair?" he asked.

"What? Why?"

"I think you'd look incredible blonde."

She giggled. "I'd look ridiculous."

"Not if I say you wouldn't," he said. His voice dropped again. "Close your eyes."

She obeyed.

"Deep breath, baby. That's it. Breathe for me... good girl."

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Ten minutes later, when she blinked herself awake, she found a sticky note on the counter.

"Blonde. Soon."

She stared at it.

And smiled.

*

The first orgasm happened three days later.

He'd brought over a jade green dildo,Β Β Β sleek, vibrating, longer than her husband's cock, and held it up like a trophy.

"Trust me," Evan whispered, his hands on her hips. "You'll thank me later."

She was kneeling on the couch, ass up, head down, her brain already cotton-fluff soft from the last trance. She whined, grinding back as he circled the toy against her soaking slit.

"Say it," he said.

"P-please," she whispered. "Please..."

"Please what?"

"Please make me cum..."

The toy slid in.

She screamed.

And he made her hold the orgasm for over a minute, whispering affirmations into her ear the whole time.

*

The changes were faster after that.

She bleached her hair. Bought tighter dresses. Giggle-snorted in public. Texted Evan every day.

He never kissed her lips.

Never fucked her.

Yet.

But her mind was softening. Rewired. The spreadsheets and grocery lists were disappearing, replaced by a hunger to be told what to think, what to wear, what to want.

And every time he came over, she dropped to her knees without thinking. Obedience became instinct.

Evan didn't just fuck her body. He made love to her mind, one hypnotic command at a time.

She didn't care about her job.

Didn't care about Mark.

All she cared about was being perfect for Evan. Perfect. Pretty. Polished.

His bimbo.

And that was just the beginning.

continued in chapter 2.....

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