This is my first ever story, so any critiques or advice is greatly appreciated. Im trying to get a new chapter out every week. Everyone who is in my story that partakes in anything sexual is over 18 years old. I hope you enjoy.
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Chapter 1
It all started when I woke up in a strange new world. The icy stone floor that stings my cheek was the first clue that I wasn't in my usual bed that I've fallen asleep last night.
Opening my eyes I notice that I wasn't alone. There were over at least fifty other boys and girls in the room, all in various ages that are past 20 twenty years old. They all seem to be waking up like I am. That's when I notice that a few people were standing looking at us. They all wore obesdiean black robes, and few of them had long staffs in ther hands.
"Hello Heroes, welcome to the land of Astrodia" one of the people dressed on a black robed announced. He appeared to be older with his grey beard and wrinkles that follows the top of his head. He stood with confidence and hold a wooden staff in his hand the had spirals going down it.
"I'm sure you all are quite nervous and confused as to why you woke up in a random room with strangers" he looks around at all of us, seeming to enjoy having an audience of confused adults thats listening to his every word. "If you all just give me one moment of your time I will explain everything. "
"Explain?! Explain what exactly, that you and your creepy cult kidnapped all of us for some sick ritual" a girl with curly blonde hair yells standing at my right side.
She was wearing a two piece modest pink lingerie set, it's a little see through, but leaving nothing to the imagination. Her big perky breasts made the top peice rise showing her mid drift. Her hair doing what it can to hid the hardening nipples we all can see thanks to her set. She seemed to either forgotten what she had on or didn't care and liked to show off her body as she continues to yell at the old man.
"Don't you know who my father is! He'll send the whole army loo..." The old man slammed the bottom of his staff to the ground. We all stare wide eyed at he blonde. I dont know how but the old man seemed to have made her go mute. We see her trying to make any noise, but can't.
"As I was saying, if you give me a moment of your time I would like explain why you all have been summoned here, without any more interruptions." he looks around at everyone. No one says a thing, for afraid to end up mute like the girl before.
"My name is Asmadias, and you all have been summond to the land of Astrodia, more specifically, the grand kingdom of Lustrioia. You all have been summoned here in hopes to aid the kingdom in defeating the dark wizard Callum and the monsters he has created."
Adubile gasps fills the room as everyone's minds went racing with questions such as dark wizard, monsters, how.
"Settle down, settle down. I could venture a guess that all of you are worried about how you can possibly defeat monsters. Thanks to the stone summoning you all have been granted a gift."
'A gift?!' I look around me, as do others, searching for a weapon or a magical staff like the old man's, but there's nothing.
Asmadias continues "The gift you are searching for is not something material, but it's in here" the old man points to his heart. "All you have to do is think about it and it will reveal itself to you."
"Has the old man lost it?" I hear a guy behind me. I turn around
"Maybe, but it doesn't hurt to try right?" A girl, who seems to be in nothing but a long t-shirt responds, closing her eyes.
'She's right, it doesn't hurt anything.' I close my eyes trying anything, to think, to feel until I started feeling a tingle in my head. The feeling grew and grew until...
'Ding'
I open my eyes to see a menu bar, "Welcome Hereo". After reading another menu pop up.
Name: Noah Bensdile
Level:1
Class: Master Control (Control thoughts, feelings, and body of anyone you come in contact with)
HP: 45
Strength: 6
Agility:5
Intelligence:6
Speed: 5
Stamina: 5
MP: 50/50
LP: 0
Skills >
It's just like a game! There's hit points which is heath, the basic states of strength agility and what not, all with good spread, I can only guess. There's magic points and then 'LP'. What could LP mean?
Then there's my class, Master Control. I can control anyone who I come in contact with. I wonder if that means actually physical contact or if I can just see them? This could be a dangerous class, anyone could take over the kingdom, the world if they choose too.
I got a deep feeling that this class would be best kept a secret from the kingdom. I don't know what the rules are here but I could be killed for possessing such an powerful class. I need to think of a cover class until the times right where I know ill be safe.
I focus my eyes on the skills tab until it extending showing my skills.
Body manipulation: Once in physical contact you can change the aspect of anyone as long as the hosts is either acceptable to the change or their resistance isnt strong enough. Cost 2 MP
This could work, this skill could help me disguise myself as a healer, even though ill need to be in phsyical contact with someone first. I go to my next skill
Hypnosis: Once you make physical contact with a target you can hypnotize them. Cost 1 MP
So I do need physical connection with someone for all my skills. I wonder if it's possible to upgrade it in the future.
Passive skills>
Mind Suggestion. If you have a physical contact with some one you can plant suggestions into the targets mind. Won't work if the targets resistance is high.
"Wow this is crazy, it's like we are entirely in a video game!" The same guy behind me yells. There are murmurs of agreement as people around look straight ahead looking at their own class and skills.
I wonder if any of them got the master control class like me?
"You would be correct to look at this gift as a "Video Game" you all like to call it. It is how we manage roles in our world." He looks at his staff with pride. He must be a high class then, maybe a grand mage or something alike.