This is my first ever story, so any critiques or advice is greatly appreciated. Im trying to get a new chapter out every week. Everyone who is in my story that partakes in anything sexual is over 18 years old. I hope you enjoy.
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Chapter 1
It all started when I woke up in a strange new world. The icy stone floor that stings my cheek was the first clue that I wasn't in my usual bed that I've fallen asleep last night.
Opening my eyes I notice that I wasn't alone. There were over at least fifty other boys and girls in the room, all in various ages that are past 20 twenty years old. They all seem to be waking up like I am. That's when I notice that a few people were standing looking at us. They all wore obesdiean black robes, and few of them had long staffs in ther hands.
"Hello Heroes, welcome to the land of Astrodia" one of the people dressed on a black robed announced. He appeared to be older with his grey beard and wrinkles that follows the top of his head. He stood with confidence and hold a wooden staff in his hand the had spirals going down it.
"I'm sure you all are quite nervous and confused as to why you woke up in a random room with strangers" he looks around at all of us, seeming to enjoy having an audience of confused adults thats listening to his every word. "If you all just give me one moment of your time I will explain everything. "
"Explain?! Explain what exactly, that you and your creepy cult kidnapped all of us for some sick ritual" a girl with curly blonde hair yells standing at my right side.
She was wearing a two piece modest pink lingerie set, it's a little see through, but leaving nothing to the imagination. Her big perky breasts made the top peice rise showing her mid drift. Her hair doing what it can to hid the hardening nipples we all can see thanks to her set. She seemed to either forgotten what she had on or didn't care and liked to show off her body as she continues to yell at the old man.
"Don't you know who my father is! He'll send the whole army loo..." The old man slammed the bottom of his staff to the ground. We all stare wide eyed at he blonde. I dont know how but the old man seemed to have made her go mute. We see her trying to make any noise, but can't.
"As I was saying, if you give me a moment of your time I would like explain why you all have been summoned here, without any more interruptions." he looks around at everyone. No one says a thing, for afraid to end up mute like the girl before.
"My name is Asmadias, and you all have been summond to the land of Astrodia, more specifically, the grand kingdom of Lustrioia. You all have been summoned here in hopes to aid the kingdom in defeating the dark wizard Callum and the monsters he has created."
Adubile gasps fills the room as everyone's minds went racing with questions such as dark wizard, monsters, how.
"Settle down, settle down. I could venture a guess that all of you are worried about how you can possibly defeat monsters. Thanks to the stone summoning you all have been granted a gift."
'A gift?!' I look around me, as do others, searching for a weapon or a magical staff like the old man's, but there's nothing.
Asmadias continues "The gift you are searching for is not something material, but it's in here" the old man points to his heart. "All you have to do is think about it and it will reveal itself to you."
"Has the old man lost it?" I hear a guy behind me. I turn around
"Maybe, but it doesn't hurt to try right?" A girl, who seems to be in nothing but a long t-shirt responds, closing her eyes.
'She's right, it doesn't hurt anything.' I close my eyes trying anything, to think, to feel until I started feeling a tingle in my head. The feeling grew and grew until...
'Ding'
I open my eyes to see a menu bar, "Welcome Hereo". After reading another menu pop up.
Name: Noah Bensdile
Level:1
Class: Master Control (Control thoughts, feelings, and body of anyone you come in contact with)
HP: 45
Strength: 6
Agility:5
Intelligence:6
Speed: 5
Stamina: 5
MP: 50/50
LP: 0
Skills >
It's just like a game! There's hit points which is heath, the basic states of strength agility and what not, all with good spread, I can only guess. There's magic points and then 'LP'. What could LP mean?
Then there's my class, Master Control. I can control anyone who I come in contact with. I wonder if that means actually physical contact or if I can just see them? This could be a dangerous class, anyone could take over the kingdom, the world if they choose too.
I got a deep feeling that this class would be best kept a secret from the kingdom. I don't know what the rules are here but I could be killed for possessing such an powerful class. I need to think of a cover class until the times right where I know ill be safe.
I focus my eyes on the skills tab until it extending showing my skills.
Body manipulation: Once in physical contact you can change the aspect of anyone as long as the hosts is either acceptable to the change or their resistance isnt strong enough. Cost 2 MP
This could work, this skill could help me disguise myself as a healer, even though ill need to be in phsyical contact with someone first. I go to my next skill
Hypnosis: Once you make physical contact with a target you can hypnotize them. Cost 1 MP
So I do need physical connection with someone for all my skills. I wonder if it's possible to upgrade it in the future.
Passive skills>
Mind Suggestion. If you have a physical contact with some one you can plant suggestions into the targets mind. Won't work if the targets resistance is high.
"Wow this is crazy, it's like we are entirely in a video game!" The same guy behind me yells. There are murmurs of agreement as people around look straight ahead looking at their own class and skills.
I wonder if any of them got the master control class like me?
"You would be correct to look at this gift as a "Video Game" you all like to call it. It is how we manage roles in our world." He looks at his staff with pride. He must be a high class then, maybe a grand mage or something alike.
"You all have been given an random class and in a moment you will be filtered through these double doors where we have our best field strategist. Their jobs are to take your names and classes to help us better get an overview of all of you, so we can put you in parties. The combatitive classes will be greatly compensated in our adventure guild while for those who end up having a working class we will be provided jobs."
So depending on what classes people got, they are either fighting the magical creatures or working in their designated class. I'm glad that I got a combative class I could make up.
"Once you have finished with the field strategist you will be taken to a private room here in the castle until tomorrow morning, where you will meet her majesty and be given your duties." He tapped his staff once on the ground and immediately the two giant doors behind me open up leading to a great hall.
"This is such bull" the blonde girl with the pink see-through lingerie began talking again. I Kinda of wish the old man kept his mute magic on her. She's great to look at but personality wise, not the best. A thought crosses my minf 'I wonder if I could change that?'
Everyone began filling through the double doors only to be wisk away to different rooms by people in black mitiltary type uniforms. Im guessing they are the field strategist the old man mentioned.
"Over here sir" in the corner of my eye I saw one of the field strategist trying to flag me down. The field strategist was a short petite girl the black shoulder length hair. She was wearing the usual military top as every strategist but instead of gray trousers she wore a black skirt with over the knee stockings.
"Hello" I say as I approach her.
She looked me up and down and gave me a judgemental look, she was already assessing me and didn't like me already. "Right through this door sir"
Walking in the room, it looked liked some sort of counselors office. There was a green couch on oneside of the room with a black arm chair on the other. The shelves on the side are all filled with different books. There on the opposite wall was another door that I would guess take me to another hallway. 'How big is this castle anyway?'
"Have a seat sir" she says codly as she points at the couch. As she turns around to close the door I was able to get a good view of her tight butt. I could even see a bit of her thigh between her skirt and stockings. Even though she has a petite figure she sure does take good care of her asset.
"If you could start by telling me your name, class, and skills that you have acquired." She sits down in the chair opposite of me. Her stormy grey eyes studying, trying to see what I am capable of.
She has no clue what I can do.
"My name is Noah Bensdile, my class is Healer, and so far my skills involves healing as long as I'm in physical contact" I lied. Healer was the only class I could think of that could be viable in a party.
"Hmmhmm" was the only thing she said as she wrote on a peice of paper.
I really am not liking her attitude. Seems like there is a stick stuck up in her tight butt. Maybe there is a way I could change that?
She looks up from her clipboard, "is that it?"
"Uhh, yeah?" Was the only thing I could say.
"Usually healers would have a bit more versatility in there skills and passive skills" she scoffs as she rolls her eyes.
Yep definitely doing something to change that.
"Well that is the only thing that pops up on my status screen, so yeah"
"Okay that's all I need, you'll exit through the door on the other side where a maid will show you to your room" she stands to make here away a file.
"Well thank you for your time Miss..." I stand holding my hand out hoping she'll take the bait.
She looks at me with an agitated expression, like I'm below her to even know her name. "It's Brierer, Sarah Brierer".
There was a pause like she was deciding to either shake my hand or just walk away, luckliy she relented and went for the former.